Does this make sense? Are there any mispronunciations? 15

The "this" can be removed from the various folk arts with strong local characteristics;

I have benefited a lot, and I have also deeply felt the richness of the cultural heritage of our province. It further prompted me to pursue and explore art, and it was better to replace "in" with "and"; At the same time, the full stop was replaced with a comma, and "further promoted my pursuit and exploration of art" was changed to "prompted me to pursue and explore art further".

Let "make the sentence an ownerless sentence and should be removed;

"Strong local characteristics" and "folk" are repeated, and "many" and "various" are repeated, and only one of them can be retained.

I really benefited a lot from participating in this event. I not only saw all kinds of folk art, but also deeply felt the richness of the cultural heritage of our province, and also prompted me to pursue and explore art.

Let me see a lot of this strong local characteristics are a bit bad, rich and inappropriate, should be deleted.

Participating in this event allowed me to see a lot of folk arts with various strong local characteristics, which benefited me a lot, and also deeply felt the richness of the cultural heritage of our province. It has made my pursuit and exploration of art more intense. ”

It further motivated me to pursue and explore art. ”

I find this sentence problematic.

It cannot be said that it promotes.

Yes It became that the baby is the meaning of the son flying child.

Replace "little baby" with "little brother and little sister".

(changed to read as follows).

There are three of us in my family, my mom and dad, and every morning as soon as we go out, the three of us go our separate ways, and we go the same way in the evening. Dad is an architect and directs work on the construction site every day; Mom is a salesperson and receives customers in the store every day; I am a student and study hard in the classroom every day. The three members of my family all have common interests, and the family is harmonious, but when my grades are not good, my father is also very concerned and patiently teaches me, and my mother is on the side, silently encouraging me.

I have three people in my house, Mom and Dad, and I go out every morning, and the three of us go our separate ways, and in the evening.

Dad is an architect and spends his days on the construction site (hand-to-hand); Mom is a salesperson, and she is in the store every day.

Do not refuse; I'm a student, and every day in the classroom (dumbfounded) and (deaf).

Three members of my family (who smell like), and the family is a harmonious mess. But when my grades were not good, my father was also (in the same room), (heart.

Beat me (bruised all over my body) and threw myself to the ground, and my mother stood by (ignored) or (stood by), never (seeing righteousness.

bravely), and sometimes even (aiding and abetting).

are inappropriate.

In such a short article, such idioms are used, and the children can be taught.

The following is corrected, and the words in parentheses are discarded.

My family has my parents, my three of us, and as soon as we go out every morning, the three of us (parting ways) to win glory for the country, and in the evening (different paths to the same return) gather in a warm home.

Dad is an architect, and he is high-spirited and commanding on the construction site every day; Mom is a salesperson, and she serves enthusiastically in the store every day, and (those who come do not refuse) are not happy; I am a student, and every day in the classroom (dumbfounded) attentive and (deaf) attentive.

The three members of my family (who smell like) help each other, love each other, and the family (a harmonious group) is happy. But when my grades were not good, my father was also in a heavy mood, (ruthless) and serious (beaten) to give me some encouragement (bruised all over my body, throwing myself to the ground), Chunchun taught, and my mother was on the side (ignoring or standing by) to follow the good path, never (righteous and courageous) reprimand, scolding, and sometimes (even helping to abuse) to help me analyze the reasons and find a way to correct it, this is my home.

There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and me, and every morning as soon as we go out, the three of us go our separate ways, and then come back in the evening.

Dad was an architect and commanded on the construction site every day; Mom is a salesperson who warmly greets visitors in the store every day; I am a student, and I am in the classroom every day with my eyes and attention.

The three members of my family get along very well, but when my grades are not good, my father will also discipline me strictly, and my mother will not say much on the side, and sometimes help my father say a few words to me.

It is enough to replace all derogatory idioms with positive ones.

parting ways, going their separate ways, going their separate ways, going to the same end, comparing hands and feet; swagger and deception, and those who come do not refuse; Dumbfounded and deaf. The smell is like-minded, and the gas is harmonious. Fighting in the same room, ruthless and bruised, throwing himself to the ground, turning a blind eye, standing by and watching, acting bravely, and helping to abuse.

You seem to have consciously written this upside down. You can write it yourself, and you will change it.

Boy, change what you write yourself. If you want to lie to me, you're still tender. Ha ha!

Isn't that great, but at least it makes people laugh.

Patronize --- patronize.

Your company --- your company.

If you are interested--- if you meet the application requirements.

You can discuss with me as soon as possible--- please inform me as soon as possible.

It's amazing!! Such an essay deserves full marks and does not require any revision.

Halo This feels like a complete abuse of idioms, very childish writing, and can't change ......

1.(2007 Ningxia volume) In order to enrich the life of the city, the municipal corporation has made a comprehensive plan and built three cultural squares, one of which was built by leveling a pit of more than 20 meters.

"Razing to the ground" generally refers to the bulldozing and elimination of tall and protruding buildings, so that they become flat land and cannot be used for "deep pits".

Illogical. 2."At the meeting, everyone talked about their views on the school, and it seemed that everyone's hopes were not the same. ”

The word "view" was used in the front, and the word "hope" was replaced in the back, which secretly changed the concept.

3.There are three taboos in sleep: one taboo not to be angry before going to bed, the second taboo not to eat enough before going to bed, and the third taboo not to be the wind in the lying place.

"Don't" and "can't" mean the same, and the combination of the two causes the double negation to be improper and causes confusion of expression. The three "taboos" and three "must nots" after the colon can be deleted. Negative improper, repetitive.

4.(2007 Hubei volume) reform and opening up to invigorate the economy, the farmers' market goods are dazzling, in addition to a variety of seasonal fresh vegetables, there are meat, aquatic products, fish, shrimp, soft-shelled turtle, bullfrog and a variety of condiments.

Aquatic products" wrong. Improper juxtaposition, "aquatic products" include "fish, shrimp, soft-shelled turtle", etc. The scope is unclear.

5.Cloudless and starry, we strolled around the campus under the light of a bright moon.

That word is misused, you know o(o