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Autumn Moon The cold moon is unwatched, and the ice is clean and cold.

The moon is unknown, and I wait for the fifteenth full.

Ice and clean clothes: the moon is a clean thing, clean and fresher, and the wonderful moon does not know people's wishes: with "knowledge", it is more humane and beautiful.

Waiting for 15 to be full: the performance month is also helpless.

Rotten wood chant Hanging on the edge of the cliff, the figure is not oblique.

Thousands of years of wind and snow have been refined, and the arrogance will be difficult to suppress.

This is very good.,Oblique.,Read xia here.,It's an ancient sound.,Okay!

Song Hongxi. The explanation of the jade plate is indeed in place.

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No one looks at the cold moon, and the ice glow is cold through the clothes.

The moon was incomprehensible, and hung the jade plate in vain.

Could it be changed to. No one looks at the cold moon, and the ice glow is cold through the clothes.

It is not understandable, what is the hanging jade window.

Autumn Moon: The deep boudoir is lovesick to the bone.

Rotten Wood: Proud and sworn not to fear evil.

The moon was incomprehensible, and hung the jade plate in vain. ”

It is estimated that the moon is hung on the "jade plate" for escort?

The moon hangs on the moon?

Moreover, since it is "no one looks at the cold moon", how can "the moon is incomprehensible"?

Dizzy, the whole cold fight

It's empty, and there's no real description.

Why so much emotion.

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Autumn: Sadness, longing.

Drifting, guest: a wanderer outside.

This poem first sets a sad and miserable tone from the autumn character.

It is a poem of homesickness and self-harm.

The poem cleverly borrows the scenery of autumn reading - falling leaves, and compares himself to the fallen leaves floating in the air, which shows the author's helplessness and desolation in a foreign land! The last sentence is even more straightforward, naming the author's thoughts, "cherishing" the hometown, and the love for the hometown is incisive

Nice poem! I made a note of it!

Translation: Autumn comes early, and the leaves fall, which is frightening; Withering is like what happens to a distant traveler.

The leaves flew as if they didn't want to land, and they still told that they couldn't bear to leave the trees.

Pin: Ye can't bear to quit the forest, but people have to leave their hometowns. is also a "person" who has fallen into Kaiya, and only I am sad when we meet.

43: Original: copy"How did spring speak? But her great hidden power is like this, Wen.

The world is soft! ”

Appreciation: No heavy ink and heavy color, no exaggeration and rendering, just use light brushwork to show the natural beauty of nature. Her admiration for natural aesthetics and demure and gentle temperament have also been expressed in this short line of poetry.

33: Original text: "When you enjoy the flowers in the corner, the heavens and the earth will be small." ”

Appreciation: This is a philosophical poem, using flowers as a metaphor to tell people not to be too complacent, not to be lonely, to see farther and broader.

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Mother!

The storm in the sky came, and the bird hid in its nest; e5a48de588b662616964757a686964616f31333239303839

The storm in my heart came, and I only hid in your arms.

The poet uses vivid metaphors to convey the love of motherhood, and writes with sincerity and touching.

This kind of ode to maternal love occupies a considerable proportion in "Stars" and "Spring Water". It can be said that it is the affectionate praise of maternal love that lays the deep and delicate emotional tone of these two works. Closely related to the celebration of mother's love is the cherishing of innocence, childlike fun, childlike innocence and all new things

Thousands of angels will rise up and sing praises to the little ones;

Child! In his tiny body was a great soul.

In the eyes of the poet, the world full of innocence and childlike fun is the most beautiful world in the world.

We are all natural babies, lying in the cradle of the universe.

Bingxin also integrates maternal love, innocence, and nature:

Creator dates. If there is only one promise of bliss in eternal life, I will earnestly ask:

I was in my mother's arms, my mother was in the boat, and the boat was in the moonlit sea. ”

This poem perfectly integrates the praise of maternal love, the call for innocence, and the aria of nature, creating a world of perfection and beauty, with sincere and deep feelings, fresh and elegant language, giving people endless aftertaste and enlightenment, and is one of the most beautiful chapters in Bingxin's poems.

The flowers in the corner, when you are alone and admired, the world will be small.

