Corrected eight errors

The boy picked up a shell and looked at it, discarding it (changing it to "discard").

He had been searching for a day (changed to "one") afternoon, and had not found the wonderful, most recent shell in his mind (with "most" removed, consistent and closer to reality).

The beach was littered with glittering shells, like stars falling to the ground.

The setting sun renders the sea and the sky a deep light (remove the "shallow", contradictory) purple, and his friends happily hum a sad (remove the "sad", contradictory) song, carrying a basket full of shells, and only he is still lonely dragging the long shadow of the person (remove the "human") on the beach, looking back blankly (changed to "looking around").

Discard -- Discard.

One afternoon -- one afternoon.

Wonderful can't describe shells.

Deep and shallow contradictions.

The setting sun renders the sea and the sky into a deep one.

How could the sunset be rendered purple does not correspond to the facts.

Happiness and sorrow are contradictory.

The shadow of the long man -- the man deleted.

1.One afternoon.

2.Light purple.

3.Scattered.

4.Sad songs.

5.The shadow of a man.

Heap-push. Naughty - play.

Rambling - careless.

Wrong. Strict - serious.

There is no - there is ... Anything else? Why did I find only six ...

Punctuation is okay?

Modifying a sick sentence refers to modifying a sentence with a speech problem so that it does not change the original meaning and the sentence is more fluent.

1. Methods of modifying language sentences:

1. There is a way to modify the sick sentence, and it is generally necessary to follow the order of "one reading, two finding, three changes and four checks".

2. Read through the sentence and figure out the original meaning of the original sentence. The original meaning refers to the main meaning of the original sentence. The premise of modifying a sick sentence is that the original meaning of the original sentence cannot be changed, and only by clarifying the original meaning of the sentence can it be corrected.

3. Second, find and determine the illness of the sentence. To modify the sick sentence, you must first find the symptom of the sentence and determine **. In general, we can help find the symptoms based on the common causes of several kinds of sick sentences that we have learned.

4. Three changes, the right medicine. According to the symptoms and causes of the sentence, after careful consideration, use methods such as addition, deletion, adjustment, and substitution, and start to correct the wrong places.

5. Fourth, check that you have to reread it once or twice after changing it to see if there are any faults that have been modified, whether the modification is appropriate, and whether the original meaning of the sentence has been maintained.

2. Types of general language sentences:

1. Defective ingredients. A complete sentence should be complete with "branches and leaves" and a complete and clear meaning.

2. Improper use of words. Misuse of words means that the words used in the sentence are not in context, or words with similar meanings or even opposites.

3. Improper matching. A pair of words in a sentence that cannot be collocated or violates linguistic conventions is a mismatch.

4. Semantic repetition. Semantic repetition refers to the simultaneous use of two or more Liang juyi words with similar or identical meanings in a sentence, resulting in the repetition of the meaning of the sentence.

5. Improper classification. Misclassification refers to putting things together that do not belong to the same genus.

1. Misword: "gushing" could be replaced by "fluent" or "methodical".

2 punctuation: "Some practice alone," comma to ellipsis; "Journey to the West" was changed to "Journey to the West".

After the revision of Huiyuan: During the morning class, the "Love My China" reading exchange meeting was held before the six (3rd) group collapse class. Before the start, everyone was preparing carefully, some discussing with their tablemates, and some practicing ...... aloneChen Xia first introduced the book "Journey to the West" to her classmates, and everyone felt that her speech was very orderly.

May it help you!

In the morning, the six (3) classes of "I Love China" reading exchange meeting was held. - If there is a contradiction between the class and the reading exchange meeting, remove the word "class" or add the word "time" after the class to indicate the time when the reading exchange meeting will be held, and the sentence will be smooth.

Before the start, everyone was preparing carefully, some discussed with their tablemates, some practiced alone, and everyone was very serious. ——

1."Some ......"Some ......The comma between " is changed to a component sign.

2."Everyone is serious" and the front. "Everyone is seriously preparing" repeat, delete.

Chen Xia was the first to introduce the book "Journey to the West" to her classmates,——1First and first meanings are repeated, and one of them is deleted.

2."Journey to the West" is a book, and the title number should be used, and the quotation marks should be changed to the title number: "Journey to the West".

Everyone felt that her speech was very gushing. ——

The word gushing itself contains the meaning of degree, which is not very modified by the adverb of degree, and at the same time, it is not used here to express it accurately enough, so remove the word gushing and replace it with "good" or "wonderful".

"Held"placed after six (3) shifts; "First of all"with"The first"Reuse, delete one; "Journey to the West"It is the title of the book, which should be bracketed by the title number of the book; It should not be modified with rambling and very smooth; The comma after the exercise should be changed to a full stop; Everyone is serious and the previous duplication should be deleted.

"Journey to the West" Chen Xia First of all, the first one was removed Before the start, everyone was seriously preparing, some discussing with their tablemates, some practicing alone, and everyone was very serious. Repeatedly, everyone felt that her statement was very gushing. Inappropriate Use of Words In the morning class, the Class 6 (3) "I Love China" Reading Exchange Meeting was held Inappropriate use of words.

Move the word "held" to the front of "I love China" and remove "everyone is very serious" and remove the first or first one that should be "Journey to the West" and replace it with another word.

Replace "gushing" with "wonderful".

Some discuss with classmates, while others practice alone."

"Journey to the West" was changed to "Journey to the West".

Class 6 (3) held the "I Love China" reading exchange meeting.

Repeat "first" and "first", and remove one arbitrarily.

Everybody is serious" to remove.

Wrong word: Talking about the wrong word.

Wrong punctuation: some *** some *** Journey to the West".

Dysphasia: first sentence predicate and object position; The second sentence is repeated very seriously; The third sentence is repeated first and the first.

Class 6 (3) held the "I Love China" reading exchange meeting.

Chen Xia was the first one. Repeat first and first.

Statements cannot be made in a rambling manner.

Remove the second one and repeat it.

Journey to the West is called "".

Repeat first and first. Remove the word extraordinary. Remove the word "of" from her statement. Held the "I Love China" reading exchange meeting. Journey to the WestEveryone is very serious and redundant. Careful preparation is enough, but the words can be removed.

Class 6 (3) "I Love China" Reading Exchange Meeting was held as scheduled.

Everybody is serious This sentence is removed.

Journey to the West" everyone thought her speech was very fascinating.

Chen Xia first added "immediately after" before this sentence

In the morning class, Class 6 (3) held a "I Love China" reading exchange meeting. Before the start, everyone was preparing carefully, some discussed with their tablemates, some practiced alone, and everyone was very serious. Chen Xia was the first to introduce the book "Journey to the West" to her classmates, and everyone felt that her speech was endless.

changed the gushing to true love, Chen Xia was the first one, the first and the first repeated, just delete one. I don't know later!! Hey.