He went to the supermarket and bought a lot of fruits, including apples, broccoli, bananas and water

He went to the supermarket and bought many fruits and vegetables, including apples, broccoli, bananas and watermelon.

Remove the broccoli directly.

He went to the supermarket and bought a lot of fruits, including apples, bananas, watermelons and other fruits.

The supermarket bought a lot of fruits, there were apples, broccoli, bananas and watermelons, broccoli is not a fruit, it belongs to the category of vegetables.

After the modification, he went to the supermarket and bought a lot of fruits, including apples, bananas and watermelons.

Broccoli is not a fruit, it is a vegetable, broccoli is a type of vegetable that is often eaten in daily life, rich in nutrients, can supplement vitamins, minerals, and can also improve immunity, and has many effects. Broccoli is rich in ascorbic acid.

It can enhance the liver's detoxification ability and improve the body's immunity. Broccoli can effectively fight breast cancer and colorectal cancer, and healthy people who regularly consume broccoli can also play a role in preventing cancer. In addition, it can also detoxify and nourish the skin.

Broccoli for high blood pressure.

Heart disease also has a regulating and preventive effect, broccoli is rich in fiber, which can reduce the gastrointestinal response to glucose.

, which in turn lowers blood sugar and can effectively control diabetes.

condition. The efficacy of the fruit.

Lowers blood pressure. Hawthorn, watermelon, pear, pineapple.

Contains folic acid. Among various vitamins, folic acid is related to the production of DNA, and in early pregnancy, folic acid is important for cell reproduction and repair, it helps the good development of the embryonic nervous system, and prevents anemia in pregnant women.

Fruits containing folic acid: apples, bananas, mangoes, papayas, kiwis.

Slows down aging. Among the common fruits, kiwi is believed to be rich in vitamin C

a, E, folic acid and trace elements such as potassium, magnesium and dietary fiber, but low in calories. All this makes kiwi fruit able to inject vitality into the modern urbanites who work quickly and are nervous. In addition, the amino acids contained in kiwifruit.

It can help the body make hormones and slow down aging. Because kiwi is cold, it is best for pregnant mothers to eat less.

****。Some fruits are rich in dietary fiber, which is a carbohydrate that cannot be digested by the small intestine.

In the colon, fiber provides nutrients to the intestinal lumen that help boost the body's metabolism and help suppress appetite.

**Fruits: apples, grapefruits, dragon fruits, durians.

Maintenance**. The human face is exposed every day, damaged by harmful substances in the air and irradiated by ultraviolet rays, so that the capillaries constrict, the secretion of sebaceous glands decreases, and the sebaceous glands become dry and dehydrated. Fruits are rich in vitamin E, an antioxidant substance

and trace elements, which can nourish **, and its beauty effect is not comparable to that of ordinary cosmetics. And if you smoke or gain weight, it is also a hint that your body fat tissue lacks these important components.

Fruits: bananas, mangoes, cantaloupe, strawberries, oranges, apples, lemons.

Modified to: Mom bought a lot of vegetables such as red pestles, green vegetables, and winter melon.

Explanation and analysis: According to the original sentence "My mother bought a lot of vegetables, including red trees, green vegetables, watermelon, and winter melon", it can be found that "watermelon" does not belong to vegetables, but fruits. So here you just need to delete "watermelon" and modify it to: Mom bought a lot of vegetables including red pestles, green vegetables, and winter melon.

Mom bought a lot of vegetables, including tomatoes, greens, and winter melon. Watermelon is not a vegetable.

It should be said: Mom bought a lot of vegetables, including tomatoes, greens, and winter melons.

Mom bought a lot of vegetables, Mom bought a lot of vegetables, Mom bought a lot of vegetables, Mom bought a lot of vegetables, Mom bought a lot of vegetables, there were tomatoes, spinach, watermelon, winter melon. Watermelon is not a vegetable, watermelon, winter melon, watermelon is not a vegetable, as long as the watermelon, watermelon, winter melon, watermelon is not a vegetable, as long as the watermelon is removed, watermelon, winter melon, watermelon is not a vegetable, as long as the watermelon is removed, if it is removed, watermelon, winter melon, watermelon is not a vegetable, as long as the watermelon is removed, if you still want to poop after removal, watermelon, winter melon, watermelon is not a vegetable, as long as the watermelon is removed, if you want to become more complete after removal, watermelon, winter melon, Watermelon is not a vegetable, just remove the watermelon, if you want to be more complete after removal. You can write all kinds of good-looking, watermelon, winter melon, watermelon is not a vegetable, as long as the watermelon is removed, you can write all kinds of if you want to become more complete after removal.

