The language modifies the fixed collocation of sick sentences, and modifies the improper collocation

Improper collocation of subject and predicate:

1 The rooster that announces the dawn is the signal of the gathering.

Change: The rooster's dawn is a signal for gathering.

2 Autumn in Beijing is a beautiful season.

Change: Autumn in Beijing is a beautiful season.

3 Some long-standing controversial issues have progressed to varying degrees.

Greeting socks law: Some long-standing controversial issues have been resolved to varying degrees.

4 Over the past three years, the county's total grain production has grown at an average annual rate of 20 percent.

Amendment: "development" is changed to "improve".

5 As soon as he entered the class, the eyes of his classmates were focused on him.

Change: Changed "eyes" to "gaze".

6 The excavation began, and our task and deadline were very arduous and intense.

Modification: The excavation began, and our task was arduous and the construction period was tight.

Mismatched verb and object:

1 We advocate a step-by-step approach.

Change: We take the ...... from shallow to deep

2 Millet contains protein, iron and vitamin B1

B2 is abundant. Modification: Xiaomengpai locust rice contains protein, iron and vitamins B1 and B2

3 The labor force that participated in the construction of the Red Star Canal responded to the call of the superiors to carry out the construction task quickly and well, and strive to complete the project ahead of schedule.

Change: Delete "Task".

4 He took the initiative to specialize in engineering mechanics for this department.

of the two sessions of Structural Mechanics of Ships.

The study class provoked a thin shell.

The main task of three courses, such as mechanics and ship structural mechanics.

Change: Replace "task" with "burden".

5 The heroes planted the red flag and victory in the enemy's position.

Amendment: Delete the words "and victory".

Determinatives, adverbials, complements, and central words.

Improper matching. 1 The solid foundation he had laid in secondary school created the conditions for further self-study.

Amendment: Delete "knowledge".

2 We should pay attention to uniting comrades who do not get along with us and are not accustomed to it.

Reform: We must pay attention to uniting comrades who are not compatible with us and who we are not accustomed to.

3 The teacher asked the reason, thought for a while, and slowly paced to me.

Change: "slightly" to "for a moment".

4. Students pay close attention to and listen to the principal's speech.

Amendment: Delete "fixation and".

A portion of the joint phrase is not properly paired with the pairing ingredient.

1 The party staged **, dance, quyi, gymnastics, martial arts and other cultural programs.

Amendment: Delete "literature and art".

2 And he went out of the house, dressed in his shirt and hat.

Change: He put on his clothes and hat and walked out of the house.

3 Rock 'n' roll.

The intense and fast rhythm and blurry flickering lighting effects are dazzling to watch.

Change: "dazzled" to "distracted".

Improper collocation of related words:

1 The younger brother is very young, so he knows a lot.

Change: My younger brother is very young, but he knows a lot of truths.

2 If we lack the spirit of innovation, we will not be able to adapt to the development of society.

Amendment: Replace "also" with "just".

Improper collocation sentences are as follows:

1. The total grain production of our county has made great strides forward.

2. The north wind and snowflakes are drifting one after another.

3. Taxis, regardless of whether they use taxi software or not, should abide by the operating rules, so as to safeguard the legitimate rights and interests and reasonable requirements of all parties involved.

4, "Romance of the Three Kingdoms".

This ** brilliantly portrayed Liu Bei and Guan Yu in the late Han Dynasty.

The heroic deeds of Zhang Fei and others.

5. The wheat harvest is the best year in recent years.

6. According to scientists' statistics, bees need to collect about 500,000 pollen for every pound of honey brewed.

7. Under the encouragement of teachers and classmates, his academic performance has been greatly improved.

8. Only by abiding by academic ethics can we eliminate academic corruption and purify the academic atmosphere.

9. He has put a lot of effort into cultivating good seeds.

10. I have a pair of smart and capable hands, and I can make everything.

11. As the national anthem sounded, the eyes of the masses were focused on the national flag raised high.

12. Leading cadres.

If you can't take the interests of the people as the starting point and do practical things for the people, you don't deserve to sit in that position.

