Thank you Moon for accompanying me through loneliness 900 words

Don't copy Who's going to rewrite an article for you for your pathetic five"? Your own pig brain.

"People have joys and sorrows, and the moon is cloudy and sunny, and this matter is difficult to complete. This sentence comes from Su Shi's "Water Tune Song Head". So, why does the moon have clouds and sunshine?

The moon we see, the full moon, the crescent moon, the upper Xuanyue, the lower Xuanyue, and other different moon phases are determined by the position relationship between the moon, the earth, and the sun. We know that the moon itself does not emit light, it reflects the sun's rays; In addition, the earth revolves around the sun, and the moon revolves around the earth, and in their motion, they form different spatial relationships with each other, and we see different phases of the moon on the earth.

Sometimes, we can't see the moon at all. When the sun, moon, and earth are in the same straight line and the moon is between the sun and the earth, that is, around the first day of each month, we cannot see the moon. Because the bright side of the earth is opposite the dark side of the moon, the moon that we see when we stand on the earth is lightless, because there is no light, and it is daytime, we can only see the light of the sun, but not the moon.

This day is known as New Year's Day.

Sometimes, we can see the full moon. The moon always revolves counterclockwise around the earth, so on the fifteenth or sixth day of each lunar month, when the sun, moon, and earth are in a straight line with the earth in the middle, we see a bright and bright full moon. Because at this time, the dark side of the earth (that is, the night) is facing the bright side of the moon.

This day is called the Lookout Day.

The crescent moon in the air resembles a small banana. Whenever the Moon is between the Sun and the Earth and at a small acute angle to the line "Sun and Earth", we see the crescent moon, and of course our eyes are the apex of this acute angle. At this time, it is just dark, that is, the beginning of the lunar month, and the proverb says, "On the second and third days of the first month, the crescent moon drills."

The Moon rotates counterclockwise around the Earth, and the greater the angle to the straight line between the Earth and the Sun, the greater the bright area of the Moon we see. When the moon is at right angles to the straight line, we see half a moon, which is about the seventh or eighth day of the lunar calendar. When it exceeds 90° and is less than 180°, we see the majority of the half moon.

Similarly, after 180°, the moon becomes more and more absent, and finally returns to the new sun. This is a lunar month in our country, which is a little more than 29 days in total.

Lunar and solar eclipses are rare and not occur every month. When the sun, moon, and earth are in the same straight line and on the same axis, the moon is between the sun and the earth, and the moon blocks the rays cast by the sun on the earth, casting its own shadow on the surface of the earth, and looking at the sun in the projection area, the sun is dark, which is a solar eclipse. This day can only be the first day of the lunar calendar.

When the sun, the earth, and the moon are in the same straight line and on the same axis, the earth is between the sun and the moon, and the earth blocks the light thrown by the sun to the moon. This day can only be the fifteenth day of the lunar calendar.

It is for these reasons that the moon cannot always be round, nor can it always be missing. It is the charm of the universe that makes the moon magical.

"The bright moonlight in front of the bed is suspected to be frost on the ground. "This "Silent Night Thoughts" was the first poem my parents taught me, and I still remember the poem that my parents memorized when I shook my head.

The joy of taking pictures of the cute appearance.

I think there is a bit of a problem here I should render it "The bright moonlight in front of the bed is suspected of frost on the ground. "The cool moonlight was coldly cast in front of the window, and I suddenly remembered this poem that my parents taught me, and remembered the scene where they taught me to recite poetry under the moonlight. The corners of his lips hooked up a smile, and he suddenly felt how this cold moonlight could make people feel so warm, like snuggling in his mother's arms at that time.

I also think that the logic is a bit problematic It is good to quote verses, but it is also necessary to use it in practice I think the article is a bit thin Quoting verses can be mixed with memories Describe the relationship between you and your parents more deeply The point is that your article is the moon with me Combined with your content It should be that the moon is a lovesick thing that misses your parents See the moon and miss your parents You should click on it If the end points out the emotional attitude and the appropriate description of the environment, it will be better to point out the main idea.

Now I am a junior high school student. Facing the pressure of studying, every day, every day, I have to keep working hard. Every late at night, when I was still in the sea of questions.

When fighting, it is inevitable that you will feel a little tired.

The language here can be refined a little more appropriately, and it is not very closely related to the above, if you want to turn a paragraph to tell other things, it should be that the moon accompanies you to learn about this matter, and it is better to write a little better, and it is better to highlight the theme and choose more touching and resonant events Personally, I think the article can be connected in a compact way, a bit like a lot of sentences are mixed together.

Thank you, Moon, for spending night after night with me; Moon, thank you for making me feel no longer lonely; Thank you, Moon, for growing with me. Thank you, Moon, one.

