Composition teaching comments after reading, and a summary after listening to the composition class

Composition class listening experience.

On the morning of May 20th, the Xingtai Municipal Education Bureau organized a special teacher Yu Yongzheng's classroom teaching observation class, I had the honor to listen to Yu Yongzheng's composition class, his class title is "pay attention to small things, write small things big, pay attention to details, write details in detail". This composition class left a deep impression on me and benefited me a lot.

At the beginning of the class, Mr. Yu made a wonderful self-introduction, which shortened the distance between him and the students, so that his classroom atmosphere became lively.

Then showed the essay title "Teacher", and Teacher Yu said humorously: When you see this essay topic, you may think that there is nothing new, and it feels like an old-fashioned topic, but students must know: "But if you are willing to look for poetry, there will be poetry, and Lingxi is my teacher."

Sunset, grass, ordinary things, and explanations are all wonderful words. "As long as you are a caring person, the seemingly ordinary sunset grass can be endowed with new ideas. ”

Immediately after that, Mr. Yu showed two fragments, Mr. Yu first asked the students to read the fragment, and then said the details that impressed you in the fragment, and finally concluded: The material is all around us, we must pay attention to the small things, write the small things big, pay attention to the details, and write the details in detail.

Later, Teacher Yu asked the students to practice writing. In the writing process, the teacher first asks the students to write according to the situation, the teacher inspects and guides, and then asks the students to read their own compositions, and corrects the bad things in time, and finally the teacher appoints the students to read the composition on the podium and give guidance, and finally gives the students a score of 100, 150, etc. Teacher Yu made a summary at the end, everything is a thing, as long as you dare to find it, you can write it.

By looking at Mr. Yu's composition class, we can find that Mr. Yu's class has the following characteristics that are worth learning

1.Pay attention to the little things, pay attention to the details. As the saying goes:

The devil is in the details. "The essence of the details, is not a day to learn, is from the life bit by bit accumulation, we must be willing to be plain, do a good job, do every little thing in life, develop good habits, start from themselves, start from small things, pay attention to details, only in this way can we improve our own quality. The charm of details in our daily life is like what we call "seeing the spirit in the subtleties".

2.Pay attention to the revision of students' essays. From the class with the teacher, we can see that Teacher Yu pays special attention to the students' own revision of the composition.

He asked the children to read their essays three times after they had finished writing them, correcting them as they went. Tao Xingzhi once said that good compositions are read and changed.

3.Simulate scenarios, create scenarios, and teach. From the class, we found that Mr. Yu simulated two scenarios for us, one is the "ink" character "wu".'The scene of writing mistakes and correcting mistakes for classmates is a scene where students do not pay attention to their writing posture and the teacher reminds them.

Through simulated scenarios, students imagine writing exercises.

4.The evaluation method uses a high score. When Mr. Yu scores students' essays, he gives 100 points, 150 points, and 120 points, and he never skimps on the pen in his hand, but uses a high-score evaluation method to stimulate students' interest in writing.