Help me revise the sentence and add it

1 Who has improved in learning, there is a subject missing.

2. It is not the habit that carries forward the hard work, but the spirit of hard work.

3 notwithstanding. But.

4 Colorful contradicts the red flag, delete the colorful.

5. The sunset dyes the mountains and rivers red.

6.The peach blossoms on the mountain are in full bloom this spring.

7As soon as class ended, the school immediately became lively.

8. Students attended the conference, middle-aged people, and the People's Liberation Army.

9The teacher said to Xiao Ming, he (is it only, who is it, Xiao Ming or the teacher) went to the meeting and asked him to send the book to everyone.

1.After a semester of hard work, I have improved in my studies (with crippled ingredients)2We should carry forward the spirit of hard work from an early age (improper matching) 3

Xiaohong is late for school because she got up late (inappropriate use of related words) 4The school is surrounded by colorful flags (inconsistent) 5The sunset dyes the mountains and rivers red (inappropriate word order).

6.The peach blossoms on the mountain are in full bloom in this spring (unrealistic).

7.As soon as the class ended, the school immediately became lively (semantic repetition) 8The congress was attended by the People's Liberation Army, workers, students, ......(Improper classification) 9

The teacher said to Xiao Ming, the teacher went to a meeting, and asked Xiao Ming to send the book to everyone (the reference is unknown)10The key to improving academic performance is that subjective effort plays a decisive role. (Miscellaneous).

1.After a semester of hard work, my studies have improved.

2.We must carry forward the quality of hard work from an early age.

3.Xiaohong was late for school because she got up late.

4.The school is surrounded by colorful flags.

5.The sunset dyed the mountains and rivers red.

6.The peach blossoms on the mountain are in full bloom this spring.

7.As soon as class ended, the school suddenly became lively.

8.The congress was attended by the People's Liberation Army, workers, middle-aged people, students ......9.The teacher said to Xiao Ming that he went to a meeting and asked Xiao Ming to send the notebook to everyone.

1.Add "grades" after learning

2.Change the habit to "spirit".

3.I change it even if I change it because of it.

4.Remove the colorful.

5.Changed to"The sunset dyed the mountains and rivers red. "

6.Change autumn to spring.

7.I remove it suddenly.

8.Changed to"The congress was attended by the People's Liberation Army, workers, students, ......"

9.Changed to"The teacher said to Xiao Ming that he went to a meeting and asked Xiao Ming to send the notebook to everyone. "