What do you think of Zhejiang Sanye s Time and Space Murder Crime Land ?

<> happened to see one of the third masters of Zhejiang (the one he put on top), I was curious and wanted to continue watching, so I found "Time and Space Murderer". I think the reason why this kind of story is attractive is because it caters to the reader's psychology, after all, there are many uncomfortable things like the one written in the book in reality, and often the result is not what we want, but the actions of the protagonist in this book bring the reader the most real feeling of "cool". And the setting of time and space has been added, so that the plot has a lot of unexpected and reasonable reversals, which is very appealing.

The first threshold is the smoothness of the dialogue. It can be said that this level can stump more than ninety percent of new authors. A lot of people don't know when to say it from my point of view and when to say it with colons and quotation marks. Why? Because of the first person.

can't all use colons and quotation marks, otherwise it's easy to write pseudo-first-person. But I can't write all of them from my point of view, because overuse will turn into self-talk. The smoothness of these two dialogues can almost dissuade more than half of first-person writers, which is not an exaggeration at all.

The second threshold of the first person is the perspective description, because the first person is written directly from the protagonist's senses, so the writing technique.

It is very different from the mainstream third person. The text should be concise and beautiful, and it should be smooth and not drop the book bag.

This story starts with the death of her husband, and the first twist is that the protagonist wants to kill the person who killed her husband, and finally gives up for the sake of the child, but the other party finds the house, and uses violence, and the point of hatred is bullying orphans and widows. The second turn is that after killing the other party by mistake, Officer Su Qinghe ran to the house, but the body disappeared, and the first suspense was laid out here in the second turn. The third turning point is that after Su Qinghe left, the corpse suddenly reappeared, setting up the character of the mysterious person, and the second suspense was set up here.

Last week, a friend approached me and asked how the plot could be coherent, and I told him to go through the layers and link to each link, each of which is indispensable.

I think this work is still very good and very realistic.

Very nice and worth a look. "Time and Space Murder" is an urban life class created by Zhejiang Sanmo Chongye, the protagonist of the story is Fan Zhenghao Su Qinghe, the plot is fascinating, very blind and recommended. The main ones are as follows:

The man was knocked to the ground by my punch, and he let out a scream of pain, and I flew up and kicked him hard in the temple! That's the way I've always been, when I'm sure the other person is in danger, I'll beat them alive until I can't resist and then I stop.

Introduction of Zhejiang Sanye:

Zhejiang Sanye is an excellent ** author, his works include: "The Question of the Absolutely Beautiful Rotten Round Wife", "Drifting Classroom", "The Beautiful Wife", "One Hundred Thousand Gods Spit Complaints", etc., this book, word by word, the author of the author of Zhejiang Sanye's ** plot ups and downs, exciting, plot and writing are good.

Zhejiang Sanye's "Time and Space Murderer: The Land of Sin" is very good and worth watching.

Time and Space Murder is an urban life class created by Zhejiang Sanye**, the protagonist in the story is Fan Zhenghao Su Qinghe, the plot is fascinating, very recommended.

Time and Space Murder Plot: Collapse.

Gang Zhenzi started to do something to the driver Fan Zhenghao, he just wanted to teach Fan Zhenghao a lesson, who knew that Fan Zhenghao jumped off the bridge and died. He wanted to kill someone, but he never wanted to.

Then he did it to Zhu Chengheng, he was to protect Tu Lingying, who was almost defiled, what was he thinking at that time, to protect this girl he didn't know, and then call the police, but who knew that because of Zhu Chengheng's attack, he had another life on his back.