Common Sentences and Modifications 40, Modify Sentences

1."pattern" and "situation" are duplicated, and one should be deleted.

2."Origin" is a metaphor for the origin and development of things, and it is not appropriate to use it here, it should be changed to "source".

3.If there is no object center word collocated with "develop", "activity" should be added after "SMS".

4.The order of "development" and "inheritance" is inappropriate, and "inheritance" should be followed by "development".

Therefore, the full text should be changed to: "Singing red songs, reading classics, telling stories, and passing on proverbs" A new pattern of mass cultural activities is taking shape in our city. Creating and sending red text messages has become a common practice.

Bayu culture and Hongyan culture are the source of creating red text messages, and inspiring Chongqing people to create is to stimulate Chongqing people's identification with their own culture. By carrying out the red SMS campaign, we can further improve the quality of Chongqing citizens while inheriting and developing culture.

Pattern Situation Remove a Incentive should be changed to Encouragement can be followed by the lack of ingredients Boost changed to improve 1Becoming a trend is a derogatory term, and it has become a trend. 2.Incentives are replaced by encouragement. 3.Inherit first, then develop.

4.Carry out a "campaign" to send red text messages

5.Delete the word "situation" after the word "new pattern".

Pattern: The situation removes one Incentive should be changed to encouragement, which can be followed by the lack of ingredients, and the promotion should be changed to improve.

1.Becoming a trend is a derogatory term, and it has become a trend. 2.Incentives are replaced by encouragement. 3.Inherit first, then develop.

4.Carry out a "campaign" to send red text messages

5.Delete the word "situation" after the word "new pattern".

1.Modern society needs talents with comprehensive ability, so we should pay attention to cultivating our ability to discover, analyze and solve problems in our daily learning. (This sentence is a word order error).

2.We should not only learn scientific and cultural knowledge, but also cultivate the ability to adapt to society, so as not to be eliminated when we enter society in the future. (Double negative means affirmative).

In order to cultivate these abilities for us, our teachers really forgot to eat and drink, and they worked hard to learn from them. (Improper use of idioms, improper praise and disapproval).

The first and the logical order of the quatrain is wrong, and it should be to find the problem, analyze the problem, and solve the problem.

The second sentence has an extra negation, which leads to a mistake in thinking, which should be avoided from being eliminated from society in the future.

The third sentence is confusing, deliberate is a derogatory term, which can be replaced or deleted.

1 Discover first Solve 2 after analysis: "No" Remove 3 It should be an inappropriate word.

1. The ability to find problems, analyze problems and solve problems The word order is not the same.

2. It should be changed to "so as not to be eliminated in the future".

3. Careful use of inappropriate words.

1. The order of the words is inappropriate. Tachibana is discovered first, then analyzed, and finally solved. 2 ingredients are superfluous. So as not to have a negative meaning, remove no. 3 scheming is a derogatory term and is not used here appropriately.

Where's your sick sentence?

The audience of my show is the most popular among the gays.

Under his leadership, many residents in the vicinity have conscientiously done a good job of environmental sanitation.

Since we have overcome many difficulties in our studies in the previous period, we will certainly be able to overcome them in the future.

The dust originating in Xinjiang is blown by the westerly circulation belt and affects the Pacific region and East Asia.

We warmly welcome the leaders of the Education Commission to visit and guide.

In the past three years, the county's total grain output has increased by an average annual rate of 20 percent, making great strides.

Phasing out two-stroke fuel mopeds as soon as possible is an urgent need of the current situation.

Lu Xun attaches great importance to the cultivation of children's literary and artistic creation.

The spring breeze blew in bursts, the branches swayed, and the shadows of the trees shook and rustled.

All major policy decisions must be scientifically demonstrated and the opinions of all quarters must be extensively listened to, so as to ensure the correctness of policy decisions.

Making a triangle with a ruler is used in many books as a basic drawing technique.

The suggestion made by the student council, we raised our hands in favor.

The development of any kind of civilization is a process of exchange, collision and integration with other civilizations, and a completely closed environment cannot bring about the progress of civilization, but will only lead to the decline of civilization.

The implementation of paid use of plastic bags is mainly to cultivate people's behavior of minimizing the use of plastic bags through economic means, which will undoubtedly have a positive effect on reducing white pollution and purifying the environment.

To reach the summit of Mount Everest, the Olympic torch must overcome unfavorable special climatic factors such as low temperature, low pressure, and strong winds, and fully consider the various difficulties that mountaineers may encounter when reaching the summit.