Original sentence: In the autumn orchard, people saw a lot of fruits and bursts of melon and fruit fragrance.

Modified to: In the autumn orchard, people saw the abundant fruits and smelled the aroma of melons and fruits.

Analysis: The words do not match, I see that it can be fruitful, but not melon, you can add a word, and smell the melon and fruit.

In the orchards in autumn, people see a lot of fruit.

and bursts of fruity aromas.

The fruity aroma should be smelled.

The words don't match, you can see that it can be fruitful, but not melon fragrance, you can add a word and smell the melon and fruit fragrance.

In the orchards in autumn, people see a lot of fruit.

Fruitful can be seen, bursts of flowers and fruits are smelled, not seen, understand?

Mom bought peaches, apples, and chocolate. This sentence is ill-classified, fruit is a collective noun, including peaches and apples, just remove the fruit.

Any sentence that violates the laws of grammatical structure or objective facts is a sick sentence, the former is called a grammatical error, and the latter is called a logical error. Grammatical errors occur more frequently.

Common types of sentences are:

1. Improper word order;

2. Improper collocation;

3. Defective or redundant ingredients;

4. Chaotic structure;

5. Unclear meaning;

6. Illogical;

7. Ambiguity; 8. Mixed sentence patterns;

9. Improper classification;

10. One-sided to multi-sided (two sides and one side and two sides).

Mom bought fruit, peaches, apples, and chocolate. Instead, mom bought fruits, peaches, apples, and pears.

Mom bought fruit and chocolate. Because fruits already include peaches and apples.

Let's talk about the reason!

Because both peaches and apples are fruity, the sentence constitutes repetition.

Fruits include peaches and apples.

Repetition of words. Remove the fruit.

Mom bought peaches and apples, and chocolate.

Mom bought fruit and chocolates.

Modified to: There are many vegetables in the vegetable market, including potatoes, cucumbers, tomatoes, ......

Error: Tomatoes and tomatoes are the same thing, just delete one or the other.

On the premise of not changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, modify the words and sentences with obvious language problems to make the sentences smooth, correct and more perfect. The content that needs to be modified includes all the components of the sentence, including the subject, predicate, object, definite, adverbial, and complement.

You have no shortage of punctuation, and you use it well!

There are a lot of vegetables in the market, including potatoes, tomatoes, cucumbers, tomatoes, ......

Summary. The analysis is as follows:

1. First of all, there are a lot of fruits planted in the uncle's orchard, and there are watermelons and strawberries with the modification symbol to modify the sentence is: The uncle planted a lot of fruits in the orchard, and there are watermelons and strawberries.

2. Secondly, the sick sentence of this sentence is the wrong meaning, it should be the uncle planting fruit in the orchard, not the orchard;

3. Then, we can change the "of" to "in" with the modification symbol;

There are a lot of fruits grown in my uncle's orchard, there are watermelons and strawberries, and the sick sentence is modified with the modification symbol.

I am Mr. Xiao Su, graduated from Beijing Normal University, and have many years of teaching experience in Shenrang I have seen your question, and it will take a certain amount of time to summarize the perfect answer for you, please be patient for a while.

Hello, uncle's orchard planted a lot of water god duanguo with watermelon strawberry with modification symbol to modify the sick sentence is: rotten blind staring uncle planted a lot of fruit in the fruit hunger and garden, there are watermelons and strawberries.

The analysis is as follows: 1. First of all, there are a lot of rotten potatoes and fruits in my uncle's orchard, and there are watermelons and strawberries in the orchard.

2. Secondly, the meaning of this sentence is wrong, it should be the uncle planting fruit in the orchard, not planting fruit in the orchard;3. Then, we can change the "of" to "in" with the modification symbol;

The above is for reference.

Teacher Su really hopes to help you.

The changes are as follows: 1, the ** of watermelon is now halved compared to the ** in winter. (For example, 5 yuan per catty in winter, now it is 2,5 yuan per catty).

2. The ** of watermelon in winter is twice as high as it is now.

3. Now the ** of watermelon is two percent lower than in winter.

For example, if you sell for 5 yuan a pound in winter, and you say that it has dropped twice as much now, how much is it selling now?I find this puzzling.

Sentence expressions are ambiguous.

Modified: Watermelons are now twice as low as they were in winter.

This sick sentence should be revised as: The ** of watermelon is now twice as low as that of the winter.

Sentence change: Now the ** of watermelon is twice as low as it was in winter.

The sentence expression is inaccurate, and it can be changed to: watermelon is now twice as low as it is in winter.

Now the ** of watermelon is twice as low as that of watermelon in winter.