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Thank you for your direct and ruthless criticism of my articles, which made me suddenly feel inferior, and after reading your articles, I wondered that they were not rated as high. I think I'll try to get rid of the criticism in your comments on my article in the future. If the message could be anonymous, I think I would.
I think I'm too innocent, and the article isn't boutique enough!
I think I'm too arbitrary, and the article is not enough for the magazine to adopt!
I think I'm too smart, ask you to help me in the future!
I want you to review articles with a smile on your face, even if you are critical; If yes, I hope you make your language laugh too, it's too prickly; If not, I want you to laugh.
I've always wondered if I could be named a junior high school writer. From your comments I learned that my article stinks. I think maybe it was my positive "touching" of the junior high school writers. Is there a you in it? I have you in the face.
I've been speculating about your image, and my classmates who have been criticized by you say that you must be vicious. I said you are a Chinese teacher with a straight face! Your students will contradict me! Maybe you're only so ruthless online!
Use your name as a title to increase the number of views, don't mind! I hope you don't call me vexatious in this article! I don't think you will! Don't say it's reasonable!
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Yesterday, the teacher taught us how to write a message. First of all, the teacher said: "The top box of the message should write who you want to write the message to, and then, write the content in the middle, the content cannot be written like an essay, just write the thing well, and then write the name, and the date in the last box."
Oh! The classmates shouted.
Today, it's Saturday, my mom is not at home, I'm going to hang out with my classmates, how can I tell my mom? Oh, didn't the teacher teach us to write a message? I can write one and stick it in the fridge!
Chen Jingyi, June 18.
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Leave the sun behind.
Sunlight is warm, the growth of all things is inseparable from it, it is the source of life.
One girl's grandmother was sick and bedridden for a long time, staying in a dark bedroom without feeling the warmth of the sun. When spring came, the girl stood outside enjoying the endless sunshine, and wanted to share this happiness with her grandmother, so she lifted her skirt and caught the sun. The girl carefully wrapped them up and went into the bedroom and said to her grandmother happily
Grandma, I brought the sunshine! As he spoke, he opened the group: "Huh?
Why is the sun gone? Grandma giggled and stroked her granddaughter's head: "Little fool, you are my sunshine."
In life, sunshine is harmony and friendship, and with these, there is sunshine in the heart.
I still remember when I was in the fourth grade, I had a quarrel with a good friend just because of a very small matter, and we were all very stubborn, and neither of us would suffer a loss, and we would die to save face. I came home that day with a dejected face. My mother saw that I was silent, and I no longer looked like the lively me I used to be, so she asked
What happened to you? Don't seem happy? "I regretted and anxious in my heart, thinking that I shouldn't have had an awkward relationship with my friends over a trivial matter.
Finally, I couldn't hold back the depression anymore, and I fell into my mother's arms crying and talking about today's events, and my mother didn't say that I did something wrong or criticize me, but took me to the balcony. I stood on the balcony, feeling only a little dazzling sun, but it was warm, evaporating all the bitterness and pain I had just had. Mom said:
Today you and she have both lost the sunshine in their hearts and have become very painful. So why don't we let the pain disappear and let the sun warm us? "It dawned on me that the sunshine in my heart was so important that it made me feel love.
The next day, I approached her and said, "Look, how nice the sun is outside!" I also hope that we are as good as it is.
We looked at each other and smiled, and all contradictions melted away by the warm sun.
Life needs warmth and sunshine.
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Winter sunshine, warm; Helping the old and the young, warm; Dedication of love, warmth; Caring for friends, warm; Warm travel and silver greetings, warm; Sincere blessings, warm; Wishing you a warm winter.
I'm happy to see you, the happiest smiling face of the feast. Happy to listen to you, the most filial guess hearty language. Life is inevitably full of ups and downs, and there will always be a piece of sunshine. Look through the greetings and let the affection be warm. Greetings are served, may you be happy!
The floating clouds flutter and miss you, broken into snow, writing my daily message one by one; The breeze blows and wrinkles the attachment to you, tearing it into a curtain of rain and hazy psalms of I love you. My dear, I wish you a lot of happiness and a sweeter mood than honey.
After a long journey, there are always a few steps worth remembering; There are a lot of people who know a lot, and there are always a few who are mindful; Through the cold winter, there are always blessings I want to send you a few words: friends, may you take care of your body and be healthy!
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