Sentences that require a lot of revision!

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Original sentence: Although you study well, there is no reason to be proud.

Modified to: No matter how good you study, you have no reason to lose your pride.

Analysis: The sick sentence belongs to the improper collocation of related words. The original sentence uses "although, but" is incorrect, modify it to:"Even if, too", the modified sentence is: No matter how good you are, you have no reason to be arrogant.

The collocation of the modification of the sick sentence is not bridged:1. Improper collocation of related words.

2. The definite sentence is not properly matched with the central word (subject and object).

3. Improper matching of moving guests.

4. Improper subject-verb collocation.

5. Improper matching of the host and guest.

6. Improper matching of dynamic supplements.

7. The adverbial is not properly matched with the central word (predicate).

8. One side and two sides are not properly matched.

Modifying a sick sentence refers to modifying a sentence with a speech problem so that it does not change the original meaning and the sentence is more fluent.

1. Methods of modifying language sentences:

1. There is a way to modify the sick sentence, and it is generally necessary to follow the order of "one reading, two finding, three changes and four checks".

2. Read through the sentence and figure out the original meaning of the original sentence. The original meaning refers to the main meaning of the original sentence. The premise of modifying a sick sentence is that the original meaning of the original sentence cannot be changed, and only by clarifying the original meaning of the sentence can it be corrected.

3. Second, find and determine the illness of the sentence. To modify the sick sentence, you must first find the symptom of the sentence and determine **. In general, we can help find the symptoms based on the common causes of several kinds of sick sentences that we have learned.

4. Three changes, the right medicine. According to the symptoms and causes of the sentence, after careful consideration, use methods such as addition, deletion, adjustment, and substitution, and start to correct the wrong places.

5. Fourth, check that you have to reread it once or twice after changing it to see if there are any faults that have been modified, whether the modification is appropriate, and whether the original meaning of the sentence has been maintained.

2. Types of general language sentences:

1. Defective ingredients. A complete sentence should be complete with "branches and leaves" and a complete and clear meaning.

2. Improper use of words. Misuse of words means that the words used in the sentence are not in context, or words with similar meanings or even opposites.

3. Improper matching. A pair of words in a sentence that cannot be collocated or violates linguistic conventions is a mismatch.

4. Semantic repetition. Semantic repetition refers to the simultaneous use of two or more Liang juyi words with similar or identical meanings in a sentence, resulting in the repetition of the meaning of the sentence.

5. Improper classification. Misclassification refers to putting things together that do not belong to the same genus.

1. Misword: "gushing" could be replaced by "fluent" or "methodical".

2 punctuation: "Some practice alone," comma to ellipsis; "Journey to the West" was changed to "Journey to the West".

After the revision of Huiyuan: During the morning class, the "Love My China" reading exchange meeting was held before the six (3rd) group collapse class. Before the start, everyone was preparing carefully, some discussing with their tablemates, and some practicing ...... aloneChen Xia first introduced the book "Journey to the West" to her classmates, and everyone felt that her speech was very orderly.

May it help you!

1."pattern" and "situation" are duplicated, and one should be deleted.

2."Origin" is a metaphor for the origin and development of things, and it is not appropriate to use it here, it should be changed to "source".

3.If there is no object center word collocated with "develop", "activity" should be added after "SMS".

4.The order of "development" and "inheritance" is inappropriate, and "inheritance" should be followed by "development".

Therefore, the full text should be changed to: "Singing red songs, reading classics, telling stories, and passing on proverbs" A new pattern of mass cultural activities is taking shape in our city. Creating and sending red text messages has become a common practice.

Bayu culture and Hongyan culture are the source of creating red text messages, and inspiring Chongqing people to create is to stimulate Chongqing people's identification with their own culture. By carrying out the red SMS campaign, we can further improve the quality of Chongqing citizens while inheriting and developing culture.

Pattern Situation Remove a Incentive should be changed to Encouragement can be followed by the lack of ingredients Boost changed to improve 1Becoming a trend is a derogatory term, and it has become a trend. 2.Incentives are replaced by encouragement. 3.Inherit first, then develop.

4.Carry out a "campaign" to send red text messages

5.Delete the word "situation" after the word "new pattern".

Pattern: The situation removes one Incentive should be changed to encouragement, which can be followed by the lack of ingredients, and the promotion should be changed to improve.

1.Becoming a trend is a derogatory term, and it has become a trend. 2.Incentives are replaced by encouragement. 3.Inherit first, then develop.

4.Carry out a "campaign" to send red text messages

5.Delete the word "situation" after the word "new pattern".

I'm a fresh graduate this year.,I didn't take the test to correct the sentence this year.,The syllabus requires only 5 points for it.,Follow the teacher in class.,It's no problem to ask shamelessly after class.。