In terms of art, "Stars" and "Spring Water" combine the strengths of classical Chinese poetry and Tagore's philosophical poems, and are good at capturing the inspiration of the moment, expressing inner feelings and thoughts in three words and two words, in a short but meaningful form. Especially in the language, it is fresh and elegant, crystal clear, clear and long-lasting, with a unique artistic charm.

Mother! Leave aside your sorrows, and let me sink into your bosom, and you alone are the anchor of my soul.

The little flower also wants to raise her head and thank Chunguang for her love dates.

However, the deep kindness made her finally silent.

Mother! Are you the spring light?

Comments] The maternal love in Bingxin's poems often has a double connotation: one is the infiltration of maternal love into the poet; The second is the poet's affectionate praise of maternal love. These two poems embody this dual connotation.

They express the children's affection for their mothers and sing praises of their mother's love. The metaphor is novel, the language is clear, and the touching is profound.

Successful flowers, people only envy her current brightness!

However, at the beginning, her buds were soaked in the tears of struggle and sprinkled with the blood of sacrifice.

Comments] This is a philosophical poem. The poet compares the success of life and career to flowers, the initial stage of achievement of career to the "buds" of flowers, the hard work of struggle to the "fountain of tears" for cultivating flowers, and the self-sacrifice to the "blood rain" that nourishes flowers, which is vivid and thought-provoking. Tell us that when we envy the success of others, we should see the hardships behind the success.

With limited energy, only the first poem is appreciated, which reads as follows:

The first sentence is to say that this person is not a human being, because he himself says that he is an immortal, and an immortal is certainly not a human being. Otherwise, it can only be said that this person has serious paranoia and is suspected of having escaped from the psychiatric hospital without authorization, and it is recommended that the local psychiatric hospital be notified for timely verification.

The second sentence is that he abuses animals, because China clearly stipulates that the white crane is a national second-class protected animal and cannot be used for transportation. And this person not only took it, but also forced it to fly for a few days, and the plane had to be refueled, which is simply an abuse of excessive oppression.

The third sentence is that he flew illegally, because it is easy to cause air crashes when it snows, so the country has strict take-off regulations for this. And he still looked back in the snow, it is conceivable that he not only took off illegally but also looked left and right while driving, and the most serious thing was that he actually flew outside the Tianshan Mountains, which involves the question of whether he intruded into other people's airspace, which may lead to international disputes.

The fourth sentence said that he was about to crash, because he could actually see the lotus flower on the dangerous peak, but you can imagine how close he must be to that dangerous peak! Unless he looks like a telescope and not a human eye, he can see clearly from a distance. If it is not the species mutation, which caused the lotus flower to grow the size of a table, it is recommended that he report it to the Species Protection Association of China in time, which can be developed into a tourism project to promote local economic development.

To sum up, the whole poem is about a mentally ill person who has no love and abuses wild animals, driving a UFO in violation of regulations, and writing the story of crashing and dying on a snowy day. . .

ps: If you really dare to speak, you must be prepared in advance that your Chinese teacher will faint. And if you say this, and your classmates don't laugh, I suggest you send them all to the hospital for a check-up, it is very likely that the nerves in the face are necrotic...

Poems for Young People

When I was young, I didn't know how precious gold was valuable, and when I was old, I cried when I looked at it.

There are cars that can be pushed straight and must be pushed, don't wait for the wall to be gray without a car!

"Good Life" was born in a green world, throwing away black pollution. Greet the spring breeze together and embrace the warm sunshine. Teachers and students learn together, and the campus is full of books. Beauty returns to the world, and harmony belongs to home.

The journey of the sun and the moon, if out of it; The stars are splendid, if out of it. The previous description is observed from the plane of the sea, and these four sentences are related to the boundless universe, indulging in a large brushstroke, and putting the momentum and power of the sea in front of the reader: the vast sea and the sky are connected, and the emptiness is mixed; In front of this majestic and magnificent sea, the sun, moon, stars, and Han (Milky Way) all seem small, and their movements seem to be freely absorbed by the sea.

The sea described by the poet here is not only the real scene in front of him, but also blends into his own imagination and exaggeration, showing a magnificent atmosphere that swallows the universe, and has the trend of "five mountains starting from every inch". This kind of "enveloping and swallowing weather" is an artistic realm formed by the fusion of the poet's "eyes" and "chest". If a poet does not have grand political aspirations, the ambition to make achievements, and the optimism of being full of confidence in the future, he will not be able to write such a magnificent poetry in any way.

