A song that I wrote myself, please give some suggestions 20

I changed a few words, I don't know if it's good or not...

Would it be nice to give me a piano?

Listen to the sounds of winter and the melody of memories that have you.

Listen to the beauty of the blossoming flowers and the parting of the fallen leaves miss you.

Give me a guitar and let me command.

Give me a piano and let me experience it.

The rain in June is the prelude to summer.

The winds of October are the hands of autumn.

January snow I love because of you.

July days I like because I miss you.

If it's okay to give me a guitar, I don't know.

Would it be good to give me a piano, I'm looking for it.

Give me a guitar and let me command.

Give me a piano and let me play.

The rain in June is the prelude to summer.

The winds of October are the hands of autumn.

January snow I love because of you.

July days I like because I miss you.

If it's okay to give me a guitar, I don't know.

Would it be good to give me a piano, I'm looking for it.

Listening to the sounds of winter should be replaced by listening to the sounds of flowers or listening to the sounds of snow.

Personal advice only, don't scold if it's not good!!

It's pretty good, you can try to find someone who can compose and turn it into a song.

Look at the lyrics are a relatively gentle song, hehe.

I think the rhyme is a little bit monotonous.

Too much "you" and too much "playing".

Hope to improve Leave a QQ and I'll compose a song for you.

It's too symmetrical, I don't like it very much, hehe.

Just the words, if you don't send a recording, let's listen to it.

A guitar is not very good to describe as a conductor, by the way, if you can get the *** up and listen to it again, you will know better which direction to change.

Don't rhyme! More "talented" than me!

I want to write a song for Spring.

The beauty of spring, the cosy gentleness of spring.

The spring breeze is refreshing.

The warmth of the sun penetrates through the leaves that glow with fresh green.

Ride on country lanes.

Unknown flowers on the side of the road swayed and flickered.

Smell the tour to get the taste of spring.

Yes, that's spring.

The stepping hall is covered with the footsteps of spring.

Everything is bright and hopeful.

Everywhere is bright and clean new green, purple and red.

A world of new dressing and grinding.

I want to write a song for spring.

There are no lyrics. Mood is the most beautiful note.

Whatever you want, hum.

A good time to be free and happy.

Embracing authenticity, happiness is a song.

The clear water of the river is long.

Ride on country lanes.

Feel it. The taste of spring.

Forgive me for my laziness, the draft written during the Qingming period has not been revised, and I transcribe it today. Hopefully, worthy of spring. )

Where are the fallen leaves going with the wind?

Leave only the sky beautiful.

The sound of the dance.

Like angel wings.

Crossing my happy past.

Where love has been.

The fragrance of yesterday remains.

That familiar warmth.

Like angel wings.

Across my boundless heart.

I'm sure you're still here.

Never left.

My love watches over you like an angel.

If life ends here.

Since then, there has been no me.

I will find an angel to love you for me.

Where love has been.

The fragrance of yesterday remains.

That familiar warmth.

Like angel wings.

Across my boundless heart.

I'm sure you're still here.

Never left.

My love watches over you like an angel.

If life ends here.

Since then, there has been no me.

I will find an angel to love you for me.

I'm sure you're still here.

Never left.

My love watches over you like an angel.

If life ends here.

Since then, there has been no me.

I will find an angel to love you for me.

I will find an angel to love you for me.

Burn memories. Suddenly it rained, drowning your trails.

I searched hard, but I couldn't find your return date.

I stood where I was, letting the rain line tilt itself.

Tears slipped down his lips, and he didn't admit that he would cry.

Without you around, it's like a fish out of water.

Faint thoughts, breathing hard.

The more I miss you, the more chills my heart gets.

Only the burning memories to warm the cold body.

Burning memories, grief and brilliance.

Broken happiness is mixed with the sweetness of pain.

A little warmth is just superfluous at this moment.

I want to forget desperately, but the rain is crying.

Burning memories, sadness scattered all over the ground.

The weak strength melts into an illusory blur.

Float with the wind and fade away in the rain.

I want to forget it, but it's still clear.

.First you have to make sure that you sing well or not, and then you have to make sure that she thinks you are handsome, and then you can do it.

"You in the Distance" - Words: Xiao Tingting gave it to Xiao Fangzi.

When love turns pale.

But you suddenly broke into the dark night of me.

A chicken in the left hand, oops! Not bad. A duck in the right hand. Awesome, with a fat doll on my back. End of hope.