My singing skills have improved significantly, revising sick sentences, why

Changed to: My singing level has improved significantly.

My singing skills are constantly improving.

My singing skills have improved significantly.

It should read: My singing skills have improved significantly.

Analysis: It can be understood that "my singing level has improved significantly", in order to express concisely, the word "of" after "I" was removed.

Original sentence: She sang beautiful songs and dances.

The sentence was changed to read: She sang beautiful songs and danced gracefully.

Analysis: The sick sentence is not properly matched, and there is no problem with singing the song, but the dance cannot be described by singing, just add "dancing elegantly".

Distinguish and modify the mantra of the sick sentence:Look at whether the ingredients are missing or not, and the missing ingredients must be completed.

Second, when the collocation is inappropriate, the inappropriate place is changed smoothly.

Third, the word order should be inappropriate, and the inappropriate places should be adjusted.

Fourth, look at the improper use of words, and replace them with appropriate words.

Fifth, see if the meaning is repeated, and the repeated words should be driven away.

Sixth, look at the contradictions in the sentences, remove the spear and remove the shield to settle it.

Seventh, when the classification is improper, different things are placed separately.

Eight look at the reference to the clear and unclear, and the unclear should be noted.

The singing seems to be louder and more touching than any words.

"Language" is changed to "speech", "language" is a system, such as Chinese, English, and "language" refers to the words spoken.

Common sick sentences are as follows:

1. Sentence components are incomplete.

For example: we must follow the habit of discipline.

Change: We must develop the habit of discipline.

2. Improper collocation of words.

For example: we must uphold the glorious traditions of the revolution.

Reform: We must inherit the glorious traditions of the revolution.

3. Repetitive semantics.

For example: I couldn't help but laugh out loud.

Change: I couldn't help but laugh out loud.

4. The word order is incorrect.

For example, we must carefully correct and double-check for mistakes in the homework. Correction: We must carefully check and seriously correct the mistakes in the homework.

5. Inconsistencies.

For example: Yesterday evening there was a night of wind.

Change: There was a gust of wind yesterday evening. Or: The wind blew overnight yesterday.

6. The meaning of the sentence is ambiguous or wrong.

For example: No one can deny that the earth does not revolve around the sun.

Change: No one will deny that the earth revolves around the sun.

7. Illogical.

For example: Store shelves are filled with grapes, fruits, and pears.

Change: Store shelves are filled with grapes, apples and pears.

"Language" is changed to "speech", "language" is a system, such as Chinese, English, and "language" refers to the words spoken.

The singing seems to be louder and more touching than any words.

I worked hard to improve my grades.

**: Improper matching.

Changed to: As soon as we walked into the campus, we heard the beautiful singing voices of our classmates.

On the premise of not changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, modify the words and sentences with obvious language problems to make the sentences smooth, correct and more perfect. The content that needs to be modified includes all the components of the sentence, including the subject, predicate, object, definite, adverbial, and complement.

Instead, the students sang very beautiful songs at the party.

At the party, the students sang beautiful songs and dances.

It's not almost, it's not good, it's not rich.

Sentence: Through this exam, our language ability has been greatly improved.

**: Ingredient is missing, "pass" or "make" to remove one of them.

Changed to: Through this exam, our language skills have been greatly improved.

The sentence does not make sense, and it is changed to: Tea has been widely cultivated in these countries in recent years.

The judgment that should be improved should be a wrong behavior, and it should be changed to: This kind of wrong behavior of not seeking truth from facts can no longer be continued, and it must be improved.

The sharp rise in the incidence of heart disease should be data. Changed to: Since the 70s of the 20th century, the incidence of heart disease has risen sharply, becoming one of the main killers threatening human health. In this regard, some doctors advocate a low-calorie diet.

The words were repeated and changed to: The predecessor of this school was two village-run middle schools or the head of this school was formed by the merger of two village-run middle schools.

The sentence is not smooth, so it is changed to: Teachers use heuristic teaching, which can effectively improve students' independent thinking ability and learning quality.

I thought about it, and before I knew it, I came to the construction site.