The story of the poem refining words 100 words, the less the better .

1. One day, in Chang'an, the capital city, Jia Island rode a donkey on the street and casually chanted a poem, two of which were: "The bird stays in the tree by the pond, and the monk pushes the moon down the door." Jia Dao felt that the word "push" in the poem was not used appropriately, and wanted to change the word "push" to "knock", but he didn't know which word was good for a while.

So, while thinking, he repeatedly pushed and knocked on the door with his hands, and the pedestrians on the street were very surprised to see Jia Dao's expression.

When Han Yu saw it, he said to Jia Dao very angrily: "Why do you ride a donkey with your head down and don't look ahead?" Jia Dao was startled, hurriedly got off the donkey, apologized to Han Yu, and told the poem he had just obtained on the donkey because of the words "push" and "knock", thinking intently, and not having time to avoid it.

After hearing this, Han Yu turned his anger into joy, and after thinking for a while, he said, "It's good to type!" When everything is asleep and silent without a sound, the knock on the door is even more silent in the dead of night. Jia Dao thanked him again and again, and set the poem as "The monk knocks on the door under the moon".

2. Fan Zhongyan of the Northern Song Dynasty once wrote "The clouds and mountains are firm, the rivers are turbulent, the virtue of the gentleman, the mountains are high and the waters are long", to make a note of the ancestral hall of the hermit Yan Ziling of the Eastern Han Dynasty. After my friend Li Taibo saw it, the sentences such as Kuayun Mountain and Jiangshui were magnificent and extraordinary, but the word "de" was slightly cramped, and it would be more coordinated to change the word "wind". Fan Zhongyan chanted repeatedly, and the rhyme was really endless, and he was overjoyed to change it.

3. In the Tang Dynasty, Ren Fan stayed overnight in Taizhou Jianzifeng Temple, and inscribed a poem on the temple wall: "The top of the new autumn is cool at night, and the crane turns over the truffle and drops the clothes." The moon reflects a river in front of the peak, and the monk opens a bamboo house in Cuiwei. After walking dozens of miles, he felt that "half a river water" was more appropriate and in line with reality than "a river water".

Busy returning to the temple to revise, who knew that when he arrived at the temple, he found that someone had already changed the word "one" to the word "half", which was really "the same as what the hero sees"!

In January of that year, *** asked Yuan Shui to ask Zang Ke's family to go to him to talk. During the banquet, talking about the word "Qinyuan Spring Snow", Zang Kejia asked how to say the word "wax" in "Yuan Chi Laxiang", and said that now everyone understands differently.

After listening, I asked him for his opinion modestly and a little doubtfully: "What do you think should be?" Zang Kejia replied

The word "wax" is not easy to say, so it would be good to change it to the word "wax", and the "wax elephant" is just opposite to the "silver snake" above. *** gladly accepted: "Then you can change it for me."

5. There was a poet monk named Qi Ji in the Tang Dynasty, who wrote poems that were elegant and timeless, intriguing, and enjoyed a good reputation in the poetry circle at that time. Once, he wrote a poem entitled "Early Plum", which contained these two sentences: "In the deep snow in the front village, a few branches bloomed last night. ”

It happened that the poet friend Zheng Gu came to visit, and after seeing the poem, he changed the pen to a word, changing the "number" to "one", because the title is "early plum", if there are a few branches, it means that the flower has bloomed for a long time, and it can not be regarded as "early plum".

Character refining is one of the rhetorical methods, that is, according to the needs of content and artistic conception, carefully select the most appropriate and expressive words to express the meaning. The aim is to use the most appropriate words to represent people or things in a vivid and appropriate way.

1.The monk knocked on the door under the moon.

Once, Jia Island rode a donkey to visit Li Xiang's secluded residence, and got a poem on the back of the donkey: "Idle living in few neighbors, grass path into the deserted garden." The bird stays in the tree in the pool, and the monk pushes the moon down the door. Cross the bridge to divide the wild colors, move the stones and move the cloud roots.

