The poems and texts related to the refining of words, the story of the poems refining words .

Is it a poem about the word "refining", or a poem about the word refining?

Such as Du Fu's "Spring Hope".

Three or four sentences: "When I feel the tears, I hate the birds." ""Splash" and "surprise" are refining words, which are verbs that make :

Flowers make tears splash, birds make hearts frightened. Spring is coming, and the birds and flowers should be laughing and happy, but now the country is in turmoil, and the family is scattered, and the flowers and birds can only make the poet cry.

The words "Yue" and "empty" in "Mountain Light and Bird, Pond Shadow and Empty People's Heart" are typical examples of non-verb active use as verbs, the word is alive and the whole sentence is alive, and the whole sentence is alive and the whole poem is alive.

In addition, there are the word "green" in "Spring Breeze and the South Bank of the Green River", the word "trouble" in "Red Apricot Branches Spring Trouble", and the word "lane" in "Clouds break through the moon and flowers make shadows". The word "green" is an adjective that is used, and "trouble" and "get" are anthropomorphic techniques. Whether it is the active use of verbs or personification, it has played a vivid image and turned beauty into flattery.

There are two situations in which adjectives are refined in classical Chinese poetry that deserve special attention, one is the overlapping use of adjectives, and the other is the adjectives that show color at the beginning and end of sentences. "Book of Songs" and "Yuefu Poems" like to use overlapping words, "The leaves are pale, and the white dew is frost", "The hooligan is a worm, hugging the cloth trade silk", "Raising hands and working hard, the two feelings are the same". Tang poems and Song poems are also full of overlapping words, "boundless falling trees and Xiao Xiao, endless Yangtze River rolling", "looking for and seeking, cold and lonely, miserable and miserable, sycamore and drizzle, to dusk, bit by bit."

The overlapping words not only depict the figurative nature of things, but also make the poems harmonious and soothing.

Another situation, such as the words "straight" and "round" in "the desert is lonely and the smoke is straight, and the sun sets on the long river" (Wang Wei's "Make it to the Plug"), the two characters not only accurately describe the scene of the desert, but also express the poet's true feelings, the picture is open, and the artistic conception is majestic. Another example is the words "heavy" and "late" in the sentence "the desert sail is heavy, and the dark bird is late" (Wei Yingwu's "Fu De Twilight Rain to Send Li Zhou"), which has profound intentions: the drizzle wet sail, the sail is wet and heavy; The birds flew into the rain, flapping their wings unquickly, and wrote the sorrowful farewell in a subtle and deep way.

1. One day, in Chang'an, the capital city, Jia Island rode a donkey on the street and casually chanted a poem, two of which were: "The bird stays in the tree by the pond, and the monk pushes the moon down the door." Jia Dao felt that the word "push" in the poem was not used appropriately, and wanted to change the word "push" to "knock", but he didn't know which word was good for a while.

So, while thinking, he repeatedly pushed and knocked on the door with his hands, and the pedestrians on the street were very surprised to see Jia Dao's expression.

When Han Yu saw it, he said to Jia Dao very angrily: "Why do you lower your head when you ride a donkey and don't look ahead?"Jia Dao was startled, hurriedly got off the donkey, apologized to Han Yu, and told the poem he had just obtained on the donkey because of the words "push" and "knock", thinking intently, and not avoiding it.

After hearing this, Han Yu turned his anger into joy, and after thinking for a while, he said, "It's good to type!."When everything is asleep and silent without a sound, the knock on the door is even more silent in the dead of night. Jia Dao thanked him again and again, and set the poem as "The monk knocks on the door under the moon".

2. Fan Zhongyan of the Northern Song Dynasty once wrote "The clouds and mountains are firm, the rivers are turbulent, the virtue of the gentleman, the mountains are high and the waters are long", to make a note of the ancestral hall of the hermit Yan Ziling of the Eastern Han Dynasty. After my friend Li Taibo saw it, the sentences such as Kuayun Mountain and Jiangshui were magnificent and extraordinary, but the word "de" was slightly cramped, and it would be more coordinated to change the word "wind". Fan Zhongyan chanted repeatedly, and the rhyme was really endless, and he was overjoyed to change it.

3. In the Tang Dynasty, Ren Fan stayed overnight in Taizhou Jianzifeng Temple, and inscribed a poem on the temple wall: "The night is cool in the new autumn, and the crane turns over the truffle and drips clothes." The moon reflects a river in front of the peak, and the monk opens a bamboo house in Cuiwei. After walking dozens of miles, he felt that "half a river water" was more appropriate and in line with reality than "a river water".

Busy returning to the temple to revise, who knew that when he arrived at the temple, he found that someone had already changed the word "one" to the word "half", which is really "the same as what the hero sees"!

In January of that year, *** asked Yuan Shui to ask Zang Ke's house to go to him to talk. During the banquet, talking about the word "Qinyuan Spring Snow", Zang Kejia asked how to say the word "wax" in "Yuan Chi Wax Elephant", and said that now everyone understands differently.

After listening, I humbly and a little doubtfully asked for his opinion: "What do you think should be?"Zang Kejia replied

The word "wax" is not easy to say, so it would be good to change it to the word "wax", and the "wax elephant" is exactly opposite to the "silver snake" above. *** gladly accepted: "Then you can change it for me."

5. There was a poet monk named Qi Ji in the Tang Dynasty, and the poems he wrote were pure and timeless, intriguing, and enjoyed a good reputation in the poetry circle at that time. Once, he wrote a poem entitled "Early Plum", which contained these two sentences: "In the deep snow in the front village, a few branches bloomed last night. ”

It happened that the poet friend Zheng Gu came to visit, and after seeing the poem, he changed the pen to a word, changing the "number" to "one", because the title is "early plum", if there are a few branches, it means that the flower has bloomed for a long time, and it can not be regarded as "early plum".