Collect a poem and write down which words of the poem are used well and where they are good

Quatrain Tang. Du fu.

The river is more than white, and the mountains are blue and flowery.

This spring has passed again and again, when is the return year?

The turquoise of the river makes the white feathers of the waterfowl appear whiter, and the green mountain peaks reflect the flowers as red as a burning fire.

This year's spring has passed again, and I don't know when I will be able to go home

Literal meaning] over: more.

Desire: Like. Burn: burn.

Over: In the past. DH: What.

Appreciation] Jiang Bi Bird is more than white, and the mountain blue flowers are about to burn", this is a landscape painting inlaid in the frame, full of ink on the paper, and rich color in the picture, which has a dazzling charm. The blue waves of the river ripple, revealing the white feathered water birds, sweeping the wings of the river, a pleasant scenery. The mountains are verdant, and the flowers all over are extremely red, just like a burning fire, very charming, very splendid.

With the white of the river blue lining the bird's feather, the blue and white reflect each other;With the red of the mountain green lining flowers, the green and red are each other's beauty. The word "exceed" will be the waterfowl by the blue background of the river and show the whiteness of its feathers, written in a deep way;The word "desire" is endowed with dynamic and swaying flowers in anthropomorphism. Two poems of four scenes of rivers, mountains, flowers and birds, and respectively apply four colors: green, green, fiery red and white, the scene is fresh and pleasing to the eye.

However, the poet's will is not here, and then the pen takes a steep turn, and sighs.

This spring has passed again and again, when is the return year?In the sentence, the three words "see and pass" are directly pointed to the time to write the poem.

The scenery of late spring and early summer is not unbeautiful, but it is a pity that the years have passed and the return date is far away, which not only does not arouse the interest of playing, but instead arouses the sentimentality of wandering. The artistic characteristics of this poem are to write lamentation with music, and only when it says that the spring is harmonious, can the poet be sincere and earnest. It does not let the sentimentality of Sigui be directly revealed from the scene, but uses the difference between objective scenery and subjective feelings to contrast the poet's deep homesickness, which has a unique rhyme.

The word "green" is good: the spring breeze is invisible, but the word "green" can make people feel that the two Buqiao yards are extremely green, making this poem more vivid and vivid, and the image of the spring breeze is vivid.

Wang Anshi: Jiefu, Banshan, Han nationality, native of Linchuan (now Linchuan District, Fuzhou City, Jiangxi Province), a famous thinker, politician, writer, and reformer of the Northern Song Dynasty.

Original text: "Docking Guazhou" Wang Anshi.

Jingkou Guazhou is a water, Zhongshan is only separated by a few mountains.

The spring breeze and the south bank of the Green River, when will the bright moon shine on me.

Jingkou Guazhou is a water, Zhongshan is only separated by a few mountains.

The spring breeze and the south bank of the Green River, when will the bright moon shine on me. The word "green" in the poem is cleverly used and has been widely praised since ancient times. According to the Southern Song Dynasty Hongmai ("Rong Zhai Essays" continued volume 8), Wang Anshi successively used more than ten words such as "to", "pass", "enter", "full", etc., and finally selected the word "green" in the middle of the oak.

So, what's so good about this "green" word? It turns out that the word "green" is an adjective that expresses color, and it has become a verb used in the poem, which has a sense of color and dynamics, giving people a visual image of beauty.

Rhetorically speaking, this is a technique of transference, also known as synaesthesia. The wind can only be distinguished by hearing and feeling, but in spring, it is gentle and smooth, blowing on the face and silent. Now use "green" to describe it, turning the auditory and feeling that are not very easy to convey into vision, that is, seeing the arrival of the spring breeze, and showing the changes from the spring breeze to the water town in the south of the Yangtze River, which is full of vitality and prosperity, giving people a strong feeling of beauty.

1, the author of "What I See in the Night Book" Ye Shaoweng [Dynasty] Song. Poetry: Xiao Xiao Wuye sends a cold sound, and the autumn wind on the river moves guests. Knowing that there are children who pick and promote weaving, a light falls on the fence in the middle of the night.

