How to make the composition language more delicate, how to make the composition language beautiful

The book critic Mr. Xiao Qian once said: "Words are naturally subtle things. "The same content, the same idea, some people will make the reader feel pale and powerless, and some will make people feel infinitely charming.

In writing, add appropriate modifiers to the things described to make the content of the expression more three-dimensional, such as the following two sentences:

The moon shines on the steppe. ­

The bright moon gently shone on the vast grasslands of his hometown. The first sentence makes people feel very straightforward, and the first sentence is modified with "bright", "gently", and "vast hometown", which makes it more vivid, and the whole sentence makes people feel full of affection, and the artistic conception comes out. ­

Generally speaking, the following two methods can be used to train students to skillfully use modified language: 1. Give full play to association and imagination, and use various descriptive and anthropomorphic language to modify the content of the expression, so as to make the expression more emotional and make the article wonderful. ­

I stood in front of my grandfather's coffin, tears crawling all over my face. ­

1. Definition: What is the picture sense of language?

Use words to portray a picture, reproduce a scene, so that "there is a picture in the text", so that the reader is as if he is in the scene, as if he sees his person, as if he sees his things, and the brain naturally produces a picture.

2. Give examples.

Example 1: In the afterglow of the sunset, with grass and breeze, the white rabbit of the doorman lies in the grass and looks at the sky. "Embracing the Present".

Think: How to write a picture that will have a stronger sense of image?

Language that enhances the sense of the picture: In the afterglow of the setting sun, the green grass and the breeze sway, the doorman's round white rabbit obediently lies in the grass, staring at the magnificent sky painted with oil paint. (Shaanxi Candidates' "Embrace the Present").

Technique: Ways to enhance the sense of the picture: use verbs, adjectives, modifiers, overlapping words, etc.

Example 2: In the dead of night, I was reading a language book. At this time, my mother pushed the door in with a glass of milk.

Mom said, "Nizi, I'm going to take the high school entrance exam tomorrow, don't read tonight, drink milk, and go to bed early!" ”

I said, "I don't want to drink it, I want to watch it a little longer".

Mom said, "Tomorrow for the exam, you better go to bed early,"

After listening to my mother's words, I got angry and said, "Don't say it! I can't even take it! ”

Ningbo "Mother's Love Like Air".

Think: The first way to add modifiers to the first paragraph to make the picture stronger?

The dialogue in the fragment is boring, what should we do?

Language that enhances the sense of the picture:

In the dead of night, I was still flusteredly flipping through the language books, but I couldn't read them at all. At this time, the mother gently pushed the door in, holding a glass of hot milk in her hand.

Nizi, I'm going to take the high school entrance exam tomorrow, so don't read tonight, drink milk, and go to bed early! Mom said with a smile of concern.

Although I knew my mother's intentions, my irritability turned me into a hedgehog, and my mother became the object of venting.

I don't want to drink, I don't even have time to read, do I still have time to drink milk? "I don't lift my head, and my heart is as frizzy as grass.

Tomorrow's exam, you better go to bed early, otherwise you will be out of energy tomorrow. There was a hint of anxiety in Mom's tone.

Don't bother me! I can't even read the book! I yelled at my mother.

First, the content is truth-seeking.

To avoid similarities, you must choose real materials, write about your own things, and write about the world in your own eyes. The material that is "filtered" with your own unique vision has a uniqueness, and of course it will not "collide" with others. Of course, on the basis of "truth," we must be healthy and positive, and there must be no sick and negative ideological content, still less can we have ideological viewpoints that violate law and discipline and decadent and degenerate emotional tendencies.

Second, the form of innovation.

"New" here mainly refers to novelty and uniqueness. First of all, you can make a fuss on the topic. Come up with an extraordinary topic and use a novel title to attract the reader's attention. Secondly, you can work on the structure. Again, you can also make some stylistic articles.

3. Seek differences in themes.

If the structure is compared to the skeleton of the article, and the material is flesh and blood, then the theme is the soul of the article, which is of the utmost importance.

Fourth, the text seeks beauty.

The pen must be cautious, not arbitrary. After writing, generally do not delete large paragraphs (unless there are fatal mistakes, such as digressions), and try to remedy some minor problems in the following to achieve overall beauty. Although it is a habit to develop on a regular basis, it is also necessary to train consciously.