Drinking Alone Under the Moon Moonlit Night Looking at the Moon and Huaiyuan How to write Wat

This is a poem that misses a distant person on a moonlit night. The artistic conception of the opening sentence "the bright moon is born on the sea" is majestic and broad, and it is a good sentence for the ages. It looks like Xie Lingyun's "Spring Grass in the Pond", Bao Zhao's "The Bright Moon Shines on the Snow", Xie Hao's "The Great River Flows Day and Night" and the author's own "Lonely Hung Sea Comes From" and other famous sentences, it looks plain and unremarkable, without a peculiar word, without a single point of dyed color, blurted out, but naturally has a kind of noble and harmonious atmosphere.

This sentence is completely a scene, pointing out the "looking at the moon" in the title. The second sentence "the end of the world is at this time", that is, from the scene to the love, to "Huaiyuan". Before this, there is Xie Zhuang's "Moon Fu" in the "Thousands of Miles Away from the Bright Moon", and then there is Su Shi's "Water Tune Song Head" in the words "I wish people a long time, thousands of miles together", all of which are famous sentences for writing the moon, and their intentions are roughly the same, but because each person uses different methods of expression, it is expressed in different genres, Xie Zhuang is Fu, Su Shi is the word, Zhang Jiuling is the poem, and the phase is tailor-made, each extremely wonderful.

These two sentences capture all the scenes of the poem's title together, but they are effortless, and they are still in the natural style of Zhang Jiuling's ancient poems.

From the moonrise to the moonset, it is a long time, and the poem says that it is "Jingxi", that is, all night. This all-night moonlight can be said to be indifferent to ordinary people, and a pair of lovers who are far away from the end of the world can't sleep for a long time because of the moon, and only feel that the night is long, so they fall out of a "resentment" word. Three or four sentences, with the word resentment as the center, echo with "lover" and "lovesickness", echo with "remote night" and "night", and carry on the first two sentences, all in one go.

These two sentences use flowing water pairs, which are natural and smooth, and have an ancient poetic rhyme.

I can't sleep because of my lovesickness, who is to blame? Is it because the candlelight in the house is too bright? So he extinguished the candle and walked out of the courtyard in his clothes, but the light was still so bright.

The bright moon of this world is so sultry that it makes it even more difficult for people to fall asleep when they see its beautiful and perfect brilliance. The night was late, the weather was cooler, and the dew was soaking his clothes. The word "nourishment" here is not only wet, but also has the meaning of breeding.

The word "Luzi" has written the spirit of "remote night" and "night". "The candles are extinguished, the light is full, and the clothes are dewed", two sentences delicately write the real scene of sleepless moonlight in the middle of the night.

When lovesickness never sleeps, what can be given away? There was nothing but hands full of moonlight. This moonshine is full of my heart, but how can I give it to you?

Let's sleep! If I sleep, I may be able to reunite with you in my dreams. The two sentences of "unbearable" are wonderfully conceived and the artistic conception is clear, and I am afraid that it cannot be written without deep emotions and personal experience.

Here, the poet secretly uses the two poetic sentences of Jin Luji's "shine on it with afterglow, and take it without a hand", turning the past into the new, and leisurely showing not to think about it. The poem comes to an abrupt end, only to feel that the aftertaste is lingering and evocative.

Fifteenth night looking at the moon: the "osmanthus" of "cold dew and silent wet osmanthus" makes people think of Wu Gang in the cutting of Gui: "The moon is bright tonight", the word "moon" in "Tonight's moon is bright", and it is the same as the bright moon in the sky, but everyone's feelings are different, which expands the scope of moon watchers.

And the word "autumn thought" in "I don't know who the autumn thoughts fall into" expresses the author's sincere homesickness.

Water tune song head: The thoughts and emotions expressed in this song were originally very obvious, Su Shi was frustrated because of the political situation, as well as the parting with his brother Su Zhe, and the Mid-Autumn Festival to the moon, not without a sense of depression and melancholy. But he did not fall into a negative and pessimistic mood, and immediately eliminated the sorrow with a detached and contemplative mind, and finally showed his love for human life.

Su Shi has experienced hardships in his life, but the transcendent and expansive attitude towards life contained in the words is all admirable.

The little girl is not a professional and may not meet your requirements, please forgive me.

"Water Tune Song Head" is a bold poem, the poet faces the pain of separation, through philosophical thinking, and finally dissolves the sorrow, thus expressing a positive and optimistic attitude towards life, showing the author's love for life, missing his relatives, reflecting an open-minded and bold spiritual realm.

The ancients had deep feelings for the moon, and their associations were very rich. Mochizuki and pregnant people often become the subject of ancient poems, but it is rare to see Zhang Jiuling writing so faint and distant, affectionate and long-lasting. The poem expresses the poet's ardent nostalgia for people from afar through the description of the ups and downs of the protagonist's thoughts when he looks at the moon.

1.Word dynamics.

The scene of the bright moon slowly rising from the sea level is written, as if it was rising from the sea into the air.

2.This is fine.

The description of the zhi section expresses the poet's feelings of loneliness, melancholy, and very sad and desolate in his heart.

3.Common denominator: they all have feelings of longing and nostalgia caused by the moon;

Differences: One is bold, the other is a strong sense of longing!

I wrote it down, and I would like to adopt it!

Words are written dynamically.

The moon rises slowly from the sea level, as if it has risen from the sea into the sky.

2.This detailed section describes the poet's feelings of loneliness, melancholy, and his heart is very sad and sad.

3.Common denominator: they all have feelings of longing and nostalgia caused by the moon;

Differences: One is bold, the other is a strong sense of longing!

1.The word "sheng" writes the scene of the bright moon rising from the sea, which is dynamic and accurate.

2.It expresses the poet's loneliness and melancholy, and his heart is very sad.