Help me correct Chinese articles written by foreigners.

Eating vegetables associated with the experience"Replace it with "about the experience of eating vegetables.""

The experience of being greedy for small and suffering big losses is no exception. One of these experiences happened last year"Replace the two experiences with the word "experience".

That's very profitable" to "you can get a little cheap".

They weren't cooked when they were bought" after "after".

Looking at the soft persimmons makes me want to eat" is really not smooth, so it is better to change it"Looking at the delicious soft persimmons, I really want to eat them."

But because they are not cooked at all, the "lieutenant general" because "because" is removed.

They make me feel bad, "let them go."

In the fourth week, I felt that I had enough time to look at them" was also unreliable, and changed it to "In the fourth week, I felt that it was time to see them".

I found that they were all suddenly ripe" and "suddenly" removed.

There is no way to discard a few" to replace "no way" with "only", and "discard" to "discard".

Not only did I give up a few, but I couldn't eat them very comfortably" and changed it to "Not only can I not enjoy them, but I also discard some of them".

The correction is basically the same, if there is anything you don't understand, you can ask me.

Brothers, you don't need to change it, we have Chinese English in our book, you write British Chinese, and the world is just around the corner, and this style of writing is commendable.

P.S., what is your native language? How many years have you been learning Chinese? It's really well written, and I can't write English essays at a level that a British person can read.

I love to eat vegetables. Not only do I eat a wide variety of foods, but I eat them regularly. So I had a lot of experiences related to eating vegetables.

The experience of being greedy for a small price and suffering a big loss is no exception. One of them happened last year.

I love to eat soft persimmons. One day I went to the supermarket to buy persimmons. The salesman said to me that if I buy a box of persimmons, then they will give me a discount.

I thought it was a good deal, so I bought a box. They weren't ripe when they were bought, and they weren't ripe two weeks later. I want to eat persimmons when I look at them.

But they weren't ripe yet, and it made me depressed. By the third week, I didn't care about them. In the fourth week, I took the time to take a look, and it turned out that they were all ripe.

Ripe persimmons are easy to rot. So at first I ate two a day and four in two days. But a box of persimmons, at this rate, can you eat it that day?

I had to keep the rest in the freezer. But it can't be broken! I just threw the broken ones out.

Is it enjoyable to keep eating it while throwing it away? This is greedy for small and cheap and big losses.

Since it is a soft persimmon, why is it not ripe at all?

Is it a soft persimmon or a hard persimmon?

Let's change it briefly, I don't care about the details, it's still a little inexplicable

Dwight David D. Eisenhower said, "A sense of humor is part of the art of leadership, and an indispensable part of dealing with people," and "My greatest merit and wealth is good eloquence and a sense of humor." Like my mom, I have an optimistic attitude and a certain sense of humor, and although I have been through three school transfers, I can talk to people in an unfamiliar environment and have good relationships.

A character like mine has great merit in cultural exchange. "When I was a student, I actively participated in school activities, and those who fell behind sometimes walked to keep up with them, and I was the captain of the school club to lead the class. I don't know what you want to say?

My weakness is that I have a very soft and sensitive heart hidden under a strong exterior, and sometimes I suffer.

Because of an unexpected opportunity, I went to Shanghai, my horizons broadened a lot, I saw different cultural styles, participated in the Chinese Chinese Industry Creative Forum, and simply understood China's cultural industry. "I want to introduce my friends to my family, and I want to contribute to the development of the cultural activities of the Chinese Cultural Center in Korea." 》？

This is not an article. To get someone else to change it, you have to explain what the text is for. Whether it's a self-introduction or a short statement at a networking session. Others can help you change it.

1.What are some of the educational courses you've taken so far?

2.Does the content of the education help improve your ability to do the job? What kind of educational content do you find helpful? Why isn't some educational content helpful to you?

3.Do you think educators are working hard enough to improve the capabilities of their employees? What are the aspects of their efforts? Why do you think they're not working hard enough?

Do you think there is a difference in the effectiveness of education between social educators and in-house educators? If so, in what ways? In what areas are there no differences?

4。Is the content of the training appropriate for your level? In what ways is it suitable? In what ways is it not suitable?

Do you think the training environment is suitable? What kind of educational environment do you think is ideal?

1What are the educational courses you have taken so far? 2Does the content of the education help me to improve my ability to work? If so, how do you think it can be promoted, and if not, why?

3. Do you think there are specific behaviors and practices of educators today to improve the ability of employees, and is there a difference in the effectiveness of education between people in the education industry and those outside the industry?

4. As far as you are concerned, is the content of the training suitable for you, please name the specific aspects that are suitable and not suitable, and whether the training environment is suitable for you? What do you think is the ideal educational environment?

1.What are the educational courses you have taken so far?

2.Will the content you study help me improve my ability to do my job?

In what way is the content of education to help me? Why do you think it helps?

3.Do you think educators work hard to empower their employees? In what ways? Why not? Do you see a difference in the effectiveness of education between outside educators and insider educators?

If so, what are the differences? Where are there no differences?

4。Is the content of the training appropriate for your level? In what ways is it appropriate? In what ways is it not suitable?

Do you think it's appropriate in terms of the training environment? Which educational environment do you think is the best?

There was a farmer who lived in poverty and hardship with his seven-year-old son, whose wife died when he was two years old. Since then, he has raised his son alone. , working in the fields every day.

All year round, I get up at dawn in the morning and walk to the fields with a hoe; In the evening, the sun was about to set, and I went home with a hoe. He's really hard. But the money he earned was still not enough for the two of them to eat.

One day he went to the field to hoe, and his son went to play in the nearby meadow. After three hours, the son suddenly shouted:"Wolves, wolves....Daddy help me...."When the peasant heard this, he was frightened for a moment and ran quickly to save the child.

The wolf saw the peasant with the hoe and fled in fear. The farmer was relieved to see that his son was okay. The son said to him happily:

Dad, look! There was a rabbit under the tree, and it ran so fast that it ran into the tree. "The farmer broke the neck of the rabbit, and the rabbit soon died.

Let's take it home! "The farmer said to his son.

The farmer thought:"I had such good luck today! It didn't take much effort to pick up the rabbit, and at home I could use it to make something delicious, and tomorrow I could go to the market and sell the rabbit's skin. If a rabbit runs into a tree every day, I don't have to work! How nice! "

And also -- still frightened -- frightened hoe with a hoe, not a rake, not a jump, but an escape, because the wolf is scared, and the rabbit doesn't break its neck because it touches a tree, it should be artificial.

Well, I didn't understand it directly, I hope someone can help you get it.