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The first sentence, then fold a wider lotus leaf, wrap a piece of moonlight, go back, go back, sandwiched in Tang poems, flattened, like pressed acacia. ——In the afterglow
Analysis: Create an aesthetic artistic conception, and render emotions by portraying a certain picture. Imitation theme: Time is irretrievable, the sunset sinks, the sun goes round and round, faintly diffuse, the wind and insects are intertwined, gently to the time that cannot be kept.
The second sentence, my heart is the wind chimes hanging on the eaves of the seven-story tower, ding and ding, one after another, knocking on a person's name. In the afterglow
Analysis: Using metaphorical techniques, the integration of things and feelings, alternating the length of sentences, imitating the theme, parting sorrows, parting thoughts, like the willows on the embankment in late spring.
The breeze caresses the branches and leaves, entwining with the beauty that is about to pass away.
The third sentence is that death is not the loss of life, but the departure of time. ——Yu Hua
Analysis: Cold and sharp metaphor, emphasizing emotion with a turning sentence. Imitation theme: When the dialectic succeeds, it is not a sneer at the opponent who is crushed by reality, but a soul that is trapped in the heart.
In the fourth sentence, the curling acacia burned into green smoke, which was strong in wine, and the fragrant and rushing star pattern was crumbling. ——Zheng Chouyu
Analysis: Metaphor writes melancholy, uses anthropomorphism to give life to the stars, and presents nostalgia vividly and lively. Imitation theme: Feeling the splendid years, the past years are fireworks, the paint has been splashed, maybe it is a gorgeous and messy night, and I have fallen into memories when I see it.
The fifth sentence, the world is emotionalMidsummer。White porcelain plum soup, crushed ice hitting the wall when the sound is loud. - Mu Xuanying is in charge.
Analysis: Refine the picture with the breath of life, imitate the theme: childhood, intellectual childhood is not but the aged pu fan that shakes gently at night.
Crickets are funny chirping.
The sixth sentence, the girlIf it is a small violin, the sound must be disordered. The girl's sleeves, the wind does not blow, if it is trueGyokuroand they will scatter to the grass. - Yumeji Takehisa.
Analysis, superimposing metaphors and ranking ratios, highlighting the characteristics of the characters. Imitate the theme, portray the handsome young man, the young man's eyebrows and eyes can not be frivolous, if it is warm sun and ice and snow, it must melt, the young man's voice, weeping willows.
Listen too, if it is really a spring breeze, the blue waves will ripple.
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For Mom, the whole world is like an unsewn quilt, the cotton wool will always be exposed, and her worries are like needles, trying to put up those terrible cracks one by one; In the world, the spring rain and apricot blossoms fall sharply, and the carriages and horses walk slowly; After awakening, I don't know that on the bright moon, I am full of flowers and shadows; The trance of reading a similar passage, the awakening of the sense of taste aroused by drinking a cold drink outside, or the sigh of untraceable sorting of old clothes. These trivialities derived from you have merged into a gentle and distant river of light in the white night of several years.
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Read more, read more, learn more knowledge, when writing sentences, there must be pictures in your mind, good words need to have a sense of pictures, and they will be intriguing; Usually you have to learn more about knowledge, read more books, read more classic sentences and quotations, and learn other people's writing techniques, and skillfully use rhetoric to enhance the sense of picture.
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We need to have a large vocabulary and language expression ability and logical thinking ability, we can use some adjective modification and creative techniques to make our words have a deep sense of picture; We need to accumulate more, enhance our literary skills, be able to observe life in detail and have a strong associative ability.
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The so-called picture sense means that reading an article is like looking at a painting, and it is also what "there is a picture in the text" as it is said in article science
The following 4 groups of sentences are all B with a more "picture sense".
1. The sea rushes towards the embankment from a great distance. b. The sea began to pose from a long distance, arching its back, like a Spanish bull desperately rushing towards the embankment.
2. a. After a busy job, the girl also began to feel a little homesick. b. After a busy job, the girl likes to climb to the top floor alone, facing the direction of home, to read the wild goose array and watch the sunset.
3. A. Under the afterglow of the sunset, the grass and the breeze, the big white rabbit of the doorman lay in the grass, looking at the sky. b. Under the afterglow of the sunset, the green grass and the breeze swayed, and the round white rabbit of the doorman lay obediently in the grass, staring at the magnificent sky painted with oil paint.
4. A quick knock on the door woke him from his sleep. He began to get scared ......b, bang, bang, bang! Bang, bang, bang!
A quick, rhythmic knock on the door woke him from his slumber. Who's knocking on the door? What the hell is going on?
Mom and Dad are back?Is it ......Thinking of this, his heart rose to his throat, as if he still had the posture of jumping out.
It can be seen that sentences with a sense of picture have the following characteristics:
1. Use rhetoric skillfully to enhance the sense of picture. 2. Image description, highlighting the sense of picture. 3. Use verbs and adjectives to create a sense of picture. 4. Onomatopoeia creates the environment, and writes a sense of living pictures.