In the past, some people said that Cao Cao's poems were "domineering from time to time" (Shen De's subtext), referring to works such as "Watching the Sea".

I don't see the Tang Dynasty: Li Bai.

Who is the son of the white horse, and the yellow dragon is stopped.

The three zhang snow in the Tianshan Mountains is not the time to travel far away.

Spring and autumn grass, sand chickens chirp in the west pool.

The wind destroys the cold and brown sounds, and the moon is sad in frost.

Remembering the farewell year with you, planting peaches and moth eyebrows.

The peach is more than 100 feet long, and the flowers fall into dead branches.

In the end, I was alone, and I knew it with tears.

Appreciation] This poem is written by Bai Mazi (Biansaier) far away from the side, and the people in the boudoir remember it and shed tears. In this way, it celebrates steadfast love, and contains anti-war sentiments.

The poem can be divided into four sections. The first four sentences write that the border plug has entered the middle of winter, and the snow is very thick, so it is impossible to defend the border, and the border plug is still hard to defend the border. Huanglong and Tianshan refer to the land of the border fortress, not the actual reference.

The four sentences of Chunhui write that the people in the boudoir miss from spring to autumn, and bear the pain of spring flowers and autumn moons, insects and grass decay, and loneliness. The four sentences of "Remembering and Bidding Farewell to You" write about the blossoming and falling of flowers in the boudoir, and the thoughts of year after year are witnessed by the peach tree from young to tall, flowers falling, and branches withering. These eight sentences all contain the grief of the passage of time and the ease of youth.

The last two sentences point to the topic. The word "empty" is full of despair.

Is it Shen Yan period Say clearly which one is not seen This is a lot of Yuefu.

This is a quasi-ancient music. The content of the poem is mainly the nostalgia of the woman for the recruitment. The poet uses environmental descriptions to highlight the grievances of the woman, and contrasts the loneliness of the woman with a swallow that flies and perches; The cold anvil urges the fallen leaves, and the bright moon shines yellow to set off the sorrow and hatred.

The combination of scenes and the artistic conception are distinct. This poem had a great influence on the later Tang Dynasty poetry, especially the Biansai poem, and has always been highly evaluated. Yao Nai said that it "reverberates the Tang sound, far from the ancient rhyme, this is a masterpiece of God, and it should be crowned for a while." ”

1. Ai wine removes miasma, thousands of doors, Fubi water, boat racing for ten miles, Dragon Boat Festival.

2. A song of sheng songs, spring is like the sea, thousands of doors are lit up at night, and the Lantern Festival is like a year.

3. Into the wine chrysanthemum, I am drunk and look at Chongyang with clouds in the autumn mountains.

4. The sound of firecrackers, the early spring news, the peach charm, the gravel everywhere, the New Year.

5. Occupy half of the autumn season, take advantage of the bright moon and the Mid-Autumn Festival.

1.Dragon boat festival.

2.Lantern Festival.

3.Chung yeung festival.

4.Spring Festival. 5.Mid-autumn festival.

With the exception of the second, there is complete certainty.

Looking at the sea, it expresses the poet's anxiety about social turmoil and pastoral desolation; The fourth chapter, "Turtle Although Shou", describes the poet's heroic spirit of growing old and struggling.

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The dynamics of the warbler and the new swallow accurately and vividly reveal the early spring weather that the poet appreciates while walking, giving people a sense of freshness.

Tianjingsha Autumn Thoughts expresses the author's longing and nostalgia for his hometown. It also expresses a feeling of homesickness and homesickness.

Upstairs, write it yourself, don't copy it!

Chunxing (Wu Yuanheng).

The willows are cloudy and drizzle, and the remnants of the flowers fall to see the warblers.

The spring breeze blew the dream of the countryside overnight, and chased the spring breeze to Los Angeles.

."Tianjingsha Autumn Thoughts" expresses the author's longing and nostalgia for his hometown, and "Little Bridge and Flowing Water" describes a quiet and warm scene, in order to contrast the loneliness and sadness of "the heartbroken man at the end of the world". It also expresses a feeling of homesickness and homesickness.

1."Watching the Sea" uses the sea to swallow the sun and the moon, and embraces the weather of the universe to express his ambition and the courage to dominate the world.