Is there a correct expression of the theme in the sick sentence?

Inverted host and guest At that time, the newspaper had very few opportunities to come into contact with me. The sentence should read: "I am in contact with the newspaper", "I" is active and "newspaper" is passive.

Improper Denial There is not a single teacher and student in the school who does not deny that quality education has brought about tremendous changes in the entire campus. In this sentence, delete the word "no" before the word "deny". Again: The positions of the definite and central words are reversed.

China's cotton production has not been self-sufficient for a long time. "Production of cotton"It should be a matter of prudence"production of cotton"）

Answer: Improper placement of imaginary words.

Not only do we believe in Him, but those who opposed Him in the past now believe in Him. "Not only" and "we" Gao Shuchun can be reversed.

Answer: Subject-verb collocation is inappropriate.

The study of classical Chinese is a very useful tool for absorbing the ancient culture of our country. "Learning" is not a "tool", "classical Chinese" is a tool, and "learning" can be deleted.

Answer: The guest of honor is not properly matched.

In the more than 20 years since reform and opening up, the living standards of the Chinese people have been markedly enhanced. "Horizontal" cannot be "enhanced", replace "enhanced" with "enhanced".

Again: Improper grooming.

Working people have smart and capable hands, and any miracle on earth can be created. It is inappropriate for "smart" to modify "hand", delete "smart".

Again: Inconsistent.

I read a book for a day this morning. Cut out the morning or change the day to half a day.

Again: The ingredients are incomplete.

Plants are poisonous. In the absence of the necessary qualifying word, the word "somewhat" should be added

Again: Repeat redundantly.

Approaching the beautiful West Lake, I stopped to admire. Stop and stop mean repeated, delete one.

Answer: Is it all right?

Answer: Is it all right?

Again: yes

A sick sentence is a sentence with a fault. Any sentence that violates the laws of grammatical structure or objective facts is a sick sentence, the former is called a grammatical error, and the latter is called a logical error. Common types of sick sentences include: improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete components, mixed sentence structure, etc.

1) Improper word order.

Common improper word order includes improper placement of definite words, improper placement of adverbial words, and improper placement of imaginary words.

Example: China's cotton production has been unable to be self-sufficient for a long time.

Revision: The cotton produced in China has not been self-sufficient for a long time.

Inappropriate placement of the adjective).

2) Improper collocation.

Example: The life of Comrade Luo Xiao, a member of the Communist Party, represents the lofty revolutionary qualities of our proletarian revolutionaries of the older generation.

Revision: The life of Comrade Luo Xiao, a member of the Communist Party of China, has demonstrated the lofty revolutionary qualities of our proletarian revolutionaries of the older generation.

Misplaced subject and predicate).

3) Defective ingredients.

The common forms of component mutilation are: subject mutilation, predicate mutilation, and object mutilation.

Example: I have a girl who, like many young mothers, is willing to dress up her children beautifully.

Modify: I have a girl who, like many young mothers, would like to dress up her child beautifully.

Lack of subject) (4) Mixed sentence structure.

This refers to the fact that two or more sets of sentence structures are mixed together, making the meaning ambiguous.

Example: "Survival" published by Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House, written by a Chinese-Canadian author who has lived abroad for more than 20 years.

Edit: "Survival" published by Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House is the work of a Chinese-Canadian who has lived abroad for more than 20 years.

5) Ambiguity.

Ambiguity includes two situations: one is "incomprehensible" and the other is "ambiguous".

Example: His story is endless.

Edit: I can't tell enough stories about him.

vi) Logical errors.

Common logical errors include self-contradiction, improper juxtaposition of concepts, imposition of cause and effect, reversal of subject and object, improper negation, and unreasonableness.

Example: He was one of the many victims who were spared.

False: Since it is "spared", it cannot be said that it is one of the "victims".

Able to use modification symbols to modify nine common language problems, such as unreasonable word order, inappropriate collocation, unclear referent, incomplete composition, inappropriate wording, improper association, poor response, self-contradiction, and redundancy.

1 The following sentence without a speech problem is ( ).

a This social practice activity has broadened our horizons and increased our knowledge.

b In order to avoid similar mistakes in the future, we must strictly adhere to the rules and regulations.

c When I came home late, I was really worried about being scolded by my nagging mother.

d If a person gains understanding, he or she has all the most precious treasures in the world.

Comments] Item A does not have a language problem. (b) is a misnomer, "no more similar mistakes" is a good sign, but "avoid" means the opposite. c Item collocation is inappropriate, "suffer" has the meaning of "be", there is "be" in front, and there should be no more "suffer" in the back.

d Word order is inappropriate and should read "everything in the world".

2 Modify the following sentence with the modification symbol.

a There are many chances of myopia developing eyes, and we should practice eye hygiene at ordinary times.

b Last week, we visited and learned from the best practices of our sister schools in carrying out extra-curricular activities.

c In the previous stage, I focused on cultural learning and therefore neglected physical exercise.

d It would be nice to have a way to save the rotten tomatoes that you can't eat in the summer until the winter!

Comments] Item A is incomplete, and "developing" should have the object "habit". Replace it with "Eye hygiene habits." ”

Item b is not properly matched. The object of "visit" is "brother school". Changed to "visited the sister school and learned......”

C The related words are used incorrectly, and the clauses are not causal, but inflective. Replace it with the words "therefore".

Item d is a contradiction, how can it be "saved" if it is "rotten"? Changed to "rotten".

Only item B has no speech disorder. I'll tell you in turn that A, C, and D** have speech problems:

A: Fast, stable, and convenient are not one thing, and laptops can't display them. It should be "Displayed". The latter sentence also seems to be a little faulty, but I can't tell what is wrong with **(*.)

C: There is no subject, nothing is said to make us recognize. The word "make" should be removed, so that there is no language problem in this sentence.

D: To shorten this sentence, it is "cause is effect". How can a cause be an effect? This sentence doesn't make sense. One of the "causes" or "effects" should be removed.

You just write that B has no speech problem, and B definitely has no language disease.