Modify the sick sentence. See Question Supplement. How do I change the sentence?

Friends, welcome to Nantong! Nantong is beautiful all year round. In the spring, we can take a dragon boat ; In the summer, we go to the Yellow Sea to ride the waves; In autumn, we go to the park to enjoy the chrysanthemums; In winter, we go to Yinyang to see the first sunshine of the new year.

Oh! By the way, Nantong's Wolf Mountain is very famous and is one of the eight small Buddha Mountains in the country. If you come in the summer, so much the better!

In the evening, I will take you to the Huanxi Cultural Square, where you can see the dancing postures, hear the beautiful singing, and enjoy the joy of men, women, and children.

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Friends, welcome to Nantong! Nantong is beautiful all year round. In the spring, we can take a dragon boat ; In the summer, we go to the Yellow Sea to ride the waves; In autumn, we go to the park to enjoy the chrysanthemums; In winter, we go to Yinyang to see the first sunshine of the morning.

Oh! By the way, Nantong's Wolf Mountain is very famous and is one of the eight small Buddha Mountains in the country. It's even better if you come in the summer!

In the evening, I will take you to the Huanxi Cultural Square, where you can see the dancing and hear the beautiful singing, and the men, women, children and children are all happy.

1.Nantong is a beautiful place all year round. Nantong is beautiful all year round.

2.In spring, we can take advantage of the dragon boat ,-- spring, we can take the dragon boat 3In the summer, we go to the Yellow Sea to ride the waves,-- in the summer, we go to the Yellow Sea to ride the waves, 4It is one of the eight small foshans in the country - > is one of the eight small foshans in the country.

5.Although if you come in the summer - > if you come in the summer.

6.I'll go to Huanxi Cultural Square on your behalf - > I'll take you to Huanxi Cultural Square.

7.You can see the dancing and the singing - > you can see the dancing and hear the singing.

8.Men, women, children, and children were all having fun. --Men, women and children are all happy.

Come to Nantong! Nantong is a beautiful place all year round. In the spring, we can take advantage of the dragon boat, in the summer, we go to the Yellow Sea to ride the waves, in the autumn, we will go to the park to enjoy the chrysanthemums, and in the winter, we will go to Yinyang to see the first road of the new year

wisps) sunlight. Oh! By the way, Nantong's Wolf Mountain is very famous, and it is one of the eight small Foshan in the country.

Although (change: if) you come in the summer, it will be even better! In the evening, I will take you to the Huanxi Cultural Square, and you can see the dancing posture and the (delete and change,) (add:

Hearing the beautiful singing, men, women, children, and children (deleted: and children) are all happy.

Friends, welcome to Nantong! Nantong is beautiful all year round. In spring, we can ride the waves in the Yellow Sea, in summer, we go to take advantage of the dragon boat, in autumn, we go to the park to enjoy the chrysanthemums, and in winter, we go to Yinyang to see the first sunshine of the new year.

Oh! By the way, Nantong's Wolf Mountain is very famous, and it is one of the eight small Foshan in the country. It's even better if you come in the summer!

In the evening, I will go to the Huanxi Cultural Square on your behalf, you can see the dancing posture and hear the beautiful singing, men, women and children are happy and happy.

Original sentence: Little by little, the east calls Li Er's white sky, dyed with a slight red halo, floating with red, purple, red and purple clouds.

Abbreviation: The sky is dyed red, and colorful clouds are floating.

The abbreviated sentence is to shorten the long sentence of "thick branches and leaves" to a short sentence that only leaves the "trunk" and the elder brother, and the main meaning of the original sentence cannot be changed, that is, to remove the branches and reduce the leaves.

There are three steps to modify a sentence:

The first step is to read the sentence and figure out what it is trying to mean.

Only by reading the meaning of the sentence can we find its faults and correct it according to the meaning of the original sentence. Many sick sentences can be modified as long as they understand what they are trying to convey.

For example: "At the meeting, they expressed their opinions. After reading the sentence, think about it:

Who spoke at the conference? There is no subject in the sentence "Dust Stove", the subject "classmates" or "everyone" should be added, so that the meaning of the sentence is clearly expressed and the sentence is correct.

The second step is to find out what the meaning of the sentence is to express, and then go back to the original sentence to find out what is wrong with the meaning of the sentence.

