Advantages and disadvantages of essay reviews in the first year of junior high school, how to write

A collection of wonderful essay correction comments.

1. Contents: 1The content is close to modern life, novel and chic, grasps the pulse of the times, and shows the atmosphere of the times.

2.The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, and the narrative is orderly and not chaotic.

3.The details are appropriate, the priorities are clear, and the thinking is clear.

Carefully selected, the materials seem to be tailor-made for the theme.

4.The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and realistic, the characters have distinct and prominent personalities, and the images are plump and vivid.

5.The mood of the characters is set off by the environment, the scenes are blended, the feelings are in the scene, and the scene is present with the scene.

6.The imagination is rich, the idea is peculiar and does not detach from the reality of life, and the association with life broadens the reader's thinking and makes people feel vivid and interesting.

7.The description of the scenery is vivid and realistic, the words and sentences are appropriate and decent, the scenery is born with the feelings, and the scenes are blended, which is presented in front of the reader just like a vivid and affectionate sketch.

8.Imagination is wonderful, not only from life, without losing the truth of life, but also higher than life, broadening the reader's horizons, full of artistic charm.

9.The description of the course of events is detailed and specific, and although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly and orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and ability to plan the layout of the article.

10.The description of the appearance is vivid and vivid, the characters have realistic faces and are properly dressed, just like a mirror reflecting the character's personality, which is really the so-called "life by nature".

11.The description of the environment is objective and realistic, and the environment serves the character of the character, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the character's character.

12.The description of the demeanor is vivid and expressive, with a few words, outlining the character characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the characters' speech and demeanor have a distinct and unique personality.

13.The content is not closely related enough, and some of the content is too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.

14.The narrative is sketchy and crude, with only a framed structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality traits.

15.The detailed arrangement is not appropriate, and the priorities are not clear enough.

16.The content is mostly outlined in the form of lines, and there is a lack of detailed depiction in the form of points.

5.It does not match the atmosphere of the times, and the content is too old and old.

How to evaluate the quality of an essay?

1. An essay should always have a theme, a positive and healthy topic, and the topic should reflect the reality of the situation as much as possible.

The narrative must be able to serve the main purpose and be fluent.

If multiple events can be used to serve a theme, the events should be narrated in a certain order and in connection. - The basic criteria for a good note-taking essay.

2. A successful writer must have an appropriate theme, and the character image created should be representative, and he should be able to skillfully use various methods to portray the character image.

4. To write an excellent scene composition, it must always be a little face-to-face, a combination of points and faces, highlight the key points, and write the atmosphere; The hierarchy is clear and methodical.

5. To evaluate a piece of prose, we should first understand the characteristics of the prose, that is, "the form is scattered but the spirit is not scattered", that is, the freedom of form is not restricted, but the center of the article is clear.

Prose is divided into narrative prose and lyrical prose. a. If you encounter a narrative, it depends on whether it reflects real social life or whether it expresses the author's sense of love and shame. b. If you encounter lyrical ones, it depends on whether it expresses the author's feelings and wishes for real life, and whether it can touch the reader's heart.

Pay attention to the way of prose expression, a successful prose should be able to use the scene to express lyricism or support words or direct expression of the heart.

Language must be concise, concise, and vivid, with short sentences as the mainstay, not long sentences, and more metaphors, dualities, and contrasts.

6. A good expository essay can enable the reader to have an in-depth understanding of all aspects of the things being explained after reading it.

Explanatory texts should use more explanatory methods.

The language of the expository essay must be accurate, concise, popular, and vivid.

7. Discussion is an article based on argumentation and reasoning. The article should reflect the author's propagated views and propositions, criticize or refute certain words and deeds, explain the reason, and achieve the goal of persuading others. If the reader still has doubts after reading it and is still dissatisfied with the author's point of view, then the article is not successful enough.

There should be arguments, arguments, and arguments. a. The argument should be clear and of practical significance. b. Arguments should be realistic and able to serve the argument. c. Argumentation methods should be used more to achieve the role of service arguments.

8. **Have a complete storyline. The environment is depicted to portray typical characters, and the image is used to reflect social life.

Try to be as concise as possible. It is necessary to express the theme around a central idea, what to praise, what to praise, what to oppose, and what to criticize, and it is necessary to take a clear-cut stand, and there must be no ambiguity between right and wrong, love and hatred.

9. The language of successful poetry is concise, beautiful, and vivid, and in addition to rhyming, it should also give readers room for imagination, and the poem should also be strongly lyrical.

1.The article is coherent and forms a complete image.

2.The language of the article is fresh and refreshing, the description can grasp the important characteristics of things, and the length is short and concise, which is worth reading.

3.The content is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

4.The article is detailed and slight, the words are orderly, and the content is vivid and concrete, which can be regarded as a masterpiece.

5.The close-up shots are not vivid and full of interest. The full text is full of childlike innocence and childlike fun, and it feels very intimate to read.

6.The article can be described in fresh and flavorful language. Between the lines, it is full of childhood childlike fun, and the laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.

7.The details are appropriate, and the virtual and the real are the two major features, and the content is richer and more vivid.

8.The full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, and it is worth borrowing.

9.The language of the whole text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and twisty, as if bringing the reader into a happy paradise, which makes people dance.

10.The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

11.The full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.