What are the writing methods of the Five Heroes of Langya Mountain?

The writing method of the Five Heroes of Langya Mountain is to artistize history and use a lot of exaggerated sentences and figurative sentences.

Features:

The text is in a clear order, well-organized, focused, and appropriately detailed, and the words are full of reverence and praise for the five heroes. The text not only shows the heroic feat of the seventh company and the sixth class, but also highlights the movements, demeanor and language of the squad leader Ma Baoyu.

Their touching deeds have embodied the revolutionary heroic spirit of fearlessness, heroic tenacity, and unyielding willingness to die in the face of a formidable enemy, as well as the spirit of loyalty to the party, the people, and the motherland, and have become extremely precious spiritual wealth shared by the whole nation.

The main intentions of this article are: first, to let students feel the heroic spirit of the five heroes, carry forward the national spirit, and stimulate patriotic enthusiasm from the touching words that express heroic feats; The second is to comprehend the writing method of writing people's accounts through reading, and improve the ability to express expressions.

The text is narrated in the order in which things unfold.

The full text consists of nine self-macro potato state paragraphs, which can be divided into five parts. The first part (the first natural section) covers the source, and talks about the seventh company and the sixth squad accepting the task of covering the masses and the transfer of the company. The second part (the second natural section) talks about the six classes of five warriors luring the enemy up the mountain and beating the enemy.

The third part, Hand Zao (the third natural section), talks about the decision of five warriors to lead the enemy to a dead end.

Part IV (p.

The fourth and fifth natural sections), talk about five strong men who led the enemy to the top of Langya Mountain and bravely annihilated the enemy. The fifth part (the sixth-ninth natural section) tells the story of five heroes who bravely and heroically jumped off the cliff. The order of the narrative can be summarized as follows:

Accept the mission, smash the enemy, lead to a dead end, destroy the enemy at the top, and jump off the cliff. The first of these.

Parts 2, 4 and 5 are written in detail, and the rest are abbreviated.

I think the biggest special point of this article is that it is realistic and vivid, and the whole process makes you feel the tragedy of the war and the heroism of the soldiers. Qi Pi.

The writing characteristics of the five heroes of Langya Mountain are: point, face, and ridge. There are not only descriptions of the overall battle scenes of the five heroes, but also detailed descriptions of the individual heroes of the five heroes, showing the hatred of the enemy and the love for the motherland of the five heroes who judged Chi Zhuang to be the model.

The writing characteristics of "Five Heroes of Langya Mountain" are mainly reflected in the following three aspects:

1. The narrative sequence is appropriate and the context is clear. This article is narrated in the order of the development of events, and the order of the full text can be summarized as: accepting or talking about the mission——— destroying the enemy——— leading to a dead end——— destroying the enemy at the peak——— and jumping off the cliff bravely. Written in this way, the narrative context is very clear.

2. Language description, vivid image. There is almost no psychological description in the whole text of the dust, and most of them reveal the thoughts and feelings of the heroes through the words and actions of the characters. For example, the squad leader Ma Baoyu said "go", concise and clear, showing his firm attitude, decisive judgment, and urgent situation.

3. The topic is clear and the focus is highlighted. The full text highlights the word "strong", first writing that five people face an enemy who is several times more than themselves, accept the cover task, and imitate the "strong" of their courage; then write about heroic battles, strike at the enemy, and reveal the "strongness" of his actions; then writes about luring the enemy into a desperate situation, revealing that the strong men are not only heroic, but also resourceful; In the end, he shouted the slogan and jumped off the cliff to reveal the "strongness" of his integrity.

The writing of "Five Heroes of Langya Mountain" is characterized by proper detail. The most detailed parts such as destroying enemies at the summit and jumping off cliffs are written.

The second natural paragraph of the text focuses on both the group of characters and each of the warriors. Sometimes a certain person is described in a focused manner, such as the squad leader Ma Baoyu is described in detail, and sometimes the five strong men in the class are described in a general way, which not only pays attention to the group, but also writes about each of the soldiers, so it gives people a very comprehensive feeling and is very specific. This is called "a little permeable and bright, and the combination of points and faces".

It not only takes into account comprehensiveness and reflects breadth, but also highlights the key points and reflects depth.

1.The Five Heroes of Langya Mountain are real, famous anti-Japanese heroes.

2.If you want to create with this as the background, don't make some more magical changes or even distortions to it, at most, like those anti-Japanese dramas, you can dye their stories, and the main image cannot be changed.

Introduction:They are Ma Baoyu, the squad leader of the 6th squad of the 7th Company of the 1st Regiment of the 1st Army Subdivision of the Jinchaji Military Region of the Eighth Route Army and a member of the Communist Party, Ge Zhenlin, the deputy squad leader and a member of the Communist Party, and the soldiers Song Xueyi, Hu Delin, and Hu Fucai. In August 1941, the North China Front of the Japanese invasion army mobilized more than 70,000 troops to carry out a devastating "sweep" of the Beiyue and Pingxi (now western Beijing) base areas belonging to the Shanxi-Chahar-Hebei Border Region.

On September 25, about 3,500 Japanese puppet troops besieged the Langya Mountain area southwest of Yixian County, in an attempt to annihilate the Eighth Route Army and local party and government organs in the area. The 7th Company was ordered to cover the transfer of party and government organs, troops and the masses. When the task was completed and evacuated, 5 soldiers including Ma Baoyu of the 6th squad were left to act as the rear guard to block and cover the transfer of the whole company.

