Write an essay that has both a total score relationship and a comparison and metaphor

The willow spits out green sprouts, I came to the river, and saw that the embankment was full of life and vitality, and in summer, people could lean on it to enjoy the shade, how happy it was! I heard the stream singing a cheerful song "ding dong ding dong", and I asked, "Little stream, little stream, you want to go to **?"

The brook said, "I will flow into the river, and on the way I will moisten the fields, and wet the land....I'm happy to be able to contribute to people! ”

I came to a garden, thousands of purple and red flowers, pink like the sun, white like snow, red like fire, really beautiful! People praise the beautiful, brightly colored flowers. The flowers were very happy when they heard the praise.

I came to the field, and there was a misty spring rain in the sky, and this spring rain moistened the grass, made the grass greener, moistened the earth, and made the earth softer....The farmer smiled sweetly, and they sowed pumpkin seeds, corn seeds, ......At the same time, they also sowed hope for a good harvest next fall. They seemed to see the eggplant dressed in a purple robe, the winter melon covered with a white veil, and the sorghum holding up a torch ......They had a happy laugh.

I came to the river bank again, and I saw the children running on the floodplain road, flying colorful kites, and looking at their sweet smiles, I smiled happily.

How beautiful, how sweet, how gorgeous spring is! I love spring because she makes everything in the world so happy!

The black ink-like clouds came, and the sparrows pushed me into the eaves, but the eagles still sang in the air;

The goose-feather snow came, and the willows had long since put away their former costumes, but the pines and cypresses still raised their emerald green flags.

Analogy—you push me, you squeeze, you hold your head high, you put away your costumes, you raise your flag—the sparrow and the eagle, the willow and the pine.

Ranking - sentence arrangement.

Exaggeration - goose feather snow.

Metaphor - black ink clouds, costumes, flags.

Our 59 is like a wild horse rushing towards the opposite base, and the 59 on the opposite side is firmly stuck on the outside line, and our squad leader 75 is like a mountain blocking the town; Like a flame that scares off the enemy; Like lightning tearing through the opponent's defense.........Who will win the inseparable battle?

Full Score Essay 35-15a: If I had to choose wealth.

Candidates. If I had to choose wealth, I would not be greedy, not only would I reject worldly ideas, but I would also not follow the crowd.

1) If I were asked to choose wealth, I would give up being rich and choosing poverty.

Choosing to be rich can save a lot of time and suffering, but it also loses the impulse to fight, rich experience and pride in victory. "Since ancient times, I have been a great man", I may still be poor in hard work, but I don't want to be greedy for comfort, and I don't want to be a young man.

2) If I were to choose wealth, I would give up my beautiful appearance and choose an ordinary appearance.

A good look can certainly bring me opportunities, but it can also cause me problems. Ordinary appearance always encourages people to struggle, reserve knowledge, increase talents, and win the recognition and respect of others through struggle.

3) If I were to choose wealth, I would give up the smooth sailing victories and choose setbacks and defeats.

Setbacks can strengthen people's will, and failures can make people realize everything. Everyone wants to be smooth sailing, everyone wants to be "undefeated in the East", but that's just a good wish. In reality, everyone has to go through ups and downs, and failure is just a small sign of rest for a long life.

As long as we face defeat with our heads held high and sum up our experiences with our heads bowed, victory will not be just a wish. Let failures and setbacks fill our lives, let pain and tribulations sharpen our lives, let experiences and lessons arm our minds, leave failures for yesterday, and leave lessons for eternity. You will find that tomorrow's life is as bright as poetry, and tomorrow's sunshine is extraordinarily bright!

If I had to choose wealth, I would never be greedy for ......

2. The point of view is very clear, and the mind is straightforward. The whole text does not have the slightest place to drag the mud and water, and the beginning of each paragraph is a hypothetical sentence of "what if" and "I will" to put out his own views and plates, clean and sonorous.

Thinking Expansion This essay can be applied to propositional or topical essays such as "What if", "Wealth and me", "Choice", "16-year-old manifesto", "ideal", etc.