Improper collocation refers to the fact that some components of a sentence do not conform to grammatical rules or are unreasonable to collocation, including improper subject-verb collocation, improper verb-object collocation, definite, adverbial, complement and central language.

Improper collocations and related words.

Improper matching, etc.

1) Improper subject-verb collocation.

For example, the production of cotton in China was not self-sufficient in the past. (Not self-sufficient.)"Cotton"It's not"production"。）

The liberation of the Chinese people has brought about fundamental changes in ethnic relations. （"The liberation of the Chinese people"Nope"change"，"change"Yes"Ethnic relations"。The correct expression should be a conjunctive sentence and should be changed"In"for"make"）

2) Improper collocation of verb and object.

For example: He officially retired from his career as an athlete after the Games. ("Exit.......)Before liberation, the money earned by my father and brother was not enough to support the family. （"Feed"It can only be people, not people"life"。）

3) Improper collocation of modifiers and central words.

For example, teachers are responsible for training a large number of scientific and technological teams. (The word "team" should be replaced by the word "talent").

In the darkness, the sound of rolling and crawling footsteps could be heard. ("Rolling and climbing" cannot modify "footsteps",)

4) One side and both sides are not properly matched.

For example, doing a good job in production and disaster relief depends on whether the cadres' work style is in-depth. （"Do a good job"It's one-sided"Whether it is in-depth"It's two-sided. ）

Artists have always been blinded in the past, but now they are eagerly favored by people, and between this white eyes and favor, they taste the warmth of the world. （"White-eyed"with"Favor"Refers to the opposite of the two sides, but underneath"Warm"Applies to one side only. ）

5) Mismatch between negation and affirmation.

For example: I guess this should not be narrated, and there is no one who would not fail to imagine it. （"There's no one who can't imagine it"It's equivalent to saying"No one could have imagined it", presumably the original meaning"No one can imagine"。）

I don't completely deny that the poem doesn't reveal hope, but that hope is very slim.

Not completely denied"Equal"Partially recognized", basically still admitted. Hence the phrase says trembling"We admit that the poem does not reveal hope", which is exactly the opposite of the author's original intention. There are two ways to change the law"We also admit that this poem also reveals some hope and hope ......"or"We do not deny that the poem also reveals some ...... of hope"

In addition to the ticket issued, the family members must have a family badge, and no one of them is allowed to enter.

Admission without one or the other will be admitted"Literally, there can be"You can enter with one of the two"meaning. It is not in line with the original meaning, it should be said, "You can't enter without one of the two?" ”

The 8 basic ways to modify a sick sentence are as follows:1. Skill strategy: When we have narration, there will be incomprehensible words or sentences with language problems, and others often can't understand after listening to or reading them, which is called sick sentences.

2. Common types of sick sentences and modification methods:

1. Sentence components are incomplete.

For example: we must follow the habit of discipline.

Change: We must develop the habit of discipline.

2. Improper collocation of words.

For example: we must uphold the glorious traditions of the revolution.

Reform: We must inherit the glorious traditions of the revolution.

3. Repetitive semantics.

For example: I couldn't help but laugh out loud.

Change: I couldn't help but laugh out loud.

4. The word order is incorrect.

For example, we must carefully correct and double-check for mistakes in the homework.

Correction: We must carefully check and seriously correct the mistakes in the homework.

5. Inconsistencies.

For example: Yesterday evening there was a night of wind.

Change: There was a gust of wind yesterday evening. Or: The wind blew overnight yesterday.

6. The meaning of the sentence is ambiguous or wrong.

For example: No one can deny that the earth does not revolve around the sun.

Change: No one will deny that the earth revolves around the sun.

7. Illogical.

For example: Store shelves are filled with grapes, fruits, and pears.

Change: Store shelves are filled with grapes, apples and pears.

8. Indiscriminate use of related words.

For example, he exercised very aggressively for the sake of his frailty.

Change: Because of his frailty, he is particularly active in exercising.