How to write comments on students essays

1. This article focuses on ......The materials organized by this center are accurate, distinct, vivid, and extremely rich and specific in content, and they are a successful work.

2. This article may not be particularly attractive in terms of storyline, but it is still a successful work, firstly, it better portrays the image of the characters, and secondly, the language is vivid and rich, and the breath of life is strong, which has a good effect of expression and meaning.

3. This article is a good reflection of ......Feature, profound themes complement novel ideas.

4. The idea of the work is ingenious, and the writing is concise and smooth. The imagination is bold and creative, and the article reads new and strange and fascinating.

5. The theme is condensed, concentrated, and the discussion is profound, powerful and shocking.

6. The article has a strong sense of authenticity, three-dimensionality, readability and interest. With keen social insight, fairy tales reflect the dark side of reality, and vivid language, depicting a picture of greedy beings, which can be called a three-point wood.

7. The article is concise and clear, and the language is plain and simple.

8. The full-text narrative is concentrated, not branching or branching, the language is simple and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

9. The language of the whole text is simple and the structure is natural. The article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.

11. Describe things in a clear manner, be able to use verbs correctly, and use metaphors appropriately and vividly. Contribute ideas and read them, and you can get an education from them.

12. This article uses specific examples, vivid and beautiful language, and novel and unique writing to express the heartfelt praise for a beautiful soul.

13. By enriching the language and actions of the characters, the ideological quality of the characters is brought out. The imagination of the article is reasonable, the narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent.

14. The language of the whole text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and twisty, as if bringing the reader into a happy paradise, which makes people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

Here's how to mark your essay and write a comment:

1. Correct the essay.

See if the center of the article is clear and focused; Look at the selection of materials, whether it is centered on the center, whether it conforms to the reality of life, and whether it is typical; Look at the structure of the article, whether the hierarchical paragraphs are clear, whether the transitions are natural, and whether the beginning and end are appropriate; Look at the way of expression, such as whether the narrative is clear and clear, whether the description is delicate and vivid, and whether the details are appropriate; See whether the language is concise, vivid, vivid, fluent, and profound.

2. Comments: 1. Make full use of the combination of dynamic and static writing, supplemented by metaphors, personifications and other techniques, through vivid and vivid language descriptions, so that readers feel as if they are in a dream. The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

2. The little author captures the unique scenery of spring, can accurately and appropriately use the rhetorical tricks of metaphor to write beauty, and at the same time praises the hard-working gardeners-teachers, so that the theme of the article is sublimated.

3. The little author inspects carefully, the appearance is vivid and detailed, and the vivid metaphor personification makes people feel immersed in the scene when they read, and also makes the author's preference for mental emotions more natural and full.

4. Pay attention to specific things and imagine appropriately, which is the success of this. The article blends into the scene, is lyrical while painting the scene, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid.

5. The article echoes from beginning to end, the sentences are concise, to the point, and the theme is pointed out. The article illustrates the beauty of the scenery through the description of the four seasons, and it corresponds to the beginning. It would be nice to pay attention to the hierarchy of paragraphs.