Appreciation at the end of the second paragraph of Summer Sense , the segmentation and paragraph me

At the beginning of "Summer Sense", the author wrote: "What fills the whole summer is a tense, enthusiastic, and rapid melody. It was as if a pot of cold water on the stove was gradually bubbling and bubbling until it finally boiled, and the fine grass on the hillside gradually grew into a dense thick hair, and the faint green smoke on the forest belt condensed into a long wall of dark colors.

Here, the simple and somewhat clumsy metaphor of "a pot of cold water", the personification of the fresh and lively "dense thick hair", and the clever and precise choice of words of "long wall", the author seems to be conducting a top-down scan, and with a few shots, he outlines the macrocosm of the summer scene. And the sentence "annoying cicadas, the potential leaves chirp one after another" is like the off-picture of the above set of shots**. The "annoyance" here shows the heat of summer, but there is no dull trace; conveys the noise of summer, without any trace of dryness.

The long sound of overflowing between the trees reflects the bright color of the summer scene, sets off an atmosphere of "cicada noise forest is more than quiet", and also shows the fullness, heaviness and calmness of the summer earth. As a result, in the complementarity of sound and color, and the blending of fiction and reality, the author has set a high-spirited and positive tone for the whole text.

Then, the author pans his perspective and moves the camera downward, as if looking into the vast wilderness, looking at the rolling waves of wheat "beating against the mountains in the distance, the clouds in the sky, the cars on the road, like the waves of the sea surging against ships." Here, what the author presents to us is no longer a simple restoration of the real world, but a kind of enlightened scenery, a flickering of external objects on the screen of the author's mind; In other words, it is a projection of the times that reflects the author's emotional beam. Then, a floating hot wind "drifts across the field", which seems to blow "the aroma of ripe wheat" to the author and the reader.

This dot dye is not only just right but also the icing on the cake. Just as the contrast of the cicada chirping in the front is reflected in a blend of sound and color, the dotting here is reflected in a harmony of color and fragrance. If the previous setting is a kind of atmosphere pointing, then the point dyeing here is a kind of emotional display - showing the richness and fullness of life.

It is after such a detailed foreshadowing that the author calmly directs his brushstrokes to the point of commitment of the meaning of the article—"the spirit of spring has been accumulated for half a year, and at this time it has become a majestic momentum, rolling on the fields and rising between heaven and earth."

Just pay attention to a series of verbs.

"Summer Sense".The subparagraph and the meaning of the paragraph:

1. Part 1: (1st paragraph): The writer's overall feeling about summer: nervous, warm" and "urgent".

2. Part 2: (paragraphs 2-4): The author praises the beauty of summer from three aspects. It depicts the natural scenery in summer and the scenes of farmers working in summer.

3. Part III: (the last natural paragraph): Summarize the full text, praise the hard-working people, and express the author's love and praise for summer.

Appreciation of summer feeling: The opening chapter describes the fierce summer as "a tense, warm, and rapid melody of the hail bridge", which aptly expresses the feeling that summer usually gives us. Then the description of the next paragraph is very exciting, the scene of "a pot of water" slowly bubbling and rising, fine grass.

Dense as thick hair, green smoke condensed like a long wall, the beautiful scenery is actually the summer around us, but the novel metaphor is more rendering.

The cicadas chirp, the sun bakes the earth, the wheat waves, the distant mountains, the clouds, a series of images reveal the color and momentum, which is to tell people that summer is coming. This description is to pave the way for the colors of the following summer, but just appreciating this passage has carefully set off the atmosphere of a prelude to summer, which is already a charming scene, and the description of the unique yellow color of summer is even more vivid.

Whole. There are five natural sections in the text, which can be divided into three parts.

The first part (1) summarizes the overall characteristics of the summer and spring laughing season.

The second part (2-4) describes the natural scenery in summer and the scenes of peasants working in summer.

The third part (5) expresses the author's love and praise for summer.

Summer is not a favored season in the writer's writing. Perhaps, the germination of spring flowers can give people a kind of pleasure of regeneration, and the harmony of spring can make people's feelings be released; Perhaps, the harvest of autumn can give people a kind of mature satisfaction, and the loneliness of autumn can make people's hearts get a dripping catharsis; And what about Summer? Maybe it's too hot, too dense, too "too thick to melt", so it always gives people a sense of disharmony and overload.

Therefore, chanting spring and autumn, ancient and modern dances and ink makers, almost like carp crossing the river. And what about Summer? Either the face is hideous and disgusting, or it is written as "ruthless thoughts when you sleep every day" and "tired hands throw away books and long dreams in the afternoon", revealing a helpless sense of loss in a relaxed and leisurely way.

However, the article "Summer Feeling" is full of enthusiasm and "loudly praises this ** summer between spring and autumn." Summer is the season of accumulation and precipitation to create a majestic trend, and it is the season of connecting the past and the next; Xia is holding up the arms of golden autumn; Summer is indispensable in the changing of the seasons. Without summer, the germination of spring falls into nothingness; There is no summer, and the joy of autumn is the water and the moon.

Embrace and love summer, embrace summer, love summer is to embrace our life, love our life. In addition, part of the content of the article is used to describe the working people, which reflects the author's love and respect for the working people.