Sentry card The main content, the question at the back of the sentry card

The article "Checkpoint" is written about a sentry post on the top of a steep snowy peak, and a general and a colonel lead a group of soldiers to brave the wind and snow to comfort the soldiers in the outpost. In order not to make the other soldiers suffer, the colonel called his own brother to take the place of the soldiers. The colonel's own brother endured the raging wind and the pain of a knife cut without a word of complaint.

Reading for the rise of China" has always been in our hearts, and this is our common dream.

Although it is now an era of peace, over the years, the new China that the sons and daughters of China have gone through hardships and exchanged for blood and sweat needs us to defend and build. When we think of the sentinels who stood tall in the cold wind and the soldiers who fought for the motherland, we can't help but feel admiration.

The story told in this article touched me: at the top of the mountain, there was a sentry post of our army, and the general was very angry when he found a soldier on duty at the sentry post for more than 3 years. He thought that the colonel, without good soldiers, had left a soldier on duty for so long in a high junior area.

However, the soldier turned out to be the colonel's own brother. The general didn't say anything, turned to the colonel and his brother and saluted ......

The colonel's selflessness amazed and admired us, and the conditions at the top of the mountain were the most difficult, but he did not let his soldiers stand guard, but let his own brother go on duty. In the face of three years of hard sentry, the colonel's younger brother was also willing.

The four seasons are beautiful, but at this high-altitude post, the soldiers can only be accompanied by the cold wind and the white snow. What a sentinel and a regimental commander we were! They are on duty day and night to defend the country, standing on high mountain peaks like a group of eagles.

Between heaven and earth, they are like optimus primes supporting heaven and earth, perseverance is like an iceberg that cannot be moved, and the army is like an unbreakable sea, guarding the borders of the motherland.

We must learn from the selfless spirit of the colonels and the strong perseverance of the soldiers, and continue to advance along the glorious path of our revolutionary ancestors!

This article mainly writes that the general desperately went to the high-altitude checkpoint to investigate, and found that a soldier had been holding on to such an extremely difficult place for many years, and when he was angry, he found out that he was the colonel's younger brother, and the spirit of the colonel brothers touched the people present.

This must be true when the teacher said.

There was a sentry post on the top of a hill in a harsh environment, and the colonel endured the pain of letting his younger brother guard the post in order not to let others suffer, and this spirit was moved and admired by the general.

The article uses narrative writing techniques to describe a general who takes a dozen soldiers and a colonel to a post at an altitude of more than 5,000 meters, where the general fights over a soldier who has been on duty at a high altitude for five years, and finally discovers that the soldier is actually the colonel's own brother and raises his respectful hand to the colonel and his younger brother.

Write about a general who went to comfort those who were sticking to their posts, and then saw that one of them was a colonel, and his brother did his best to him.

In two paragraphs, the first paragraph mainly writes that the general resolutely asks the outpost for condolences despite the danger; In the second paragraph, the incident of the regiment commander's younger brother holding the post for five years mainly leads to the fearless dedication of the border guards.

The last natural paragraph can be understood in this way: the motherland has such a group of selfless and dedicated soldiers, who defend social tranquility and economic construction, and they are men who stand up to the sky.

The above is a personal understanding, I don't know if I can help the landlord, just for reference.

1. The sentry should say, "General, actually me." I am the younger brother of the colonel, and I am willing to serve on the guard. The colonel was motioning for the sentry not to say it, and the colonel knew what the sentry was going to say.

2. The environment outside the house (it can also be directly described as an environmental description) is aimed at highlighting the difficulty of standing guard.

Environmental description: The road is too dangerous, and in some places only one person can pass sideways. There is a thick layer of snow on the road, and there is a thick layer of ice under the snow, and if you walk on it, you may fall off a cliff if you are not careful.

Details: In the snowstorm, there stands a warrior covered in snow and white frost on his eyebrows. The gun-wielding sentry stood upright and opened his mouth. The colonel glanced at him. The sentry immediately closed his mouth. The school snorted, glancing at the sentry, but did not squeak.

Language or Dialogue Description: He asked, "How many years have you been in the army?" "Five years. "Always here? "No, it used to be three thousand meters, and it was the year before last. ”

Metaphor, rhetorical question, action (Meng Jianping's, I'm doing it today) hehe.