Ask the calligraphy teacher, where is the main problem with my handwriting, and how to improve it

A personal opinion, just for information. First of all, the structure of your word frame is not correct enough, and secondly, the strokes are not well mastered, such as: the "Yin" character above "Jun" is written widely, and the "mouth" below is written with flat points, and at the same time it is better to write upright points; The last length of the second word "no"."It would be better to write longer.

In addition, I want to say that no matter what kind of words are written, pencils, pens, brushes, and chalk must first have a good posture and structure of the characters, and at the same time master good writing methods, and the strokes are in place to write well. Of course, the weight of the pen (generally the pen, the pen is heavy, the middle is light - except for the point and the pen··· Beyond; Horizontal and vertical, long and horizontal, slightly lower on the left and slightly higher on the right, slightly bent; The apostrophes should be long, slightly bent down in the middle; The lower end of the pen should be re-paused and then gently lifted, into a broom-shaped... The change of strokes, and pay attention to the coordination of strokes and humility. This brings us to the issue of harmony, and everything in the world needs to coexist peacefully, which is also harmony.

The same goes for words... In short, you need to write and comprehend it yourself! Finally, it is necessary to be patient, to have perseverance, to be able to persevere. Below are my words for reference.

At the same time, welcome to take a look at the calligraphy album in the mountain network, learn from each other and make progress together. Good luck with the Year of the Horse!

If you practice a hard pen, it is better to have a European body. As for your words, it's actually okay and powerful, but it seems that the whole is slightly tilted to the lower left, so you need to pay more attention. When writing, sit upright and put the paper straight.

There is also a clear lack of patience in the last few lines, and the writing is fast, and the words are a little distorted. Take your time and don't rush it, it's still very good!

I feel that these words are a bit contrived, and I still need to practice more. You can copy the works of famous artists.

The main focus of calligraphy is to look at the structure of the font and observe the whole as a whole.

You can choose more block letters,

It's very well written, but it's a bit of a hard version, so let's learn the strokes on the copybook.

If you want to talk to your calligraphy teacher, Jian Wang, about your poor handwriting, here are some suggestions:

1.Be clear about your goals: First, you need to be clear about your goals, whether you want to improve your calligraphy skills or just improve your handwriting. This will help you communicate better with your teachers and make a suitable plan.

2.Ask specific questions and suggestions: When communicating with your teacher, you can ask specific questions and suggestions, such as if you don't feel that your handwriting is smooth enough, your strokes are not smooth enough, or you don't know how to improve your calligraphy skills.

This way, the teacher can better understand your problem and provide targeted advice and guidance.

3.Share your thoughts and feelings: When communicating with your teacher, you can share your thoughts and feelings, such as whether you feel like learning calligraphy requires more practice, that you are satisfied with your progress, or that you feel a little frustrated, etc.

This helps teachers better understand your learning and emotional state and provide more effective support and guidance.

4.Listen to the teacher's suggestions and opinions: When communicating with the teacher, listen carefully to the teacher's suggestions and opinions, and actively think and try the exercises and methods provided by the teacher.

Learning calligraphy requires constant experimentation and adjustment, and only by actively listening to the teacher's advice can you improve your calligraphy faster.

It's okay to communicate directly with the teacher, but nowHard pen calligraphyMany children want to learn calligraphy, but it is impossible for parents to immediately produce results.

First, whether the handwriting is good or not is related to the character. Consider that some children are naturally more restless, and some are naturally quieter. Then writing is a quiet thing. Restless children naturally lack concentration. So the handwriting is not good.

Second, there is a talent for practicing calligraphy.

Third, practice and practice words. The key is to practice, which takes time to accumulate.

It's pretty smooth. Well, that's good!

One, hold your breath when writing.

Second, you can use waste newspapers and so on, write twice and read it.

Third, for such a large character, it is best to use a slightly thicker brush, such as a small bucket pen (also called a scratch pen). You can make the pen fuller.

Fourth, a few idle words:

Tianzi, the four strokes are too lax, and they can't show the solemnity of the sky.

The word Dao, the first stroke on the side of the walk is too small.

Pay words, (the line of cursive fonts must also be) the left side of the lower head less a horizontal; The spelling of "state" on the right needs to be changed.

The first three horizontal strokes on the lower left side can be abbreviated, but they must be felt by others; The word force on the right, force, strength is not enough, it seems that there is no power. You can also stretch and thicken the skimming pen, Liu is better!

What do you think?

What kind of calligraphy has you visited, and how long has it been?

Hello! Literally, you are too anxious, impetuous, and not solid and calm enough. The layout is heavy on the left and light on the right.

If you want to write well with a brush, you must master the penmanship and calligraphy.

Writing: Su Dongpo said: "There is no fixed way to put the pen, and it is necessary to make it empty and wide."

Five-finger pen method: that is, pinch the pen barrel (appropriate height) with the fingertips of the thumb and index finger to ensure that the pen barrel does not fall off; The middle finger is placed on the outside of the pen under the index finger, which not only strengthens the strength of the index finger to pinch the pen, but also plays the role of hooking the pen inward; The nail flesh of the ring finger is against the inside of the pen barrel, which plays the role of pushing the pen outward; The little finger is attached to the lower part of the belly of the ring finger to assist the ring finger to push the pen outward. Hold the pen as the ancients said:

Make the palm empty as holding an egg", so that it is easy to move the pen. To learn the book, you should often practice holding the pen, hooking it back, pushing out and rotating the pen barrel (plus the action of the wrist), and practice drawing straight lines and arcs. The height of the pen and whether it hangs the wrist and elbow is determined by the size of the word. The big characters are high, and the wrist is suspended; If it is larger, it needs to hang the elbow.

Calligraphy: Calligraphy is the art of line modeling. The so-called brushwork is mainly how to create the ideal line (stippling).

Lift - press the pen to write, the stroke will be thick, and the lift will be thin. Just as the two feet of a person walk, one falling, the other lifting, and constantly alternating, the pen is also constantly lifting and pressing in the process of writing. Only in this way can lines of no different thickness be produced.

Every time you write a stroke, there are three processes: entering the pen, writing the pen, and closing the pen. There is a "Lu Feng" method in the pen, which follows the pen to make the beginning of the stroke pointed or square; There is a "hidden front method", the reverse front into the pen, the horizontal painting wants to be right first left, and the vertical painting wants to go down and go up first, so that the pen is hidden in the stroke, and the beginning of the stroke is basically round. The pen should learn to "use the pen in the center", so that the tip of the pen often runs in the middle of the dot.

In order to make the strokes strong, we must also learn to use the pen with astringency, stay in the line, stay in the line, and avoid flashiness. There are "Lu Feng" (gradually lifting the pen out of the paper, and the painting is pointed, such as hanging needle vertical, apostrophe, pinch, hook), and there is "Zangfeng" (the tip of the pen is withdrawn into the painting, such as hanging and dewing, and the end of the stroke is round).

Knots - also known as knots or inter-frame structures. Mr. Qi Gong once pointed out that when writing calligraphy, we must grasp the structure of the frame and practice the characteristics of the strokes. The structure of the shelf is more important than the characteristics of the stippling.

The characters that are framed in between, the stroke characteristics are not prominent, and they are also pleasing to the eye; Not the other way around. Therefore, it is very important to carefully study and grasp the rules of the knot of characters. The so-called "beginner distribution, but seek fairness".