Is this poem like this? Please advise! 5

Now the poetry of the Ping Xuan roughly to judge by two judgment standards, one is the so-called Chinese new rhyme, that is, to Mandarin pronunciation as the standard, one or two tones for the flat, three or four for the Ping, the advantage is that it is more in line with the modern phonetic habits, easy to judge, the disadvantage is that it is out of touch with the ancients used by the Pingxuan, used to create is acceptable, used to appreciate the ancient poetry will have a lot of incomprehensible points. The criterion you are using now is the criterion of Chinese new rhyme. If you are learning ancient poetry writing, you can get started with this, and you can indicate "according to the rhyme".

The other is in accordance with the traditional Pingshui rhyme, now it is easy to find the common words of this rhyme on the Internet, the advantage of this rhyme is that it is basically the rhyme of the ancients who wrote the rhythm of the poems, it is easy to compare with the ancient poems after familiarization, and retains the various differences between the ancient sounds and modern pronunciation such as the phonetic words, which is very beneficial for enhancing the understanding of ancient poems, but the disadvantage is that it is difficult to master, and many of the words into the sound are to be backed, if you want to follow this standard, you may wish to search for "flat water rhyme", Refer to the rhyme book to understand the Pingqian Division.

Taking this poem as an example, the first word "Xue" at the end of the couplet belongs to the word in the "Three Senses" of Pingshui Rhyme, which is a sound word, not a flat sound, and the last word "knowledge" in the jaw couplet is also a sound word when it is used as the "knowledge" of "knowledge", not a flat sound. I haven't checked them one by one, but there may be other discrepancies, so you might as well compare them yourself.

Zhen Guo learns poetry. The old man wrote poems with the tide, and Qingzhi met a good teacher for the first time. (Ping Ping, Ping Ping).

Follow the window to look for good sentences, and look for good words on the Internet. (Ping Ping, Ping, Ping Ping Ping) Frequent reading of Ping Ping to add knowledge, diligence and Gong Lian to increase knowledge. (Ping Ping, Ping Ping Ping, Ping Ping) The boundless spring of the sea is always there, and I am not afraid of the frost and dyeing silk on the temples.

Ping Ping, Ping, Ping) The above is according to the modern Mandarin Ping. Zhen Guo learns poetry.

The old man wrote poems with the tide, and Qingzhi met a good teacher for the first time. (Ping Ping, Ping Ping) follow the window to look for good sentences, and look for wonderful words on the Internet. (Ping Ping, Ping, Ping Ping) Frequent reading of Ping Ping to add knowledge, diligence and Gong Lian to increase knowledge.

Ping Ping, Ping) Learn the boundless spring of the sea, and you are not afraid of the frost and dyeing silk on the temples. (仄仄平仄, 仄仄仄仄平) The above is according to the level of classical poetry.

From the point of view of tone, this poem is not Qilu you. The poem should be eight or more than eighty percent of the thought extended form.

I guess you are Ze detection system, using the results found on the Internet, so there are a few "pass" words. How to write a metrical poem, here it is difficult to use a sentence or two, a large paragraph of content, you absolutely can't stand it, if you suspect that I am in a private relationship.

On the one hand, because the ancient rhyme has been lost, the sound and rhyme of different periods in China are different, I have also checked a lot of ancient poems, and tried in Mandarin, Jin, Wu, Cantonese, Hokkien, and Sichuan, but there is no dialect to read the Tang Dynasty poems can be completely aligned, all aligned must be forcibly changed umlauts, and only a part of each dialect can be corrected.

However, if you read the "Sound Rhythm Enlightenment" of the Qing Dynasty, more than 95% of the Pingyu and rhyme in Mandarin can be matched, which shows that the sound rhyme in the late Ming Dynasty has gradually approached the modern era. Judgment base eggplant.

On the other hand, perhaps some of the ancients were not particularly strict, for example, some poets will have the phenomenon of "loss of stickiness" when writing poems, and the number of poets who have lost their stickiness in the later period has gradually increased, but this kind of casual poet cannot be neat in every capital, and there are still a lot of neat poems, if a large number of Tang poems are not in line with today's Mandarin and local dialects, then the main reason is the change of sound rhyme, and the secondary reason is the problem of loss of stickiness.

And then there is a poet like Li Bai, sometimes he doesn't write according to Pingxuan, it doesn't matter if he doesn't get right, he doesn't care about the big guy