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Anonymous users2024-02-06It's still difficult to get to 6,5...
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Anonymous users2024-02-05You can get this one, dude is good!
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Anonymous users2024-02-04The first article: I think it's okay to write, I personally think it should be in between (just talk about a small composition), the key is that the summary of the first and last paragraphs is written well....However, there are still some problems, first, there are some problems with grammar and wording.
For example, 90+ drops to 70, dramatically is a bit much, calculate the ratio, see less than 20%, considerablly, at most significantly is enough, dramatically to really drop a lot before use, on the contrary, mobile's from 4 to 12, only use dramatic, not slight, triple growth is very large; Also, between and, not between to. The first sentence of the third paragraph should be split into two sentences, followed by a separate sentence, otherwise people will not be able to figure out whether you are talking about national & international or mobile. Second, the contrast intensity is not enough, now just write the corresponding number on the bar, it is better to add a little difference, such as 90+ to 70, written as 20+ billion drop, or 4 to 12, three times as 1995, or 200% increase.
This gives a more pronounced impression than just a list of numbers.
Part 2: I think it's pretty much the same, first, the first and last paragraphs are not particularly well written, Yemen 15-59 majoroty is OK, but it's best to mention the aging situation when you say italy, 15-59 is obviously declining though or majority. second, the tense should be noted, occupied; Third, it's the same problem, to make the contrast between the ups and downs more obvious, rather than just listing numbers, the last sentence of your last paragraph is good, doubled, you can use more in the body paragraph.
What this pie chart wants to express is actually that Yemen's population structure is a fusiform trend, while Italy is a pyramid-shaped trend, and it can even be brought into the fact that Yemen is a developing country and Italy is a developed country.
Personal humble opinion
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It's well written, it doesn't need to be perfected.
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