Not only did I support him running for class president, but even many of his classmates who had opposed him changed their minds.

My show is the most popular among the audience.

Under his leadership, many residents in the vicinity have conscientiously done a good job of environmental sanitation.

If we have overcome many difficulties in learning in the previous period, we will certainly be able to overcome them in the future.

The dust in Xinjiang is blown by the westerly circulation belt, affecting the Pacific region, East Asia and China.

We warmly welcome the leaders of the Education Committee to visit our school for guidance.

In the past three years, the county's total grain output has increased by an average of 20 percent per year, making great strides forward.

Experts point out that phasing out two-stroke fuel mopeds as soon as possible is an urgent need of the current situation.

Lu Xun attached great importance to children's literary and artistic creation.

The spring breeze blew in bursts, the branches swayed, the moonlight and the shadows of the trees swayed, and the branches made a rustling sound.

All major policy decisions must be scientifically demonstrated, and opinions from all quarters must be extensively listened to to ensure the correctness of policy decisions.

The use of rulers to make triangles is the basis of drawing in many books.

We raised our hands in favor of the suggestions made by the Student Council.

The development of any kind of civilization is a process of collision, exchange, and integration with other civilizations, and a completely closed environment cannot bring about the progress of civilization, but will only lead to the decline of civilization.

The implementation of paid use of plastic bags, mainly through economic means to cultivate people's habit of minimizing the use of plastic bags, which will undoubtedly have a positive effect on reducing white pollution and purifying the environment.

To reach the summit of Mount Everest, the Olympic torch must overcome unfavorable special climatic conditions such as low temperature, low pressure, and strong winds, and fully consider the various difficulties that mountaineers may encounter when reaching the summit.

Question adds: Not only did I support him running for class president, but even many of my classmates who were originally against him changed their minds.

1. At present, the quantity and quality of talents in all aspects of our country cannot meet the needs of economic and social development. Shi Chong.

Missing an object, it should be satisfied... Request.

At present, the quantity and quality of qualified personnel in all fields cannot meet the requirements of economic and social development.

2. From a large number of facts, we are told that environmental disasters have no borders.

From... so that the sentence has no subject, so it can be deleted.

A large number of facts tell us that environmental disasters know no borders.

1 Change quality to quality.

2 The first half of the sentence should be a large number of facts to tell us.

1. Add "request" at the end

2. Delete"From... "and "Medium".

1. Add "request" at the end

2. Delete from.

The subject must be "Mo Yan", and there are two sets of predicates and objects, which can be revealed by removing those modifiers.

The first group is "Mo Yan", "integrating stories and historical facts" and "** creation".

The second group is "Mo Yan", which was awarded the "Nobel Prize in Literature".

It can be seen that the first group is fine, and in the second group, it is not smooth for someone to be awarded a literary award, that is, the subject and object are not properly matched! It should be Mo Yan who was named a literary award winner or something

I am doing a task, please! Thank you

The problem with this sentence is not that "the subject and object are not properly collocated", but that "the predicate (rating) object (honorary title) is not properly collocated", and the "honorary title" is "awarded", not "rated". And because the "Nobel Prize in Literature" is an award, not an "honorary title", this sentence was changed to "The writer Mo Yan used magical realism to integrate folk tales and historical facts into his creation, and became the winner of the 2012 "Nobel Prize in Literature". Submit an answer.

Rated ...Honorary titles are not properly matched.

Subject: Mo Yan.

Object: Honorary title.

Writer Mo Yan used magical realism to integrate folk tales and historical facts into his creation, and won the 2012 "Nobel Prize in Literature".

"Mo Yan was awarded the honorary title of XX".

The early spring in Wuxi contains infinite vitality, and Wuxi people burst out with enthusiasm like fire. The majority of party members and leading cadres of various departments in the city have focused on the creation of a "national health city", further promoted economic development, and worked hard to improve people's lives. Through the joint efforts of the people of the city, the land of Wuxi will show a vigorous scene of harmonious and ruined development.

Passing by....Hope don't mind.

If there is a sentence that is not speechless: yes: sentence 3.

Changed:1The key to children's freedom, optimism and self-confidence lies in the freedom, relaxation and respect of education.

Never answer the reason for the error: multi-faceted one-sided).

2.The mud walls are not very neat, but there are many peach and apricot trees inside, and a twisting vine.

Reason for error: improper collocation of related words, confusion and unclear meaning of the sentence).