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1 The school announced the list of outstanding Young Pioneers, and Li Li, a student in our class, was continuously rated as an outstanding Young Pioneer, but she was not proud at all. Her classmates complimented her, and she always said that she hadn't done enough.

2 The 10,000-meter race was very intense, and more than 20 athletes chased after each other on the field. They were all very fast, and they ran with considerable ease. The audience kept shouting"Come on", all hope that the athletes in this class will achieve good results.

1 The school announced the list of outstanding Young Pioneers, and Li Li, a student in our class, was continuously rated as an outstanding Young Pioneer. But she wasn't proud at all. Her classmates praised her, and she always said that "she didn't do enough".

2 The 10,000-meter run was very intense, and more than 20 athletes were chasing on the track. They all ran fast, but with a fairly easy run. The audience kept shouting "come on," hoping that the athletes in the class would achieve good results.

1.The school has announced the list of outstanding Young Pioneers, and Li Li, a student in our class, was once again rated as an outstanding Young Pioneer, but she was not proud at all. Her classmates praised her, and she always said that she had not done enough.

2.The 10,000-meter run was very intense, and more than 20 athletes were chasing me on the track, and they all ran fast and with considerable ease. The audience kept shouting"Come on"., all hope that the athletes in this class will achieve good results.

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1.Improper matching, footprints can not be changed: in the legend of the people in the Xiangshan area, a generation of literary heroes Cao Xueqin has traveled all over the version of the ravines and ravines here.

Right 2The purpose of this event is to show the historical process of the formation and development of Peking Opera art, and to promote the process of carrying forward the excellent traditions of national culture and building socialist spiritual civilization.

3.Ambiguity, our brothers have a deep brotherhood, how can I leave my brother and my disabled brother and go to the best performance by myself?

4. The structure is chaotic. It should be changed to: Our newspaper has received letters from the masses, and there has been no interruption in the letters from readers reflecting this problem.

5.Improper matching, change: Comrades of the poverty alleviation working group often go to the rural areas to understand the situation, and they have visited more than 50 towns and villages in Huanggang.

6.It is illogical to change: everyone knew in advance that this disaster was inevitable, and ** also made immigration arrangements, but there were still people who did not escape this disaster.

7.The lack of a subject is changed to: Some young people who lack social experience lack the concept of the legal system in their minds because they have been poisoned by bad ideas.

8.Ambiguity: Leading us on the tour is Wang Xiaoming's sister, with whom we have known each other for a long time.

9.Inappropriate word order, replace with; Humans not only have to adapt to their environment, but they also have to transform it.

Changed to: Up to now, the protection and tourism development and construction of Fuyang Longmen Ancient Town have made gratifying phased progress.

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Changed to: Up to now, the protection and tourism development and construction of Fuyang Longmen Ancient Town have been improved in stages.

1. We need to clarify the purpose of learning and correct the attitude towards learning. [Correct and unmodifiable purpose].

2. The cause of socialist construction should give full play to the role of the broad masses of intellectuals. [In. cannot be the subject of the subject].

3 The Zheng Guoren said that he would rather believe in the size than in his own feet.

1. We must have a correct attitude towards learning.

2. In the cause of socialist construction, we should give full play to the role of knowledge.

3 The Zheng Guoren said that he would rather believe in the size than in his own feet.

1. We must have a correct attitude towards learning. (The purpose of correcting is wrong).

2. In the cause of building socialism, the role of the broad masses of intellectuals should be brought into play. (extensive and fully repetitive).

3 The Zheng Guoren said, "I would rather believe in my feet than in size." (Common sense error).