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22. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is invigorating to read, emotional, short and powerful, and attracts readers.
7. The touching portrayal of details at the beginning reveals the inner world of the characters in a good way, which is the success of this article.
7. The article begins with....For the end, it is concise and to the point, which makes people smile.
9. The content is vivid and concrete, which is a good work.
10. It has the effect of preemptively. So that the reader can have a sense of the characters as soon as they meet....impressions.
4. The beginning of the article is fascinating, the article is in the scene, and the scene is lyrical while painting, and the switch is felt, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
5a. 1. The beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, which has the effect of seizing people's voice. So that the reader can have a sense of the characters as soon as they meet....impressions.
4. The beginning of the article is fascinating.
17. Pay attention to the observation of specific things, although it is a small thing, but the author describes it vividly, and the indispensable point at the end can be done in detail.
23. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The language of the whole text is sonorous and powerful, full of imagination and rhythmic beauty. Handwriting.
2. It is really a clear pen, and the summary words and articles are coherent and coherent, forming a complete image.
7. The language of the article is fresh and lively. The full text is full of childlike innocence, and it feels very intimate to read, so it is scraped into such a ......I don't believe that your handwriting is not good, and it will always be scribb......led like thisWrite carefully and patiently, and you will write even better than I ......Five. General comments.
1. The article is messy but not messy, and it is deeply moving.
4. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
5. At the end, the emotions are expressed in a concentrated manner, which not only corresponds to the beginning but also summarizes the whole text. Between the lines, full of childhood childlike fun, laughter and laughter are endless, which makes people want to read, love to read, this composition is novel and wonderful.
28. The tone of the whole article is light-hearted, humorous, abundant, and touching
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Whether the sentence is smooth, whether the point of view expressed is clear, whether the expression is clear, whether the plot is in line with the topic, whether the central idea is highlighted, these points can be criticized.
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Good. It's amazing.
There is progress. I'd like to check it out after reading it.
Express your true thoughts directly, encourage and tactfully ask questions in students' essays.
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1.Overall, one sentence evaluation + essay content (less generalization) 2Analyze the writing style + effect of the composition.
3.Evaluation Writing (Paper) Format Paragraph (Overall Appearance) 4Give the author some encouragement, such as:
I hope you keep up the good work.
I wish you a high season of sesame blossoming.
I hope you keep writing. And so on....
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How to write a comment on a batch of essays is introduced as follows:
01. The focus is highlighted, the center is clear, and the intention is clear. The content is well detailed, the priorities are clear, and the plot is twists and turns, which can attract the attention of readers. The language is basically fluent, with occasional difficulties. The ending is intriguing.
02. Although the events in life with a certain narrative value were selected, due to the lack of thorough analysis and deep excavation, the hidden truth of the event was not deeply reflected. However, the article has a clear point of view, and the position of likes and dislikes is clear, which makes it clear to people at a glance.
03. Through rich language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is brought out. Appropriate use of contrast, comparison and other techniques, through the disparity and difference between things, to strongly support the center of the article. The imagination of the article is reasonable, and the narration is natural and vivid.
04. The center is not clear enough, and the intention is not clear enough. However, the content of the article wastes no time in using the technique of comparison to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only enhances the tone of the language, but also leaves a very deep impression on the reader.
05. This essay is novel in material, wonderful in conception, and vivid in the answers of the Yuxun group. Between the lines, it reveals a fresh breath of life and children's interest. A series of verbs that express the actions of the characters in the text are used accurately and well.
06. The text is like its person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as yours. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term honing. I hope that in the future learning process, you will feel and appreciate life with your heart, and write more touching and good articles.
07. This is a pleasant article. First of all, the thoughts and feelings are very strong, of course, from the deep and fresh ideas of your article. The so-called "mountaineering is full of love in the mountains, and watching the sea is overflowing in the sea", you have touched others with your true feelings, which is the greatest success of your composition.
08. The structure of the article is reasonable, the language is sonorous and powerful, and the most important thing is that the theme of the article is clear, although the rhetoric is not gorgeous but simple and touching, and the beginning and end or Zen echo have the finishing touch.
09. The beginning of the article is engaging and attracts readers. The plot is closely interlocked, rarely disjointed, the language is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and it makes people feel more intimate to read. This is an unpretentious but sincere article that is impressive.
10. Your article is like a slow and flowing stream, delicate and smooth. The writing is beautiful, the feelings are sincere and delicate, and he has a personal style. May you continue to pick up the waves in life on the road of writing, and make your style more perfect!
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1. The detailed arrangement is improper, and the priority is not clear enough.
2. Be detailed and appropriate, with clear priorities and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the materials seem to be tailor-made for the theme.
3. Use the environment to highlight the emotions of the characters, the scenes are blended, the feelings are in the scene, and the scene is present with the scene.
4. Imagination is wonderful, which not only comes from life, does not lose the truth of life, but also is higher than life, broadens the reader's horizons, and is full of artistic charm.
5. The description of the demeanor is vivid and expressive, with a few words, outlining the character's bright and sharp character characteristics at a glance, and the character's speech and demeanor have a distinct and unique personality.
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1. The beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the mood of the characters is set off through the description of the environment, which is very artistic.
2. Be concise and to the point. 3. The beginning of the article is novel and has the effect of preemptively. So that the reader can have an impression of the characters as soon as they meet.
4. The beginning of the article is fascinating, attracting readers to read the old blocker, combining points and faces, making the article vivid and concrete, and the details are appropriate.
5. The language of the article is vivid and rich, and the readability is strong. 6. The beginning is extraordinary and attracts readers.
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