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Words are most afraid of abstraction, and abstraction will lead to boredom, so we have to chase the sense of picture. And this, using more nouns and verbs can do it. Nouns will tell you "what", verbs will tell you "how".
A lot of ad copy is to use verbs and nouns to implant a picture in your head, and when you encounter the corresponding scene, this picture appears. For example, "Drink Red Bull when you are sleepy and tired", "Chew Yida after eating and drinking", "No, this is your Yida" and so on. But most of our writing habits since childhood have been to pile up adjectives in a flashy way, and it may have become a part of the subconscious.
Therefore, you need to often take out the articles you have written, deliberately correct them, and practice them deliberately.
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Every bit is love.
Send it again.
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There are blood-red Baozhu camellia in the snow field, a single-petaled plum blossom in white and hidden green, and a wax plum blossom in the deep yellow chimeThere are also cold green weeds underneath the snow. Hu Die really didn't;Whether the bees came to pick the honey of the camellia and plum blossoms, I can't really remember. But I could see the winter flowers blooming in the snow, and there were many bees flying busily, and I could hear them buzzing.
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A smooth, unwrinkled line segment.
Scratch over the ground.
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2. I envy the eyes of the people in the café on the street, and after only a flash, I feel that the sun and moon are long and the mountains and rivers are safe.
Yu Qiuyu. 3. Your eyes are the Milky Way galaxy, and your breath is like the wind rising from the waves.
Ardak.
4. If you survive this hurdle, you can enter less, enter again and be sleepy, and then work hard to have a prosperous and diligent day.
"Zeng Guofan's Family Motto".
5. The sycamore falls, and it is still autumn and lonely.
Li Qingzhao. 6. People have three thousand diseases in life and old age, and only lovesickness cannot be cured.
7. I know that the moonlight will not stay for me, and I know that the summer breeze is always short, but I will still run hard for the sporadic light.
Ode to a low brow. 8. You will wait for me. Because, I made myself wait for you for a long time.
"Last Year in Marienbad".
9. When you are young, you think you have the answer to why, but when you are old, you may feel that there is no so-called answer in life.
"Fallen Angels".
10. It is not enough for a person to have this life, he should also have a poetic world.
Wang Xiaobo. 11. I don't have many clear memories, but it just so happens that every fragment has you.
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1. Legend has it that people in the North Pole are frozen because of the cold, and as soon as they speak, they will turn into ice and snow, and the other party can't hear them, so they have to go home and roast them slowly. 2. The occasional joy, enlightenment, and spiritual light of life are like doves and sparrows that suddenly come to our window, and when they fly away, I just need to keep that joy. Third, a pair of cloth shoes, the breeze is free, I have a pearl, shining through the mountains and rivers.
Fourth, I'm not unhappy, but there's nothing to be particularly happy about.
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What are the words and sentences that describe a strong sense of picture and are very real.
The desert is lonely and straight - five words, the scene is like a painting, and it gives us a lot of information.
Also: the long smoke and sunset are closed in a lonely city. The picture is strong enough.
Most of the ancient poems in our country are not only integrated into the blood of the Chinese, but also the reason for this is that they are beautiful and shocking.
Not too old poems: "Farewell" outside the long pavilion, by the ancient road, the grass is green. The evening breeze blows the willow flute, and the sunset is outside the mountain. The end of the sky, the corner of the earth, the acquaintance is half scattered ......A pot of turbid wine is full of joy, don't dream cold tonight.
A bit of an old poem: "Sending Yuan Er Envoy Anxi" Weicheng is light and dusty, and the guest house is green and willow-colored. Persuade you to have a glass of wine, and there is no reason to go out of Yangguan in the west.
Make it to the plug "The desert is lonely, and the sun sets on the long river.
Quatrain" two yellow orioles singing green willows, a line of egrets on the blue sky. The window contains a thousand autumn snow in Xiling, and the door is berthed in the Dongwu Wanli ship.
Especially the last two, although there are no words with very prominent images such as light dust, residual flute, and turbid wine, they combine the most beautiful artistic conception and picture scroll with a sense of time and space in color, straightness, depth, distance and proximity.
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Nothing will be forgotten and nothing will be lost. The universe itself is a vast and boundless memory system. If you look back, you will see that the world is constantly beginning.
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You're still very good-looking, it looks like a very strong sense of picture, I don't know if it's filmed.
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Sentences that praise the picture.
Chinese painting takes "qi" as its own characteristic of existence, and "qi" constitutes the foundation of Chinese painting, and there is an inevitable connection between water and air, and there are multiple channels of mutual transformation. The transformation of water into gas is not only a physical imagination of nature, but also an implicit variation of the unique variation of Chinese painting art. It is not only a kind of artistic creation, but also a consignment of the unity of heaven and man. Water, as an object and as a composition, is directly connected with the qi veins of Chinese painting, so that Chinese painting finally has a qi pattern.
After the water dries up on the Songzhi rice paper, the traces left behind it constitute a completely "transparent" painting, a blank painting of water that is completely different from Western painting.
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