Modify the sick sentence Urgently, urgently revise the sick sentence

May 17 is the "World Telecommunication and Information Society Day", and telecom operators around the world have held celebrations. Many telecommunications companies also organized managers ("reception" was replaced by "recorded") customer complaints and suggestions, and the scene was lively. However, after the lively scene.

Consumers) have been calling for a long time (pending to be solved) old issues ("any" is changed to "still") that remain unresolved.

1.I am at this public hearing.

I truly experienced the ugliness of human nature. 2.I braved the pouring rain and walked muddy roads.

Rush to the test site. 3.You just have to think about it to understand it. 4.Learn to write special reports.

Pay attention to improving the language and subject matter of the report. 5.These useless wastes.

I don't feel sorry for losing it. 6.He saw one of the largest statues in the world in China.

I couldn't help but look surprised. 7.College is an important stage in life. 8.I saw a man with a broad shoulder.

His eyes were blazing.

Dressed in a neat military uniform.

He was my teacher. 10.The mountains are full of fruits: pears, apples, persimmons, .........Wait.

Reference: myself!!

1.At this public hearing.

Make me truly appreciate the ugliness of human nature 2I braved the pouring rain and muddy roads.

Rush to the test site 3You only need to think a little bit about it to understand the truth 4When learning to write a special report.

Pay attention to the language and subject matter of the report 5These useless wastes.

I don't feel sorry for losing it 6He saw the largest Buddha statue in the world in China.

I couldn't help but show a look of surprise 7College students are one of the most important stages in life 8I saw a man with a strong body.

A man with bright eyes.

Dressed in a neat military uniform.

He is 9You can find pears, apples, persimmons, and ......... almost everywhere in the mountainsand other different varieties of fruits.

Reference: me

1. Delete'In'with'Medium'2 and after the addition of stepping 3 after understanding the addition of this truth, 5 delete the feeling, 6 exchange him with in China, 7 delete the birth, 10 delete everywhere.

As night falls, a round of bright moonlight spills onto the surface of the lake, and the lake water is sparkling.

Fixed: Wrong wording, "moonshine" can't use "one round", remove "one round".

Instead: When night falls, the moonlight shines on the lake, and the lake water is sparkling.

The shore is brightly lit and lively. "There's nothing wrong with that.

It turns out that people are holding the annual Lantern Festival. "There's nothing wrong with that.

On both sides of the street, there are rabbit lanterns, lotus lanterns, cotton lanterns, as well as slim pandas, cute lanterns and crane lanterns."

Modification: Lack of object, change: There are rabbit lanterns, lotus lanterns, cotton lanterns on both sides of the street, as well as slim pandas, cute lanterns and other lanterns.

The revised paragraph would read:

When night falls, the moonlight shines onto the lake, and the lake water sparkles. The shore is brightly lit and lively. It turns out that people are holding the annual Lantern Festival.

On both sides of the street, there are rabbit lanterns, lotus lanterns, cotton lanterns, as well as slim pandas, cute lanterns and other lanterns.

We see that the sun is only the size of a disk, and the sun is very far away from the earth.

Change: We see that the sun is only the size of a disk, because the sun is very far away from the earth.

The Chinese class is one of my favorite courses.

Change: Chinese is one of my favorite courses. Or, Chinese is one of my favorite courses.

The first sentence is a causal compound sentence that should be changed to: "We see the sun as the size of a disk because the sun is very far away from the earth." ”

The second sentence "most" and "one" contradict each other, as long as one is enough.

1.The first question is re-typed, there are typos, I don't understand.

2.Remove one of them, or remove the most.

Sentence 1: Because the sun is very close to the earth, we see that the sun is only the size of a disk.

Sentence 2: Chinese is one of my favorite subjects.

Sun Wealth Earth?? Brother doesn't understand

On Sundays, I sometimes listen to **, sometimes watch TV, and sometimes play chess at home.

I am conscientious and responsible for my work, and I can complete the tasks assigned to me by the teacher.

There is not much time left before the end of primary school, and we need to hurry up and review our homework.

On Sundays, I listen to ** and watch TV at home, and sometimes I play chess.

Because I am conscientious and responsible for my work, I can complete the tasks assigned to me by the teacher.

We don't have much time to graduate from elementary school, so we need to revise quickly.

1. Journalists should create a high-spirited, united, pioneering and innovative atmosphere for the successful convening of the 18th National Congress of the Communist Party of China.

3: The Chinese score of the fifth class of the sixth grade is the best in the school.

4: All localities and departments regard attaching importance to people's livelihood, ensuring people's livelihood, and improving people's livelihood as the foothold and expenditure point of all work.

5: Effectively reducing the peasants' burdens is the key to building a new socialist countryside.

1. Pioneer and innovate and add "situation".

2. The people of the city welcome our triumphant return.

3. Add "language score" before the best or remove "language score" (preferably change to the previous one).

4. All localities and departments regard attaching importance to reputation, ensuring people's livelihood and improving people's livelihood as the foothold and expenditure point of all work.

5. Remove "can".

1. Add the atmosphere at the back.

2. Remove the return.

3. Remove a class.

4., improve, protect, pay attention to these words in the wrong logical order, but I don't know how to change it yet.

5. Can you remove it.

1. The atmosphere of the back +.

2. Return and remove.

3. Remove a class.

5. Can you remove it.