Come here for the time being, the tryst period is worth it." But I feel that "the monk knocks on the door under the moon" seems to be better than "the monk pushes the door under the moon" to set off the tranquility of the environment. Jia Dao couldn't make up his mind for a while, so he raised his hand to scrutinize while chanting poems on the back of a donkey, and tasted it repeatedly, but inadvertently surprised Jingzhao Yin Hanyu's honor guard.

So Jia Island was hugged to Han Yu by the guards, and after Jia Dao reported the truth of the matter, Han Yu not only did not blame, but suggested that he change "the monk pushes the moon down the door" to "the monk knocks on the moon down the door". So the two walked side by side, discussed poetry together, and became friends in cloth.

2.The spring breeze and the south bank of the Green River.

The original sentence is "the spring breeze is on the south bank of the Yangtze River again", Wang Anshi felt that the word "to" in "the spring breeze came to the south bank of the Yangtze River again" was too dead, and he couldn't see what the scene was when the spring breeze arrived in the south of the Yangtze River, and he lacked poetry. Later, after thinking about it, I felt that the word "pass" was inappropriate. Although the word "pass" is more vivid than the word "to", it writes the dynamics of the spring breeze passing by, but it is still not enough to express the eagerness of wanting to return to Jinling.

So the word "pass" was circled and changed to the word "in" and "full". After changing it more than ten times, Wang Anshi still did not find the word he was most satisfied with. He felt a little headache, so he stepped out of the cabin to enjoy the scenery and give his mind a break.

Wang Anshi walked to the bow of the boat, looking at the south of the Yangtze River, the spring breeze blowing, the grass swaying, the wheat waves undulating, it looks more vibrant, the scenery is picturesque. He felt refreshed, and suddenly saw the spring grass green, this "green" word, isn't it the word I was looking for? The word "green" expresses the vibrant and spring-like moving scene of the entire Jiangnan.

Thinking of this, Wang Anshi was so unhappy, he hurriedly ran into the cabin, took out another piece of paper, and changed the sentence "the spring breeze to the south bank of the Yangtze River" in the original poem to "The spring breeze and the south bank of the green river".

3.Last night a branch bloomed.

In the deep snow in the front village, a branch bloomed last night. "The words are prosaic, but they are chewy. The poet uses the deep snow in the wilderness of the mountain village as the background of the lonely plum blossom, describing a very peculiar scene.

"A branch opens" is the finishing touch of the poem: plum blossoms bloom before a hundred flowers, which is said to be "early"; And this "branch" is ahead of the plums, quietly "early" to open, which shows that this plum is unusual. According to the record of "The Biography of Tang Caizi", Qi Ji once used this poem to seek advice from Zheng Gu, and the second couplet of the poem was originally "In the deep snow in the front village, a few branches opened last night."

Zheng Gu said after reading it; "'A few branches' is not 'early', and it is not as good as 'one branch'. Qi Ji was deeply impressed, so he changed "several branches" to "one branch", and called Zheng Gu "a word master".

1. In the Tang Dynasty, Ren Fan stayed overnight in Taizhou Jianzifeng Temple, and inscribed a poem on the temple wall: "The top of the new autumn is cool at night, and the crane turns over the truffle and drips clothes." The moon reflects a river in front of the peak, and the monk opens a bamboo house in Cuiwei. After walking dozens of miles, he felt that "half a river water" was more appropriate and in line with reality than "a river water".

Busy returning to the temple to revise, who knew that when he arrived at the temple, he found that someone had already changed the word "one" to the word "half". It's really "the same thing that heroes see"!

2. Fan Zhongyan of the Northern Song Dynasty once wrote, "The clouds and mountains are firm." The river is turbulent. The virtue of the gentleman is long and the mountains are high and the waters are long".

Come to make a note for the ancestral hall of the hermit Yan Ziling of the Eastern Han Dynasty. After his friend Li Taibo saw it, he praised the clouds and mountains, rivers and other sentences with magnificent intentions and extraordinary momentum. However, the word "de" is slightly cramped, and it will be more harmonious to change the word "wind".

