I want to save my love, so I made a hidden poem and asked for a revision super difficult! I want t

It has been recited through the ages that love deeply, and the pony will always love the leaves. Instead.

Eternal recitation of deep love, pony leaves of the world. What do you think?

I'm sorry to move your 'first word'. I think it's more comfortable to read it this way if you take out the 'head' and read it. 'Couplet' is very particular about 'neatness'.

In addition, there are words 'overlapping' in the 'couplet', which is not easy to write. Go for it! Or get rid of overlapping words.

Want to produce a boutique? Just make one more 'immature' opinion, see the laughter!

1.Because there is no 'rhyme', there is no 'taste' in reading. To set a 'rhyme', the 'finals' of the last word of the first sentence should be the same.

2.Since you are 'hiding' in the 'couplet' style, only 7*2=14 (sentences). It always felt like something wasn't right.

See if you can do this: the eighth sentence is not hidden, but the meaning of the first seven sentences of 'emphasis or advancement' is written;In the sixteenth sentence, there is no "hidden", and the meaning of "happiness or summary and outlook" is written in, and it becomes 16 sentences. In this way, it seems to be 'far' from your state of mind, but close to 'poetry'.

'Win-win' is the end of 'hard work'.

Looking forward to your work!

The horses are galloping, and the leaves are flying on the trees.

Good sentence, good sentence!

I don't know the moon when I am a small step - I am shocked by the autumn pool.

Forever cherish the kindness of your relatives - always warm your heart.

You can understand it.

Drink in front of thousands of homes - a thousand years is a sight.

The ancient wood contains the wind for a long time - the ancient stone whispers lowly.

Leaf frost is the sky - leaf fall is sweet.

Love is a sad fairy tale Anyone who has read it has left regrets to a greater or lesser extent, when we finish reading, we will understand a truth, that is, in the world of love, fate dominates everything, if there is fate, time and space are not distances. If you don't have a chance, you can't understand even if you get together, so let's let everything go with the flow.

Many things are always experienced before you know that you can't afford to gain or lose. Just like feelings, after the pain, you will know how to protect yourself; If you are stupid, you will know how to persist and give up in a timely manner. Let us learn to give up, turn away before we cry, what we exchange for tears is not reliable; Let's learn to give up, bury yesterday in our hearts, and leave the best memories; Let's learn to give up so that we can all have an easier start for each other.

Holding on to it will only make you indulge in memories and pain and become sluggish. Let go of your hand, let it pass away with the wind of memory, you will find the other side of the sky, you will re-read the fragrance of life flowers, feel the warmth of the sun... Giving up is not evasion, not cowardice; Giving up is an open-minded attitude.

Think about it, how many people and things a person has to experience in his life, and if you don't know how to give up those things that have been lost and irretrievable, how can you grasp what really belongs to you? If you find that the only door in your world is no longer open for you, you don't have to linger in front of the door or hit your head and never wake up. Learn to give up and turn around and look for a skylight that opens for you, where you can also see the stars ...

I look forward to Lin Haiyan's drifting, and the warm love of love has stopped.

Wisdom and happiness are based on the bright moon, and the sky is full of stars.

A thousand years of rose shadows, born like summer flowers and rain.

A piece of infatuation will never regret it, and the end of the world will not be lovely.

Flower rain original, beautiful love hidden head poem, I hope you like it! 0(∩_0

There is a fate to repair the same boat ferry.

Sincerely, a world end.

I love you in every way.

Hui quality orchid heart fragrance as before.

How to solve the lovesickness.

[Yes] the Tao wishes, things come true.

It's hard to give up and often fall asleep.

Love] for lifelong companionship.

Hui] Jardine and our flowers are red.

Yi] people are happy and have a good temperament.