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Life is not always easy, and sometimes, in order to make further progress, we need to change ourselves.

Changing oneself is a process of self-improvement. Lü Meng, a famous general of Eastern Wu during the Three Kingdoms period, is a good example. At the beginning, Lü Meng only knew how to dance knives and guns, and could not be diligent in the cultivation of cultural knowledge, after Sun Quan pointed this out to Lü Meng, Lü Meng studied hard, and later even Lu Su said:

For three days, you should be impressed. Because of Sun Quan's words, Lü Meng changed himself, truly achieved both civil and military skills, and laid the foundation for the hegemony of Wu State. And Lu Meng naturally perfected his personality and cultivation, and successfully changed himself.

Changing ourselves can hone our will. The caterpillar turns into a butterfly and has undergone a painstaking metamorphosis, and if it gives up, it will be in vain. The process of changing yourself is like climbing a mountain, facing the new self at the top of the mountain, you can only reach the top of the mountain with unremitting efforts.

Although you will encounter difficulties in the process of climbing the mountain that you would not expect, if you overcome them, you will eventually find that your willpower is stronger than before. As you change yourself, you also hone your will. This is fundamentally inevitable and mutually reinforcing.

Changing ourselves can make us better adapt to life. Everyone's life can't be smooth sailing, what will you do when you encounter a new living environment? The answer is to change yourself.

Because you can't ask society or someone else to change anything for you. I know two people, A and B. They are all introverted and even a little withdrawn.

After entering junior high school, in order to better adapt to the living environment, A took the initiative to change himself, and when he graduated from junior high school, he had many good friends, his social skills became stronger, and his social skills were wider. B, on the other hand, is even more closed than he was. It can be seen that changing ourselves can make us better adapt to the living environment.

Changing oneself is fundamentally about re-understanding and re-creating oneself. When you find yourself in need of a change, it's a sign that you have a clear head. Be able to realize that you need to make some changes to live better.

It's a boost in self-awareness. This ascension is what we need, and driven by this re-realization, you have made a re-creation of yourself, and the person who can change yourself is an extraordinary person, and this re-creation will help you in your later life. When we face adversity or ups and downs, we immediately realize that we need to change and can act immediately, and we are already able to achieve the state of "change".

Therefore, let us all learn to change ourselves, in order to make further progress, we must be good at changing ourselves, and dare to change ourselves, so as to obtain a new self!

Look for the side to establish the meaning.

This parable involves more objects, more aspects of the writing, and more complicated in the boildown, but as long as our minds are not confused, our thoughts will not be chaotic. Let's take it step by step, first of all, it involves the objects of God, eagles, ostriches, penguins, and a person.

God should play a key role here, grouped into one category; The eagle, the ostrich, and the penguin have one thing in common, that is, they all have wings, but they have different uses, and we can put them in the same category; There is also a category of people who do not have wings. From this, we can write from three angles. So what are the aspects of writing?

1) From God's point of view, we can conclude that we should be fair and just to people, things, and things;

2) From the perspective of "eagles, ostriches, and penguins", we can conclude that: 1. Different animals have different uses for the same wings. That is to say, the same thing (tool) will be of different use in the hands of different people; 2. The road is walked by people; 3. Destiny is in your own hands; 4. You can also talk about how to adapt to the environment, survive and develop in the harsh environment to succeed;

3) From the words of "that person" in the material, we can deduce: 1. Let the wings of the soul fly; 2. Do not rely on the gifts of others; 3. Don't complain about God's injustice; 4. God is fair.

From this point of view, you can write about the greatness of humanity! Praise, praise the great initiatives in the history of mankind! The comparison and description of animals that are also living things like humans highlight the advancement and excellence of human beings!

Of course, it can also be discussed from another angle, and it can also be seen from the title: penguins and ostriches treat their wings with optimism and pessimism, but eagles and humans can be contrasted and described, eagles are material wings that fly to high places, and people are spiritual wings that fly anywhere! Thanks for listening!