Fan Zhongyan chanted repeatedly, and the rhyme was really endless, and he was overjoyed to change it.

3. One day, Su Shi was demoted, and Wang Anshi was his favorite. Among them, there is a sentence "The bright moon barks in the air, and the yellow dog lies in the heart of the flower". Su Shi looked at it and thought to himself, there is obviously a mistake:

How can Mingyue bark, no matter how small the yellow dog is, it can't lie on the heart of the flower! This is inconsistent with the facts, so it was changed to "The bright moon shines in the sky, and the yellow dog lies in the shade". Later, Su Shi learned that there was a local bird called Mingyue, and there was a small insect called the yellow dog, so he realized that he had corrected his mistake, so he came to apologize, and it became a good story for a while.

4. In addition to writing poems, hammering words and sentences can also help people win lawsuits. In ancient times, there was a county official who hated verbosity the most, and he was biased in judging cases. There was a woman who wanted to remarry after losing her husband, but her in-laws tried their best to dissuade her.

At this time, someone wrote a complaint for the woman, and the county magistrate issued a verdict at that time: "Marry". It turned out that there were only eight words on the complaint:

The husband died, there was no heir, Weng was widowed, and the uncle was strong. These four reasons clearly illustrate the woman's predicament. Words are like gold.

5. In fact, refining words can also save people's lives! Once upon a time, a county lieutenant checked the case file and saw the case file of one of his friends. There is a sentence on it, "A certain thief entered the door", this is the robber's doing, according to the law, the county lieutenant wants to help an acquaintance reduce the crime, so he added a stroke to a certain word of this sentence, when the case was decided, this person was changed from a capital crime to exile for three years, which word was changed, and there was such a big change?

It turned out that the word "big" was changed to the word "dog". The bandit behavior of "entering through the door" has become, and the petty theft of "entering the door of the dog" is "the difference between life and death".

Legend has it that Su Dongpo has a smart sister Su Xiaomei, whose poetry is above Dongpo. Once my sister asked her brother to test her brother, she asked her eldest brother to add a word to each of the "Light Breeze Willows" and "Light Moon Plum Blossoms" to say the poem. Su Dongpo didn't think twice, and came as soon as he opened his mouth:

Add "shake" in the first sentence, and add "Ying" in the last sentence, that is, "the breeze shakes the fine willows, and the light moon reflects the plum blossoms." Unexpectedly, Su Xiaomei was disdainful and ridiculed her as "inferior". After thinking about it seriously, Su Dongpo said two more sentences:

The breeze dances the willows, and the light moon hides the plum blossoms. The little sister smiled and said, "Although it is good, it is still not of the highest quality."

The eastern slope is dumb. Su Xiaomei was not in a hurry, and read out the answer: "The light wind supports the fine willows, and the light moon loses plum blossoms."

After Dongpo chanted and played, he couldn't help but be amazed. "Light breeze" slowly, if there is not, "fine willow" dynamic is not obvious, only the word "Fu" can just properly vividly depict the light breeze coming, willow branches are gentle and soft, and "light", "fine" is appropriate, harmonious and natural. The word "Fu" personifies the wind again, giving people a sense of softness.

The "shake" and "dance" of the eastern slope should be matched with the "wind" to be appropriate. In the next sentence, "reflection" is added without hazy beauty, and "hidden" is not appropriate. Since the tranquil moon has covered the earth, plum blossoms are naturally not as conspicuous as during the day.

In the moonlight, it is also overshadowed. In this way, the word "lost" depicts the scene of the moonlight and plum blossoms blending with each other. With this word, the sentence is full of brilliance.

The ancient poets of our country had a lot of feelings about refining words. Lao Du called himself "the new poem is changed and the long chant", Meng Jiao sighed "I study endlessly at night, and I am sad about ghosts and gods", Du Xunhe boasts of "the bitter minstrel of the rivers and lakes, the poorest person in heaven and earth", Lu Yanrang sighed "Yin'an one word, twist a few stems and whiskers", and Jia Dao was even more excited "two sentences and three years, one chant and two tears". If it is well refined, it will become a poetic eye, and even sentences with word names and poems with sentence names have been passed down through the ages.

