There are cases where some characters need to revise their own works

1. Once, Jia Dao rode a donkey and broke through the official road. He was pondering a poem called "Title Li Ning's Secluded Residence", the whole poem is as follows: Idle living with few neighbors, grass path into the deserted garden.

The bird stays in the tree by the pool, and the monk knocks on the door under the moon. Cross the bridge to divide the wild colors, move the stones and move the cloud roots. Coming here for the time being, the tryst is worth it.

But he has one thing that he can't decide, that is, he thinks that the "push" in the second sentence of "the bird stays in the tree by the pond, and the monk pushes the moon down the door" should be replaced with "knock". But he felt that "knocking" was also a bit inappropriate, and it was better to "push". I don't know if it's better to "knock" or "push".

His mouth was muttering while scrutinizing.

Unknowingly, he rode a donkey into the honor guard of the great official Han Yu (one of the eight masters of the Tang and Song dynasties). Han Yu asked Jia Dao why he broke into his honor guard. Jia Dao read the poem he made to Han Yu, but he couldn't decide whether to use "push" or "use" in one of the sentences"Knock "Good things are said again."

Han Yu listened and said to Jia Dao: "I think it's better to use 'knock', even in the dead of night, visiting friends, and knocking on the door means that you are a polite person!" And a 'knock' word makes the night quieter and a little louder.

Besides, it reads louder," Jia Dao nodded in praise after hearing this.

Not only was he not punished this time, but he also made friends with Han Yu. Since then, scrutiny has become a common word used to make a popular word, used as a metaphor for pondering and considering repeatedly when making an article or doing things.

2. One day, Maupassant heard a few stories from his neighbors, and they thought they were fresh and vivid, so he planned to write ** on the basis of these stories. But I was a little unsure in my heart, so I ran to Flaubert for advice. After telling the story in front of his mentor, he put forward his opinion:

These stories are rich enough to write a work. ”

Then expect the opinion of the master. Flaubert looked at the pious young man and said, "I think it would be better for you not to write these stories, but I hope you will do this exercise, go out for a walk on horseback, and come back in an hour or two, and write down everything you see." ”

Maupassant listened to his mentor and dismissed the idea of listening to other people's stories to write a story, and rode out for a run as his mentor had said, and came back to write what he had seen and heard. He practiced this method for a year, and finally wrote a famous short story ** "Dim Sum ".

In the second year of the reign of Emperor Xining of the Song Dynasty (1069), after Wang Anshi became the prime minister, he was determined to reform and implement a new law, but was resolutely opposed by the big landlords and big bureaucrats, and was dismissed within a few years. He was bored in the capital, and decided to go back to Nanjing to see his wife and children.

In the spring of the second year, Wang Anshi went south from Bianjing to Yangzhou, and then took a boat west back to Jinling (Nanjing, Jiangsu Province), and when he passed through Jingkou (Zhenjiang City, Jiangsu Province) to Guazhou, which was across the river, the boat docked at the wharf and did not go anymore. He stood on the bow of the boat, looking westward, but saw that the green mountains were faint, the river was surging, the spring breeze was green, the bright moon was in the sky, and he was touching the scene, and he missed the relatives of Jinling Zhongshan (also known as Purple Mountain) even more. He walked into the ship, took out a pen and paper, and after a little thought, he wrote a poem entitled "Docking the Boat Guazhou":

Jingkou Guazhou is a water, Zhongshan is only separated by a few mountains.

The spring breeze has come to the south bank of the river again, when will the bright moon shine on me?

After writing, Wang Anshi felt that the word "to" in "the spring breeze and the south bank of the Green River" was too dead, and he couldn't see what the scene was when the spring breeze arrived in the south of the Yangtze River, and lacked poetry. Later, after thinking about it, I felt that the word "pass" was inappropriate. Although the word "pass" is more vivid than the word "to", it writes the dynamics of the spring breeze passing by, but it is still not enough to express the eagerness of wanting to return to Jinling.

So the word "pass" was circled and changed to the word "in" and "full". After changing it more than ten times, Wang Anshi still did not find the word he was most satisfied with. He felt a little headache, so he stepped out of the cabin to enjoy the scenery and give his mind a break.

Wang Anshi walked to the bow of the boat, looking at the south of the Yangtze River, the spring breeze blowing, the grass swaying, the wheat waves undulating, it looks more vibrant, the scenery is picturesque. He felt refreshed, and suddenly saw the spring grass green, this "green" word, isn't it the word I was looking for? The word "green" expresses the vibrant and spring-like moving scene of the entire Jiangnan.

Thinking of this, Wang Anshi was so unhappy, he hurriedly ran into the cabin, took out another piece of paper, and changed the sentence "the spring breeze to the south bank of the Yangtze River" in the original poem to "The spring breeze and the south bank of the green river".

In order to highlight the hard-won word "green" that he repeatedly scrutinized, Wang Anshi specially wrote "green" a little bigger, which is very eye-catching.

The word "green" makes the whole poem very colorful, and the whole poem comes alive. This "green" word has become what later generations call the "poetic eye". Later, many articles on refining characters took him as an example.

Happy New Year, I wish you a high step, a wide range of financial resources and success.

You were the first to adopt me today, so I was a little excited.

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I will always be at the forefront to solve your problems and solve problems, and I can't wait for you.

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Thank you for your great kindness Good people have a safe life.

Jia Island modified the poem The monk knocked on the door of the moon or the monk pushed the door of the moon. . .

I don't know, I really don't know about this.

1. Cao Xueqin worked hard in the difficult and difficult circumstances, "read it for ten years, added and deleted it five times", and created the immortal realist masterpiece "Dream of Red Mansions". 2. Docking Guazhou" Wang Anshi Jingkou Guazhou is a water, and Zhongshan is only separated by a few mountains. The spring breeze is on the south bank of the Green River, when will the bright moon shine on me?

Hatsuyun: 'To the south bank of the river again'. The word 'to' is circled, and the note is 'not good', which is changed to 'pass', and the circle is changed to 'enter'.

Rotate to 'full'. If it is ten words, it will be 'green'. The author believes that the words "to", "over", "into", and "full" are not ideal, and only the word "green" is the most vigilant.