For example: "Xiao Ming has improved the shortcomings of loving to do small actions in class." What this sentence wants to say is, "Xiao Ming corrected the shortcomings of loving to do small actions in class."

The word "improvement" and "shortcoming" in the original sentence cannot be matched, and "shortcoming" can only be said to be "corrected", and the meaning of this sentence is clear if "improvement" is replaced by "correction".

The main thing is to be familiar with the six types of sick sentences specified in the syllabus

Improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete or redundant components, confusing structure, unclear meaning, and illogical.

The first four are grammatical errors, using the "extraction method", extracting the subject, predicate, and object, checking whether there are any errors in answering friends, and then checking the determination, form, and supplement. Qing Juju.

If there are no errors in the first four categories, they should be in the last two errors – logical errors.

We grew up being hygienic.

Knowing that she was on the list of high school entrance exams, Ma Li couldn't help but smile.

Because his family didn't let him come, he insisted on coming.

Thousands of small birds, flocks of long-haired goats, enjoy their own territory in peace.

First, find the subject and verb of the sentence, and then see what kind of sentence it is. For example, the Chinese population is the largest in the world. How can the population touch Tonglu is a country? After the change, it should be: Chinese have the most hands and mouths in the world.

Self-respecting rock has dust hail to see the manuscript sail.

Hello! Thank you for your trust.

1. Your understanding is correct. This sentence is the reversal of the progressive relationship. It should read as follows:

Many masterpieces of ancient Chinese painting and calligraphy are not only the artistic treasures of the Chinese nation, but also the treasures of human art.

2. There is no problem with the causality of this sentence, but as you understand, it is a collocation error. It should read as follows:

Due to the efforts of textile workers to improve the quality of production, the cotton cloth exported by our country is well received by customers from all over the world.

Another example: China has the largest population in the world. [The type of sick sentence is the same] should be: China is the most populous country in the world.

3. Indeed, as you said, it is just a word order error, and there is no need to delete "discussion". Moreover, the sentence should be modified as much as possible to maintain the original meaning and reduce unnecessary changes. The best modification of this sentence should be:

Through the inspection, we found and discussed and solved some problems in extracurricular activities.

May it help you!

1. Incomplete ingredients:

1.The teacher and I went to visit the hospital.

2.At the 28th Olympic Games, China's athletes fought tenaciously.

3.Go to the park every morning to exercise.

4.Jingjing has developed a sense of hygiene since she was a child.

5.I was very happy to receive the "Three Good Students" certificate.

Corrections: 1The teacher and I went to the hospital to visit a sick classmate.

2.At the 28th Olympic Games, the tenacious fighting spirit of our athletes is admirable.

3.I go to the park every morning to exercise.

4.Jingjing has developed a good habit of hygiene since she was a child.

5.I was very happy to receive the "Three Good Students" certificate.

2. Improper use of words:

1.I will continue to work hard to make greater progress.

2.I cleaned the classroom neatly.

3.We need to have a good habit of saving water.

4.The vast grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.

5.At the party, everyone performed exquisite programs.

Corrections: 1I will continue to work hard to make greater progress.

2.I cleaned the classroom.

3.We need to develop good habits of water conservation.

4.The vast grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.

5.At the party, everyone performed wonderful programs.

3. Reversal of order.

1.The smell of rice flowers blew in the field for a while.

2.The Chinese population is the largest in the world.

3.Dad told many moving stories about Lei Feng.

4.I would like to introduce the situation of the school to the guests.

5.We should do a good job in studying.

Corrections: 1The smell of rice flowers blew in the fields.

2.China is the most populous country in the world.

3.Dad told Lei Feng many moving stories.

4.I gave the guests a brief introduction to the school.

5.We should do a good job in studying.

Fourth, repetition of verbosity.

1. There are a wide variety of toys in the mall.

2. The tree is full of many unclear fruits.

3. I completed all the homework assigned by the teacher.

4. I clean the classroom neatly and neatly.

5. The students think about the problem seriously and carefully.

Corrections: 1. There are all kinds of toys in the mall.

2. The tree is full of fruit.

3. I finished all the homework assigned by the teacher.

4. I clean the classroom.

5. The students are thinking about the problem seriously.

Is that okay?