How Mo Zishan reversed Tang poetry 5

A preface poem refers to a new poem formed by changing the sentence order of a ready-made poetic work to give it a new meaning. The effort of changing the preface lies in ingenuity and novelty.

Wang Changling of the Tang Dynasty has a famous article "Furong House Sends Xin Gradually". Shiyun:

The cold rain and the river entered Wu at night, and Pingming sent the guests to Chushan Lonely.

Luoyang relatives and friends asked each other, and a piece of ice was in the jade pot.

In the Second Zhifeng War, due to Feng Yuxiang's defection, Wu Peifu fled south from Tanggu. At that time, someone changed the preface of Wang Changling's poem to "see him off" and ridiculed his embarrassment

A piece of ice heart is in the jade pot, and Pingming sends off Chu Shangu.

Luoyang relatives and friends asked each other, and the cold rain and the river entered Wu at night.

The four lines of the original poem have not changed a single word, only the positions of the first and fourth lines have been reversed, however, the poetic meaning has changed greatly. "The cold rain and the river enter Wu at night", Wang Changling used it as the first sentence, talking about departure; In response to Wu Peifu's experience, it was adjusted to the last sentence, which said.

Run away. "A piece of ice heart in the jade pot", used at the end of the poem, expressed.

The sentiment has not changed, but the ice heart is still the same; Used at the beginning of the poem, it is connected with the "escape" of the last sentence "entering Wu at night", which becomes irony and humor.

It is said that Mo Zishan, a genius of the Southern Song Dynasty, climbed the mountain in one day, saw the pleasant scenery, the temple was quiet, and he couldn't help but blurt out a song of the Tang Dynasty Li She's seven uniques:

Drunk all day long, I suddenly heard that spring was strong and mountaineering.

Because I saw the words of the monks in the bamboo courtyard, I had to live for half a day.

After the poem, the monk met and invited him to talk. However, during the conversation, he kept asking him for money, and it was unbearable, so Mo Zishan grabbed a pen and waved it on the wall

I have to float for half a day, and suddenly I heard that spring is strong mountaineering.

Because I saw the words of the monks in the bamboo courtyard, I was drunk and dreamed all day long.

The beginning and the end are interchanged, and the poetic mutation is mutated. The original poem said that he was in a bad mood, "drowsy and drunk in a dream", and after "meeting the monk's words", his mood turned cloudy and clear, and he became idle. The new preface poem says that the mood was originally leisurely, but because of the "monk's words", the mood was "drowsy and drunken dreams".

If you want to rewrite a better poem, change some of the more important words of the ancient poem into better words, modify them according to your own style of revising, and supplement them with some appropriate words!

If you spoil ancient poems when you enter the house, don't do it!

Rewrite ancient poems, find a poem that you feel particularly resonant, so that it will be better to rewrite, the important thing is your own feelings and expressions... With a little modification, it becomes a poem that fits your own experiences and feelings... Feeling is the most important, hehe...

Seven words shortened to five words can be regarded as a rewrite.

It depends on your ability, whether the ancient poem is renovated, or the ancient poem is changed to a close poem.

Rewrite? If it's used, it's all up to personal ability.,If it's a spoof, don't spoil the ancient poems.。

Change what you think is smooth.

Add characters, time, etc., add specific adjectives before nouns, and make up some related stories to describe the process in more detail.

Goose goose goose, song to the sky. The white hair floats in the green water, and the red anthurium plucks the clear waves.

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There is no charge, but there is no good location! It's all a fixed stall!

Metro Line 1 Metro Line 2 Road 198 West Ring Kilometer Tiexi District Walk about 1 km to Yunfeng North Street Station.

Take Metro Line 1, after 4 stops, arrive at Qingnian Street StationTake Metro Line 2, after 8 stops, arrive at Baitahe Road Station, walk about 660 meters, and arrive at Baitahe Road Station, Shenben Street.

Take No. 198 West Ring Road, after 6 stops, arrive at Shenben Street Quanyun 5th Road Station and walk about a kilometer to Mozishan Sports Park.

Take Metro Line 2, get off at Baitahe Station, exit the subway and take Tram Line 2, and get off at Qianjinhui Garden Hotel. The barbecue area is free.

Actually, there's nothing to be done, it's all man-made landscapes, and it's a place where you can barbecue.

I took a few buses to Mozi Park on Baogong Street in Tiexi District.

Bus line: 394 tram line 1, the whole journey is about 1 kilometer, walk about 1 kilometer from Hunnan New District, arrive at Shenying Road Xinxiu Street Station 2, take 394 Road, after 3 stops, arrive at Baitabao Station (you can also take 394 Yangcheng and 333 Road).

3. Walk about 230 meters to Guangming School Station.

4. Take tram line 1, after 6 stops, arrive at Greentown Quanyun Village Station 5, walk about a kilometer to Mozishan Sports Park.

My home is located in Nanyanghu Street, Hong District, how to go to Mozishan Park?

Is there a bus to Mozishan Sports Park?

How to take a bus from Liaoshen 2nd Street, Dadong District, Shenyang City.

Is there a bus from Tiexi Tianhua Hospital to Mozishan Park.