The cicada noise forest is more quiet, and the birdsong mountain is more secluded", with "noise" lining "quiet", and "singing" lining "quiet", so that the characteristics of "quiet" are more prominent and more distinct. "Red apricot branches are noisy in spring", and the word "noisy" is written statically in a dynamic manner, showing the vitality of spring and giving people a beautiful enjoyment. "Breeze swallow oblique", a "oblique" word, turns movement into stillness, depicting a leisurely mood.

Legend has it that the Tang Dynasty poet Jia Dao rode a donkey to make poems, and got two sentences: "The bird stays in the tree by the pool, and the monk knocks on the door under the moon". The word "knock" in the second sentence wanted to change to the word "push", so he used his hands to push and knock, and inadvertently ran into Han Yu and explained the reason to Han Yu. Han Yu thought about it and said, it's good to use the word "knock".

Later generations used scrutiny as a metaphor for the words and phrases they pondered, pondering repeatedly. (scrutiny).

Wang Xizhi was the most famous calligrapher at that time, and his son Wang Xianzhi learned calligraphy from him. One day, Wang Xianzhi wrote many words with three cylinders of ink and showed them to his father. Wang Xizhi took a look and saw that a word was a little missing, so he added a little bit casually and said:

Tell your mother to see it. Wang Xianzhi took the words to his mother, who read them carefully and said, "My son has spent three jars of ink, and only one thing looks like Xizhi." ”

1. According to legend, the Northern Song Dynasty writer Su Dongpo discussed poetry with his sister Su Xiaomei and his poet friend Huang Valley. After the little sister said: "Light Breeze Fine Willow" and "Light Moon Plum Blossom", she asked her brother to add a word to each of them and say the poem.

Su Dongpo immediately said: The former adds "shake", and the latter sentence adds "Ying", that is, it becomes "the light wind shakes the fine willows, and the light moon reflects the plum blossoms." Unexpectedly, Su Xiaomei was rated as "inferior".

After thinking about it seriously, Su Dongpo said proudly: "There is, 'The light breeze dances the willows, and the light moon hides the plum blossoms.'" The little sister smiled

It's good, but it's still not top-notch. Huang Gu on the side couldn't help it, and asked, "What about the little sister's high opinion?"

Su Xiaomei read it: "The light wind supports the fine willows, and the light moon loses the plum blossoms." Su Dongpo and Huanggu Valley chanted, playfully prepared, and couldn't help but applaud the wonderful.

Imagine, if it is "August and autumn high wind roaring", the fine willow plum blossom is vulnerable, and it can only be a defeated willow remnant. In fact, the words "support" and "loss" not only grasp the characteristics of the scenery, but fundamentally speaking, it creates a harmonious and hazy and wonderful artistic conception.

2. The famous sentences in Du Fu's "Ascending" "Ten thousand miles of sad autumn are often guests, and more than a hundred years of illness are on the stage alone", and "Chang" is written for a long time and with high frequency, which strengthens the poet's loneliness and sadness due to ups and downs and long-term wandering; The word "independence", according to the principle of confrontation, can be understood as the meaning of "partial", but the poet wants to climb high in the autumn of many illnesses to feel nostalgic, this is not the embodiment of the great patriotic poet's persistent spirit of worrying about the country and the people, and not regretting despite nine deaths?

3. The Tang Dynasty poet Qi has written a poem "Early Plum", which includes two sentences: "In the deep snow in the front village, a few branches opened last night". After reading it, the poet Zheng Gu said that this poem is good, but it is appropriate to change the word "number" to the word "one". Qi has been applauded again and again, so worship Zheng Gu as a "word teacher".

Why is this "one" word tempered well? In fact, if we follow the real laws of life, the poet may see a few plum blossoms in Ling Han when he gets up in the morning; However, art is different from life after all, it has to be infectious, a word "one" gives people a novel and dazzling atmosphere much stronger than the word "number", and it has the charm that arouses the imagination of readers, and gives people infinite hope for manuscript noise.