Interpretation: The autumn wind blows the leaves of the sycamore trees, sending a chill, and the autumn wind blows on the river, so that I can't help but miss my hometown when I am away. A few children in the family are still fighting crickets with great interest! In the dead of night, the lights are still on, and they refuse to sleep.

2. "September 9th Memories of Shandong Brothers" author Wang Wei [Dynasty] Tang. Poetry: Alone in a foreign land as a stranger, every festival to think of relatives. The remote knowledge brothers ascended to the heights, and there was one less person in the dogwood.

Interpretation: It is inevitable that there will always be a little desolation when you are far away from home, and you will miss your distant relatives every Double Ninth Festival. Thinking from afar that my brothers are wearing dogwoods to climb to a high place, I will also regret because I am alone.

3, the author of "Qiqiao" Lin Jie [Dynasty] Tang. Poetry: Qixi tonight to see the blue sky, morning glory and weaver girl crossing the river bridge. Every family begs to look at the autumn moon and wears thousands of red silks.

Interpretation: Today, on the seventh day of July, everyone looks at the clear sky at night, the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl are holding the big buffalo and the two children, and they are crossing the magpie bridge erected on the Tianhe River. The girls of all families looked at the moon in the sky, and sincerely begged the gods for ingenuity and wisdom, and they pierced the red silk threads into the pinholes against the moonlight, and threaded one after another, and I don't know how many red threads were worn in one night.

4, "Chang'e" author Li Shangyin [Dynasty] Tang. Poetry: The shadow of the mica screen is deep, and the long river is gradually falling. Chang'e should repent of stealing the elixir, and the blue sea and blue sky are night and night.

Interpretation: Through the screen decorated with mica, the candle shadow gradually dims. The Milky Way is sinking, and the morning star is disappearing. Chang'e regrets being lonely, regretting stealing the elixir, and now only the blue sky and blue sea accompany her lonely heart night and night.

I don't know what you mean!! So I can't help you.

Where are your verses? No way.

Go and enter are the sound words.

Ping is equivalent to 1 or 2 tones in Mandarin, Shang is equivalent to 3 tones, and Go is equivalent to 4 tones.

But you have to pay attention to the fact that there is no "in" sound in Mandarin, and the "in" sound word in Mandarin has been divided into 3 sounds: ping, shang, and go.

The specific thing to do is: find a flat water rhyme or Evening Cuixuan rhyme (there is one on the Internet, baidu search 1 click).

Searched for 1 for you.

Pingshui rhyme Look at the sound of the rhyme part of the phonetic words, read these words, if you are a southerner, you will feel that the pronunciation method of the sound words is different from the 3 tones of peace, up and go, then you can read more and be more familiar, so that you can clearly distinguish the sound in Mandarin that is classified into the sound of Pingsheng;

If you are a northerner, then congratulations, you can't read the words in and out of the sound, you need to memorize the sound that is classified in the flat sound.

Write poems: In the rhythmic poems, 5 uniques, 7 absolute poems, 5 laws, and 7 laws each have 4 different kinds of pingxuan, Wang Li's "Poetry Rhythm" has it, write down all of them, and then write poems according to the rhythm.

Fill in the words: Fill in the words to look at the word spectrum, the word spectrum can be found on the Internet, and the bookstore also has it, and the novice recommends the "Baixiang Word Spectrum" This spectrum is relatively loose 1. In the score, you can fill in a Pingsheng word for the words that require Pingsheng, and you can fill in the Pingsheng words if you ask for Pingsheng in the score, and you can fill in the words that are Pingsheng.

As for the quality of the poems, it is up to you to accumulate your own cultural heritage.

Poetry and Rhythm" by Wang Li.

Baixiang Lexicon" Shu Menglan selected compilation.

Write about the sky and the earth, and show the vastness of your inner world! You can write about rainbows! And the breeze, the rain!

Read more, read more, think more, and try to write down what you feel in your heart.