The 5 soldiers of the 6th squad were firm and composed, took advantage of the favorable terrain, bravely fought back, repelled many attacks by the Japanese puppet army, and killed and wounded more than 90 people. The next day, in order to prevent the Japanese puppet army from discovering that the company had shifted direction, they fought and retreated, leading the Japanese puppet army to the top of the chessboard peak of Langya Mountain. The Japanese puppet army mistakenly believed that it had bitten the main force of the Eighth Route Army, so it launched a fierce attack.

The five warriors bravely resisted the danger, and after the bullets ran out, they fought back with stones and continued to fight until sunset. In the face of the approaching Japanese puppet army, they would rather die than give in, destroy their guns, and jump off the cliff dozens of feet deep without hesitation. Ma Baoyu, Hu Delin, and Hu Fucai were martyred; Ge Zhenlin and Song Xueyi were hung by the branches on the mountainside and survived.

The feats of the five soldiers showed lofty patriotism, revolutionary heroism and unyielding national integrity, and were praised by the people as "the five heroes of Langya Mountain". The leading organ of the Shanxi-Chahar-Hebei Military Region awarded the title of "Model Honorary Soldier" to 3 martyrs; The general order commended Ge Zhenlin and Song Xueyi, and awarded the medal of "brave and tenacious". In order to commemorate and commend the five anti-Japanese heroes, the local revolutionary ** built the "Three Martyrs Monument of Langya Mountain" on the top of Qipantuo Peak.

In May 1959, it was rebuilt and renamed the "Five Warriors Memorial Tower of Langya Mountain". The inscription for the memorial tower: "Regard death as home, the revolutionary soldier should have the spirit, and it is the glorious tradition of Yan Zhao heroes to die rather than yield."

After the founding of the People's Republic of China, Song Xueyi transferred to local work and died in 1971. Ge Zhenlin left his post in July 1981 to recuperate, and his predecessor was the deputy director of the Logistics Department of the Hengyang Military Division of the Hunan Provincial Military Region, and passed away in 2005.

"Five Heroes of Langya Mountain" is included in the 6th lesson of the sixth grade of the unified edition of the people's education edition, the 25th lesson of the first volume of the sixth grade of the Beijing curriculum revision, the 22nd lesson of the second volume of the fifth grade of the primary school of the Jijiao edition, the 6th grade of the people's education edition of the first volume of the sixth grade, the 13th lesson of the fourth grade of the Shanghai education edition and the 14th lesson of the second volume of the fourth grade of the Lujiao edition.

In the first part (1st natural paragraph), it is written that the sixth squad of the seventh company received the task of covering the masses and the transfer of troops.

In the second part (paragraph 2), it is written that five soldiers of the sixth squad lured the enemy up the mountain and beat the enemy severely.

In the third part (3rd natural paragraph), it is written that five warriors decide to lead the enemy to a dead end.

In the fourth part (the first paragraph), it is written that five warriors lead the enemy to the top of the Wolf's Tooth Mountain and then hit the enemy again.

In the fifth part (6th and 9th paragraphs), it is written that five strong men bravely jumped off the cliff.

The order of the full text can be summarized as follows: accept the mission——— annihilate the enemy——— lead to a dead end——— the peak to destroy the enemy——— and bravely jump off the cliff.

Brilliant statement. In order to hold back the enemy, the five soldiers of the sixth squad of the seventh company beat the enemy who was chasing after them, and at the same time systematically led a large number of enemies to Langya Mountain. ”

This quote shows that the five fighters have amazing bravery and a determined sense of mission. They are not striking at the enemy in general, but attracting a large number of enemies in order to accomplish the task, ensuring the transfer of masses and main forces. "...... side"...... sideThis juxtaposition shows that the five warriors were both brave and good at fighting, and they fought with wisdom and bravery.

In order to prevent the enemy from discovering the masses of the people and the main force of the company, the squad leader Ma Baoyu said categorically: 'Go! 'Take the lead and walk towards the chessboard. The fighters were enthusiastic and followed closely behind the squad leader. ”

These two sentences describe the purpose and process of the five warriors' choice of a dead end. The five fighters had already completed their task and could safely catch up with the large army, but instead of doing so, they consciously led the enemy to a dead end in order to better ensure the safety of the masses and the main forces. In the face of "life" and "death", we give up "life" and take "death".

Categorically", the metaphor is firm and decisive in dealing with things or speaking without hesitation. The words "go" were sonorous and powerful, which showed the firmness and decisiveness of the soldiers.

Suddenly, like hailstones, the stones smashed on the enemy's head with the determination of the five strong men and the hatred of the Chinese people. ”

The stone is compared to a hailstone, reflecting the swiftness, power and intensity of the stone hitting the enemy. Writing that the stone smashed into the enemy "with the determination of the five warriors and with the hatred of the Chinese people" is written in a figurative way, revealing the source of the strength of the five warriors' heroic battle.

This is the strong and unyielding voice of the heroic Chinese people! This voice is earth-shattering and majestic. ”

These two sentences praise the feats of the five fighters, "Down with Japanese imperialism" and "Long live the Communist Party of China" are the common aspirations of the people of the whole country, and the Chinese people can be strong, unyielding, and heroic under the leadership of the Communist Party of China. "This voice is earth-shattering and majestic," pointing out that the Chinese people will not waver in their determination to resist the war, the strength of the war of resistance is incomparably huge, and the war of resistance will surely be won.

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