Ask for the original text of the essay A Diagnosis . Author: Letuo 5

A medical certificate.

The diagnosis certificate has Dr. Lin Qiaozhi's autograph; The news said that she had passed away suddenly.

Dr. Lin has dedicated his life to medicine, and she has treated granules with her own hands for decades

The following is how to write after reading: It is better to teach a man to fish than to teach him to fish.

When people read a piece of jujube material, an article or a book, they often associate it with many people and things in their lives, and have some feelings, associations and experiences. Writing training is an important way to combine the two links of model essay reading and writing training to carry out comprehensive training of reading and writing.

Let's talk about my own views from the content and structure of the feeling after reading.

First of all, reading is the foundation. The after-reading experience consists of two parts: "Reading and Feeling". "Reading" is the basis of "feeling", "feeling" is triggered by "reading", and there is no "feeling" without "reading", so reading and feeling requires that we first read the original work carefully, accurately and comprehensively grasp the ideological meaning contained in the original writing, hail mountain pictures and articles, and then quote the original work appropriately on this basis.

Brewing emotions for the following "senses" and giving them a firm foundation not only helps to establish the argument, but is also a powerful argument for the argument itself. Without the understanding and mastery of the core of the original text, the feeling after reading becomes a castle in the air, and the lack of a high degree of language organization and generalization ability, when writing, often fall into the lengthy retelling of the original text and dominate the crowd, copying and copying the original text, and covering all aspects, which is a common problem for students to write and read after reading.

Secondly, the sense is the core. The feeling here is neither an empty discussion that leaves the original text, nor a simple repetition of the content of the original work, but a new concept produced by the author under the inspiration of the original work's ideological concepts, a flash of the soul, and a leap in understanding. Generally speaking, there are two situations of the "feeling" of the feeling after reading.

One situation is to show the deepening of the author's understanding through the further elaboration of the original text.

The following is the method of writing after reading: With the method, you can write any feeling after reading.

The format of the feeling after reading (in simple terms):

The first paragraph summarizes the main content of the book, what the author wrote, and what he wants to express.

The second paragraph Choose a more important point, or what you think is important, and express it in your own words, which one I think is better, and what kind of opinion do I have.

The third paragraph is related to real life, combining what is in the book with what is in life, expressing the true feelings, how it is in life, how I feel, and what I have learned.

Do the above 3 points, then this feeling after reading is basically out.

Of course, it doesn't have to be just three paragraphs.

You can divide it by yourself in the middle, and it's good to be detailed properly.

However, the structural level must be distinct, and the reading and shouting are combined with the sense, and the focus is on the "sense".

There are usually three ways to write the feeling after reading: one is to abbreviate the content outline, the other is to write the experience after reading, and the other is to imitate the excerpted sentences and paragraphs. The title can be "After Reading" or "Reading with Feelings". 

First of all, it is necessary to clarify the topic. When writing, it is necessary to distinguish what is primary and what is secondary, and strive to grasp the key points by "reading" and writing about the experience of "feeling". 

The second thing is to choose the material. Reading is the foundation of writing, only by reading carefully and carefully, can we deeply understand the content of the article, so as to grasp the key points, grasp the thoughts and feelings of the article, and feel and experience; Only by reading carefully can we find the connection point between the reading feelings, which is the central idea of the article, that is, the sentence that points out the central idea in the text. For a work, you should not be exhaustive when writing about your experience, but you should write about the changes in your thoughts and actions after reading it, and extract a certain point to make an article.

Thirdly, after writing and reading, the feeling begins with a brief introduction to the content of the work read, and then writes about the experience. The content of the original text is often summarized in 3 or 4 sentences. At the end, I mostly go back to the works I read. We should focus on the word "feeling" and remember to connect with the reality of our own lives. 

Finally, the precautions for writing after reading: Writing and reading feelings is by no means a transcription or simple retelling of the original text, and cannot be arbitrarily played away from the original text, and should be based on writing "experience". Write with real feelings.

It should be a feeling from the bottom of your heart, not a "review" or "guarantee". Write about unique and fresh feelings, and strive for new insights to attract or infect readers.

No one dares to help you, and no one can take this responsibility for a long time.

Ignorance, superstition, conservatism, and the lingering of questions that seemed to understand and did not understand plagued her, causing her to die at the time of the blessing of the firecrackers.