1. Visible wings and invisible wings.

2. Wings can be regarded as superior material conditions, some people can make good use of material conditions, while some people have made material conditions a heavy burden for them. Others, although they do not have superior material conditions, are still able to create their own sky.

I'm a primary school student too... Are you sure you want me to change? Well,

1. Section 3 writes about hardship, but you don't write about hardship. Please add.

2. This article feels a bit unconnected and a bit messy.

3. Is this a short article? I think there's a lot more to write about.

4, what system of the Qin State can not be written, it seems a bit off-topic. Or from the system of the Qin State, write what truth you understand.

5. I can see it! Change "the leaves are green and yellow, yellow and green," to "how many springs, summers, autumns and winters, how many winds and rains and hardships have passed, and the years have come to a successful end. In the blink of an eye, the semester is over, so don't do it. (See if it works).

Pretty much these points,I'm in the 4th grade.,Limited ability.,I can't see it.,I'll add when I have new discoveries.,I think what you wrote looks like the 4th grade wrote.。。。 In the 4th grade, we can get a little better, our teachers are very strict).

1.Change the phrase "the leaves are green and yellow, yellow and green," to "wait for the swallows to go, and there will be a time to come again; The willows are withered, and there is a time when they are green again; The peach blossoms are gone, and there is a time to bloom again. The reason is to quote a famous sentence, which comes from Zhu Ziqing's "Hurry".

The swallow has gone, and there is a time to come again; The willows are withered, and there is a time when they are green again; The peach blossoms are gone, and there is a time to bloom again. In the blink of an eye, the semester has ended, and I have gained a lot in this semester, although the difficulty of learning has also increased, and three subjects have been added: biology, history, and geography. We should also study the seven subjects well so that we can repay our parents with excellent grades.

In this semester, I have gained a lot, not only in terms of knowledge, but also in terms of friendship, and also let me know what is called team spirit, how to learn Chinese well, understand articles, and let me know how inhumane the system of the Qin State is, let me know that people are made of cells...

We have gained so much in this semester, it is happy and hard, let me find happiness in the hard work. Because I know that life is just beginning.

Looking back on this semester, I find that I have grown up and can grasp the youth and time. I am really lucky to cherish my time and control it.

It's not bad, mainly because the structure of the part of the knowledge you learned is too messy, and it's okay overall.

Fortunately, individual statements are modified.

On the road Life is like a never-ending journey, we can only keep waving goodbye, but we have non-stop.

Cut, do you want people to type one word at a time? Give 0 points back? Still asking me for help? Come on!

Everyone wants to be understood, and I'm no exception. Recently, I feel that others have always been incomprehensible to me, and it is really uncomfortable not to be understood, especially when I am misunderstood by my dearest mother.

When I went home during the National Day holiday, I forgot the book I had just bought that the teacher asked us to write after reading at school, and the first thing my mother usually did when I went home on three weekends was to check the books and homework books I brought back from school, and this time was no exception. As soon as she saw that there was no "Crying Nose and His Wish Gate" written on "Sun and Rain" in my school bag, and there was no "Book of Virtues for Teenagers", she asked me if I had forgotten school again, and I didn't dare to look directly at my mother, so I lowered my head, and my mother counted me down, and I couldn't even put my mouth in, so I held back the tears that swirled in my eyes, and didn't say a word. Because I used to go home and forget my English books at school, every time my mother ran to my classmate Qi Yiming to help me borrow books.

It's not just that I didn't bring a book. There are several three weekends to go home and not even a stationery box, last three days to go home and did not bring, this time before going home, my mother also came to ** repeatedly told me not to forget homework and school supplies at school, I even forgot to bring, no wonder my mother will blame me so much this time. But this time I really didn't mean to, this time I went home because it was raining, I helped others with umbrellas, and I was in a hurry to put it on.

Thick: You can write about the strong feelings you have with your family and friends.

Thin: You can write that you pay attention to the process of a certain competition or competition and look down on the result.

Legendary zero-score essay. No one bothered to write it.