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A little thing This morning, I have another scar on my hand, how did this scar come about, if you say it, you will laugh at me. Alas, don't vomit or be unhappy, or say it, and laugh if you like.

Here's what happened: in the morning, after breakfast, the whole family went grocery shopping. On the way to the vegetable market, I was feeling bored when there was a burning plastic bag in front of me.

I immediately ran over to put out the fire, because I knew that if the fire was too big, it would burn the nearby trees, which would be dangerous. But what can be extinguished when the fire is so big? Then I saw a pile of old bricks on the side of the road, and I wanted to use the bricks to extinguish the fire, so I picked up a brick and turned it over to the fire.

I only heard a "bang", and sparks flew everywhere, like a plastic bag**.

Ah, it hurts, my right hand hurts like a needle, I touch it with my left hand, the back of my right hand is hot liquid and plastic skin, and there are big and small blisters immediately. It turned out that there was a puddle of water under the plastic bag that had been roasted by the fire, and when the bricks were smashed, the water splashed along with the burnt plastic skin, and it fell right on my right hand. After a while, the skin that had been burned by the fire fell off, and the blisters on his hands were swollen bigger than peanuts.

My hand hurt all the time this morning, and I couldn't write, so my mother took me to Wangjing Hospital, where the doctor punctured the injured blister, gave me some medicine, and gave me an infusion. My mother looked at my painful face and said to me, look at you, I know you want to put out the fire, but it is not enough to have good ideas, you must use your brains to do things, and you must also have a scientific method.

It seems that my mother is right, if I had been carefully observing and using my brain, this scar would not have fallen on me. Eat a trench, grow a wisdom, I want to remember the lesson of this time.

Some people like hot summers, some people like cold winters, and some people like golden autumns, but I like beautiful and warm springs. In March, the sun was warm, and my mother and I came to the park to enjoy the beautiful scenery of spring.

As soon as you enter the park, you will first see a round large flower bed made of jade, there are all kinds of flowers in the flower bed, look at the pieces of spring flowers, its flowers are small, there is a peach-shaped stamen in the middle of the yellow and clear quadrangular petals, open a bright smile, smile at us; There is also the magnificent, charming peony, dancing graceful body, exuding an alluring fragrance; The fiery red moon season, like a small sun, exudes a thousand rays of light, and it attracts many bees and butterflies to collect honey.

On the right side of the flower bed is a fish pond, there are many fish in it, you see, the big red goldfish, with its tail swinging one after another, swimming happily in the water, the pool is crystal clear, the water is murmuring, the breeze blows, and the water surface swings up with pieces of silver scales.

On the left side of the flower bed is a small forest, the willow leaves are more than an inch long, green, the green hair of the willow tree has to cover itself, gently swaying in the spring breeze, the peach blossoms on the peach tree exude a fresh fragrance, and the birds on the tree sing a "Spring Song".

Behind the flower bed is an open field where children play games and adults rest on benches; The old people are walking slowly, and the sound of conversation and laughter is endless, and it echoes throughout the park. The park is surrounded by pine and cypress trees, which guard the park day and night like excellent sentinels.

I love the park in the spring, and I love the spring even more.

News: Jiang Chengyuan, a 56-year-old veteran in Jing'an District, has been driving his disabled car through the streets and alleys every day, providing sewing kits, medical kits and other services free of charge for 13 years.

Shanghai Finance University launched a voluntary blood donation activity with the theme of "Carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng in the new era and strive to be a lovely Shanghainese", and as of noon, a total of 200 teachers and students had voluntarily donated blood.

Comment: The above two examples show the good qualities of the people of Shanghai in learning from Lei Feng. As a 21st century middle school student.

Should we take action to show our good qualities? Learning from Lei Feng doesn't have to do anything earth-shattering, sometimes some small things can also reflect your Lei Feng spirit, just like Uncle Jiang in the example, although he is very old and disabled, he still does good things for people. Although it was a small thing, it persevered for 13 years.

We should also learn this spirit, start from small things, and let us be a lovely Shanghainese!

News: Jiang Chengyuan, a 56-year-old veteran in Jing'an District, has been driving his disabled car through the streets and alleys every day, providing sewing kits, medical kits and other services free of charge for 13 years.

Shanghai Finance University launched a voluntary blood donation activity with the theme of "Carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng in the new era and strive to be a lovely Shanghainese", and as of noon, a total of 200 teachers and students had voluntarily donated blood.

Comment: The above two examples show the good qualities of the people of Shanghai in learning from Lei Feng. As a 21st century middle school student.

Should we take action to show our good qualities? Learning from Lei Feng doesn't have to do anything earth-shattering, sometimes some small things can also reflect your Lei Feng spirit, just like Uncle Jiang in the example, although he is very old and disabled, he still does good things for people. Although it was a small thing, it persevered for 13 years.

We should also learn this spirit, start from small things, and let us be a lovely Shanghainese!

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