The writing is good, help revise a short poem, thank you 10

Updated on culture 2024-02-09
12 answers
  1. Anonymous users2024-02-05

    Lose cherished.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

    The innocence and cuteness of elementary school.

    Those wonderful friendships in elementary school.

    Mutual trust between classmates in elementary school.

    The teacher's affability in elementary school.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

    He is now in junior high school. The confusion and ignorance of junior high school.

    The inferiority complex and shyness of junior high school.

    The unfamiliar environment and unfamiliar classmates in junior high school.

    The severity and reprimand of the teacher in junior high school.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

    Loss will be gone forever.

    Now learn to cherish.

    Seize every minute now.

    Don't wait until you lose it to sigh.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

  2. Anonymous users2024-02-04

    Lose cherished.

    Only after losing can we know how to cherish.

    The teacher was kind and amiable in elementary school.

    Mutual trust between classmates in elementary school.

    The innocence, cuteness, and childlike nature of elementary school.

    And those wonderful friendships.

    Only after losing can we know how to cherish.

    Know how to cherish when everything is gone.

    He is now a junior high school student.

    The confusion and ignorance in junior high school, the confusion and ignorance in junior high school, and the shyness of inferiority in junior high school.

    An unfamiliar environment and unfamiliar classmates in junior high school.

    The severity and reprimand of the teacher in junior high school.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

    What is lost will return as it was in the past.

    And now we have to learn to grasp every moment of the present.

    Don't wait until you lose it and learn to cherish it.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

  3. Anonymous users2024-02-03

    Lose cherished.

    The innocent and cute childlike fun of elementary school.

    Those wonderful friendships in elementary school.

    Mutual trust between classmates in elementary school.

    The teachers were kind and kind when I was in elementary school.

    Now lost can not be cherished.

    The confusion and ignorance of junior high school.

    The inferiority complex and shyness of junior high school.

    The unfamiliar environment and classmates in junior high school.

    The severity and reprimand of the teacher in junior high school.

    Cherish the present and don't forget to lose.

    Only when we lose can we know how to cherish it.

    Gone are the things that were lost.

    Now learn to cherish.

    Don't sigh when you lose it.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

  4. Anonymous users2024-02-02

    For students in the first year of junior high school, writing at this level is already rare and cherished.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

    Only when you lose can you know how to cherish.

    When you want to be separated from the past.

    The innocence, childlike playfulness in elementary school.

    Those wonderful friendships in elementary school.

    The intimacy between classmates in elementary school.

    The teacher smiled when he was in elementary school.

    Khan can't change anymore, don't desecrate my sacred childhood

  5. Anonymous users2024-02-01

    Don't talk in generalities, write about a moment in the past and bring someone into the world you want to describe.

  6. Anonymous users2024-01-31

    No need to change, I'm a Chinese teacher.

  7. Anonymous users2024-01-30

    An old man stopped breathing and stopped walking.

    A village, a home, an old man gone.

    He walked tightly. Didn't bring anything.

    The biggest regret. He will never be seen again by us who are alive. Didn't announce the official to the old man. Talk.

    He set out from the yellow earth. He set out from the sweat-drenched village.

    Farewell to the old folks in my hometown.

    It returned to the yellow earth.

    We will always miss your dear dad. You will live in our hearts forever!

  8. Anonymous users2024-01-29

    His time stop stopped at that moment, and the pace stopped moving.

    He quietly left, leaving his family, leaving his village, leaving the land he loved.

    He hurried away, away from us.

    Daddy, you give us all you have.

    You have lived on the loess all your life, and now you are returning to this familiar loess.

    Rest in peace! Father!

    You're not gone, you're alive in your heart, forever, ever!

  9. Anonymous users2024-01-28

    An elderly man stopped breathing and stopped his heartbeat.

    In the quiet village, the quiet house, he left, left without leaving a word, it seems that he has not talked yet, once, I want to be in, I dream...

    Never again, his staggering back, never again, he sweats on this land, he carries this land, has become one with it, let us always remember, my father.

  10. Anonymous users2024-01-27

    The old man stopped walking and stopped breathing. He walked so tight that he didn't have time to say hello or bring him something. We can no longer see his figure, let alone hear the old man's voice.

    He set out from the yellow earth. He set out from the sweat-drenched village. Farewell to the old folks in my hometown.

    It returned to the yellow earth. We will always miss your dear dad. You will live in our hearts forever!

  11. Anonymous users2024-01-26

    In memory of his mother: an old man stopped breathing and stopped walking. A village, a home, an old man gone.

    She walked tightly. Didn't bring anything. The biggest regret is that I didn't announce it to the old man.

    Talk. We living people will never see her again. She set out from the yellow earth.

    She set out from the sweat-dripping village. Farewell to the old folks in my hometown. It returned to the yellow earth.

    We will always miss your dear mother. You will live in our hearts forever!

  12. Anonymous users2024-01-25

    It's hard to hear, I won't change, I'm just a little gangster in life.

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