To revise the sick sentence and rhetorical question, I need 10 sick sentences and 10 rhetorical ques

Sick sentence: 1The park is full of colorful red flowers.

2.I read this book and was inspired.

3.A thunderstorm fell for a day and a night.

4.There are a lot of butterflies in the canyon.

5.In physical education class, he likes running the most.

6.Our country is the most populous country in the world.

7.The Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Terracotta Servants and the Happy Community are the historic sites that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for.

8.My sister sang and danced.

9.A crisp sound of a tractor was heard.

10.I overcame the difficulties of studying.

Rhetorical question: 1Wouldn't you do that?

2.How is this book not yours?

3.Aren't you playing?

4.Why didn't you write this?

5.Isn't there life beyond Earth?

6.How could I do such a thing?

7.Isn't he your father?

8.Don't you know him?

9.Isn't that a truth?

10.Aren't people who live in a new society happy?

The park is full of colorful red flowers.

2.I read this book and was inspired.

3.A thunderstorm fell for a day and a night.

4.There are a lot of butterflies in the canyon.

5.In physical education class, he likes running the most.

6.Our country is the most populous country in the world.

7.The Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Terracotta Servants and the Happy Community are the historic sites that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for.

8.My sister sang and danced.

9.A crisp sound of a tractor was heard.

10.I overcame the difficulties of studying.

Sick sentence: Because I got up late this morning, but I still wasn't late.

Rhetorical question: Aren't you new?

Rhetorical question: 1Wouldn't you do that?

2.How is this book not yours?

3.Aren't you playing?

4.Why didn't you write this?

5.Isn't there life beyond Earth?

6.How could I do such a thing?

7.Isn't he your father?

8.Don't you know him?

9.Isn't that a truth?

10.Aren't people who live in a new society happy?

Sick sentence: Because I got up late this morning, but I still wasn't late.

Rhetorical question: Aren't you new?

Is it true that people can't live a long life?

Is there only human beings and animals living on Earth?

Is this something that people eat?

Is it only you who can do this?

Am I really not a useful person?

Can't humans and animals get along?

Sick sentence: 1The park is full of colorful red flowers.

2.I read this book and was inspired.

3.A thunderstorm fell for a day and a night.

4.There are many countless butterflies in the valley of the Xianian tribe.

5.In physical education class, he likes running the most.

6.Our country is the most populous country in the world.

7.The Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, Qin Shi Huang's Terracotta and Horse Servants and the Happy Community are both Chinese and foreign tourists.

A monument that guests yearn for.

8.My sister sang and danced.

9.A crisp sound of a tractor was heard.

10.I overcame the difficulties of studying.

Corrections: 1The park is full of colorful flowers.

2.After reading this book, I was inspired.

3.A thunderstorm fell for a day and a night.

4.There are countless butterflies in the canyon.

5.In physical education class, he likes running the most.

6.Our country is the most populous country in the world.

7.The Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, and the Terracotta and Horses of Qin Shi Huang are the ones that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for.

Monuments. 8.My sister sang and danced.

9.The sound of a tractor was heard.

10.I overcame the difficulties in my studies.

Rhetorical question: 1You can't do this problem on the slide?

2.How this book is not your spike.

3.Aren't you playing?

4.Why didn't you write this?

5.Isn't there life beyond Earth?

6.How could I do such a thing?

7.Isn't he your father?

8.Don't you know him?

9.Isn't that a truth?

10.Aren't people who live in a new society happy?

It should be changed to: We must conscientiously correct our own shortcomings and correct our mistakes.

1. This is the problem of improper collocation in the modified sentence. It can be understood according to the difference between "correction" and "correction".

2. Correction refers to the measures taken to eliminate the found nonconformities, while correction refers to the elimination of existing problems without taking other measures. Correction here has more meaning than correction, that is, in addition to finding problems and eliminating them, there are certain preventive measures, while correction does not have this meaning.

3. The "shortcomings" in the sentence can be prevented by some preventive measures, so it is appropriate to correct them. The "error" in the sentence will disappear as soon as it is corrected, and no other action is required.

To sum up, the sentence should be changed to: We must seriously correct our own shortcomings and correct our mistakes.

Our class won the first place in the competition, and everyone's hearts showed the joy of victory.

Our class won the first place in the competition, and everyone's faces showed the joy of victory.

My brother likes to play basketball and soccer the most.

My brother likes to play basketball the most.

What a profound teaching! Isn't it worth remembering forever?

What a profound teaching! It's worth remembering forever.

If you don't take your class seriously, will you do your homework?

If you don't take your class seriously, you won't do your homework.

I don't know if what you want is this, if so, you can take it, I've been typing for a long time.

Hello! Thank you for your trust.

1. Your understanding is correct. This sentence is the reversal of the progressive relationship. It should read as follows:

Many masterpieces of ancient Chinese painting and calligraphy are not only the artistic treasures of the Chinese nation, but also the treasures of human art.

2. There is no problem with the causality of this sentence, but as you understand, it is a collocation error. It should read as follows:

Due to the efforts of textile workers to improve the quality of production, the cotton cloth exported by our country is well received by customers from all over the world.

Another example: China has the largest population in the world. [The type of sick sentence is the same] should be: China is the most populous country in the world.

3. Indeed, as you said, it is just a word order error, and there is no need to delete "discussion". Moreover, the sentence should be modified as much as possible to maintain the original meaning and reduce unnecessary changes. The best modification of this sentence should be:

Through the inspection, we found and discussed and solved some problems in extracurricular activities.

May it help you!

1. Incomplete ingredients:

1.The teacher and I went to visit the hospital.

2.At the 28th Olympic Games, China's athletes fought tenaciously.

3.Go to the park every morning to exercise.

4.Jingjing has developed a sense of hygiene since she was a child.

5.I was very happy to receive the "Three Good Students" certificate.

Corrections: 1The teacher and I went to the hospital to visit a sick classmate.

2.At the 28th Olympic Games, the tenacious fighting spirit of our athletes is admirable.

3.I go to the park every morning to exercise.

4.Jingjing has developed a good habit of hygiene since she was a child.

5.I was very happy to receive the "Three Good Students" certificate.

2. Improper use of words:

1.I will continue to work hard to make greater progress.

2.I cleaned the classroom neatly.

3.We need to have a good habit of saving water.

4.The vast grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.

5.At the party, everyone performed exquisite programs.

Corrections: 1I will continue to work hard to make greater progress.

2.I cleaned the classroom.

3.We need to develop good habits of water conservation.

4.The vast grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.

5.At the party, everyone performed wonderful programs.

3. Reversal of order.

1.The smell of rice flowers blew in the field for a while.

2.The Chinese population is the largest in the world.

3.Dad told many moving stories about Lei Feng.

4.I would like to introduce the situation of the school to the guests.

5.We should do a good job in studying.

Corrections: 1The smell of rice flowers blew in the fields.

2.China is the most populous country in the world.

3.Dad told Lei Feng many moving stories.

4.I gave the guests a brief introduction to the school.

5.We should do a good job in studying.

Fourth, repetition of verbosity.

1. There are a wide variety of toys in the mall.

2. The tree is full of many unclear fruits.

3. I completed all the homework assigned by the teacher.

4. I clean the classroom neatly and neatly.

5. The students think about the problem seriously and carefully.

Corrections: 1. There are all kinds of toys in the mall.

2. The tree is full of fruit.

3. I finished all the homework assigned by the teacher.

4. I clean the classroom.

5. The students are thinking about the problem seriously.

Is that okay?