A few questions about the revision of the sick sentence, the title of the modified sick sentence

1.Because teenagers already include students, the word "student" should be removed (there is doubt here, some people think that the combination of adolescent students is correct, and "observe the world with the eyes of beauty" and "feel the world with the heart of beauty" should be reversed, but there is less agreement with this statement)2"Drama fans" and "middle-aged and elderly friends" have been repeated, and it is better to delete "drama fans".

3.Reverse "days ago" with "successively". 4.

We generally say "vividly depicted" or "vividly portrayed", not "refute vividly", and personally think that this can be changed to "the body is incomplete". 5."Theory of non-publication" means "correct, unmodifiable speech", which is a compliment, and it is obviously incorrect to use it here.

It could be changed to "nonsense".

6."Question" means "to ask a question and ask someone to answer it", and it is used here and does not match the verb "to produce". should be replaced by "suspicion").

1.We should guide the vast number of young people to feel the world with a beautiful mind and observe the world with a beautiful eye. 2.

The quintessence of Peking Opera is comprehensive, mature and magnificent, and is deeply loved by fans and middle-aged and elderly friends. 3.The CEOs of the three major U.S. auto companies have said that they will automatically cut salaries.

4.Mr. Lu Xun's essays are profoundly and sharply written, and they can often vividly refute the reactionary arguments of the enemy. 5.

The argument that money is the omnipotence is simply unpublished. 6.The "Top Ten Singers Selection Competition" currently being held has attracted wide attention from all walks of life.

But through the superficial sensation, questions have been raised about the essence of the game.

Modify the sick sentence. 1. I have done a lot of good things for the sake of the class.

**: Incomplete ingredients. If some necessary elements are missing in a sentence, the meaning is incomplete and unclear.

Change: Xiao Ming has done a lot of good things for the class collective.

2. He is very calm and arbitrary.

**: Misnomer. Due to the unclear understanding of the meaning of words, it is easy to use inappropriately in terms of the scope of word meaning, praise and disapproval, especially the wrong use of synonyms and related words, resulting in sick sentences. "Arbitrary" is a derogatory term that is misused and should be replaced by "decisive".

Change: He is very calm and decisive.

3. At the party, we heard pleasant singing and beautiful dancing.

**: Misplaced words. In a sentence, some words cannot be matched with each other in meaning or are unreasonable, which violates the habits of language and causes a sick sentence.

This includes the improper use of some related words. "Hear" and "beautiful dance" obviously don't go well.

Change: At the party, we heard pleasant singing and saw beautiful dancing.

4. I guess he must have done it wrong.

**: Inconsistency. In the same sentence, the meaning expressed before and after is contradictory, resulting in ambiguity.

I guess he got it wrong. The first half of the sentence is probably not sure enough, and the second half of the sentence affirms that he is wrong, so there is a contradiction, what is the situation? Make it unclear.

Change: I guess he got it wrong.

5. I am very interested in language.

**: Word order is reversed. Under normal circumstances, the word order in a sentence is fixed, and if the word order changes and the position is reversed, the meaning of the sentence will change, and even cause a sick sentence. The positions of "language" and "me" are reversed.

Change: I'm interested in languages.

Categories: Education, Science, >> Learning Aid.

Problem description: 19. One of the following sentences without speech problems is ( ).

A during the "Tenth Five-Year Plan" period, Taizhou City will build a quality and technical assurance system, and strive to create 30 national famous brand products.

b Dust originating in Xinjiang is carried by the westerly circulation and affects the Pacific region, East Asia and China.

c We warmly welcome the leaders of the Education Committee to visit our school.

d In the past three years, the county's total grain production has grown by an average of 20 per cent per year.

Tell me the answer, and tell me what the other options are wrong.

Resolution: c correct.

a "Built"Instead"Perfect"

b "Pacific"with"East Asia and the Middle Banquet Hail Pure Country"Repeat.

d Total food production should be"Improve", and not"development"