Please comment on the little piece I just finished, thank you

Your point of view on whether the red face is a disaster is not objective! First of all, the factor of the destruction of the country cannot be reduced to the fact that it must be united for a long time, and it must be divided for a long time. The decay of the feudal state is the advance of historical civilization, and it cannot be reduced to the superficial statement that it must be divided for a long time, and it must be divided for a long time.

The root cause of the decline of the feudal state is that the system of feudal society can no longer use the needs of civilized democracy, etc., and history needs a more open and civilized management method, so the feudal society will be constantly replaced.

So, your argument was wrong in the first place.

So, in my opinion, your argument was not successful.

In addition, there are some small places where the wording is really inconsiderate. For example:

The tragic fate of the deceased monarch is deeply engraved in the hearts of future generations, like an alarm bell ringing for a long time. The alarm bell rings for a long time.

Too much confusion in the arguments is also a drawback.

The text is mixed with a strong sense of personal subjectivity.

In the dead country, Hongyan has very little consciousness of himself.

Most of them are manipulated by others.

A tragedy in itself.

So say the landlord's article.

Wow! The seniors on the first floor are so amazing!

Admire! What does the landlord think? I think the seniors on the first floor have a point!

It got me thinking.

You can try to write other types of articles.

I completely agree with the landlord.

Every life is different, it's a miracle. Indifference is a kind of bearing, a kind of cultivation, and a kind of attitude.

But when indifference and desire are placed in front of life, how many people can really have an indifferent heart and a calm mind.

Being able to interpret possession and loss in this way makes me better understand the east corner of loss and understand the truth of Sangyu.

Maybe when you have an indifferent heart, what you get is the ...... of the whole world

Life is to be light and quiet, and we have to enrich ourselves...

It's a good write-up, and I write down my feelings.

It's snowing, the children are having a lot of fun, you see, some children are happily building snowmen in the snow, some are happily playing snowballs, and a few naughty children are having snowball fights, you see how lively!

It snowed in the evening, and when I woke up in the morning, there was a thick layer of snow on the ground. Today is Sunday, and the children put on thick clothes, hats, and scarves and come out to play. Look, some are building snowmen, some are having snowball fights, what a joy!

It's snowing, and some of the children are building snowmen, some are rolling snowballs, and some are playing in the snow. They're having a great time!

There are too many high-sounding words, and there is a lack of responsibility and work goals.

I remember when I was in the fourth grade. One day, I saw an essay call for papers in "New Boys", and I thought to myself, why not test my writing skills? So I made a decision and wrote an essay and mailed it to the "New Boys" department.

Since that day, I have been looking forward to it every day, hoping that "New Boy" will be sent as soon as possible, and that I will see my own article on it. One afternoon, the teacher delivered me a letter from the New Youth Department. I was so excited that I couldn't wait to open the envelope.

As a result, I was presented with a rejection instead of a congratulatory letter. Suddenly, I felt as if there were thousands of eyes staring at me, and I couldn't wait to find a crack in the ground to get into, and I don't know who made the "little broadcast", and in the second class, the whole class knew about it and started talking about it.

If you don't have that level, don't do it! ”

I can't write well, but I like to write, and I can do it even more. ”

I really don't know how it came to be that day. As soon as the school bell rang, I was the first to rush out of school as if I had been released. As soon as I entered the house, I burst into tears.

I feel that I will never be able to raise my head again. I don't even want to go to school anymore. That night, the teacher came to my house and told me a lot of truths.

Before leaving, he gave me a message: "Go your own way and let others say go!" ”

That night, I couldn't sleep. Yes, how can one be overwhelmed by small setbacks? It doesn't matter what others say, the key is to have your own goals and follow your own path.

Right! "I got up on my bones and immediately used this submission failure as the material to write an essay called "The Storm of Submission". The night was silent, and my heart calmed down a lot ......

Two weeks later, the good news came. The essay I sent won an award. When I received the red certificate with both hands, I couldn't help but cry.

These tears are full of joy, excitement, and infinite hope and understanding of life. This experience made me realize that people have a variety of abilities, and in order to succeed, you should make the most of your talents and follow your own path.

1.When there is a problem, solving the problem is what everyone will do, but in the end, can we find the problem correctly, you can prescribe the right medicine, the reason why the squirrel will come out of the cage is not because the cage is too small, but because they forgot to close the cage, if they realized on the first day that the squirrel ran out because the cage was not closed, then there is no such thing as the following, this story tells us not to just look at the surface of the problem, to see the essence of the problem.

We only know that there is a problem, but we cannot grasp the core and root of the problem.

Things are interconnected, we must take into account all aspects of factors in handling affairs, we must have a long-term vision, we cannot only see the immediate difficulties and ignore the root causes of the difficulties, we must start from solving the fundamental problems, and the problems can be solved well.

In employing people, we should pay attention to giving full play to their strong points.