As a junior high school student, it is already very good to be able to write such an essay, from your text you can see that you are a sensitive and demure girl who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, and I believe that when you grow up, you will be able to write a better essay when you have more life insights. Summer camp activities are too short for children growing up with their parents to experience that kind of homesickness, so you can't write about the melancholy of being a stranger in a foreign land. "Think of the song "Water Tune Song Head", "Water Tune Song Head" is the name of the word brand, it is just a melody, and the name of many words is "Water Tune Song Head", such as ***'s "Water Tune Song Head Swimming", and what you are referring to "When is the Bright Moon", this is a knowledge point to pay attention to.

In addition, "When Will the Bright Moon Be There" expresses the poet's mood of missing his brother in the Mid-Autumn Festival, and the modern "Thousands of Miles Together, If the End of the World is Neighbors" is mostly used between lovers and friends, so it is not appropriate to use it for parents to miss their children.

Notice again the usage of "of", "earth, de", "of" is followed by a noun, "di" is followed by a verb, and "de" is followed by a supplementary explanation, for example: a clear blue sea, rushing over the finish line and jumping very high.

I couldn't write an essay like this when I was in junior high school, and my Chinese teacher must have liked you. It's good to think about it again and pay attention to the overlap in the wording, because it's not a middle school student's article after the adult corrects it for you.

The moon walks with me.

Silvery moonlight shrouded the earth, gilding things with a silvery glow. Looking at the beautiful scenery in front of the window, my thoughts slowly drifted back to the old days.

"The bright moonlight in front of the bed is suspected to be frost on the ground. "This poem "Silent Night Thoughts" was the first poem my parents taught me, and I still remember the joy of my parents taking pictures of me reciting poems with my head shaking my head.

When is the bright moon, ask the wine to the sky. People have joys and sorrows, the moon is cloudy and sunny, at this time it is difficult to complete, I hope that people will last a long time, thousands of miles together. "When I first learned this poem, I just thought it was beautiful to read.

It was only when I left my parents for the first time and was alone that I felt the poet's deep homesickness.

It was a summer camp event, and it was during that event that I experienced for the first time what it was like to miss my loved ones. Sitting alone in front of the tent, looking at the beautiful scenery around me, I had no intention of appreciating it, and pictures with my parents came to my mind. The pale white moonlight shone on the earth, as if my mother's warm hand was caressing me, making me feel a touch of home.

Looking up at the bright moon in the sky again, the smiling faces of my parents seemed to appear in front of me. I wonder if my parents at home are also missing me; I don't know that they are also looking up at the white moon; I don't know if they remembered the song "Water Tune Song Head" like me.

The moon has been with me for one lonely night after another, and the moon has been with me.

Now I am a junior high school student. Facing the pressure of studying, every day, every day, I have to keep working hard. In the middle of the night, when I was still fighting in the sea of questions, I would inevitably feel a little tired.

At this moment, the bright moonlight slipped in through the window and covered me in a silver coat, and the bright moon in the sky seemed to say to me, "Be careful of the cold." I'm with you!

Because of the moon, I don't feel tired anymore; Because of the moon, my heart is warm even if the weather is cold; Because of the moon, I don't feel lonely on the way to growth.

Thank you, Moon, for spending night after night with me; Thank you for making me feel lonely anymore; Thank you for growing with me. Thank you for being with me all the way.

Hey, the first time you left home was to go to summer camp, well, how do you get the same grievances as your pro.

Why can the moon make you no longer tired, it doesn't make sense, you live on the top floor or a bungalow, and there is still moonlight coming in at night, don't you install curtains?

The author has written very well, I think it would be nice if the examples could be more detailed, the sentences are very beautiful, and they are also very smooth, if I were a teacher, I would give you an excellent score!

I'm an elementary school teacher, I don't need to modify, your work feels very good, it's really good, praise!!

I think it's all excellent, it's beautiful. You don't need to change it. (Hee-hee.......)

I still remember the joy of my parents taking pictures of me reciting poems with my head shaken. It feels like it's not connected here.

No need to modify it is already good.

Our "moonlit" night ("Ye") has a future of "truth," goodness, and beauty.

The moonlit night ("Ye") is "true", good, and beautiful.

The moonlit night ("Ye") reveals "true" feelings.

It really doesn't hurt, it's easy, yes! (Brother smiles lewdly.)

Thank you for accompanying me through so many springs, summers, autumns and winters; Thank you for telling me under the moon to grow up together; Thank you so much for being with me through the hardest night.

Life is lonely, the so-called red stripes come and go without concern, but in a lifetime there will be relatives, friends, lovers, lovers to accompany us through a long or short journey, encounter is the edge, the edge is deep and shallow, follow its nature, cherish when you have, remember the beauty of the past when you separate.

It's good to change it again, why be sad.