Modify the most common sentences, and what are the types of sentences

Summing up the historical lessons and lessons of our party over the past 70 years and more, we can draw an important conclusion, that is, the reason why our party has won the support of the people is that our party has always represented the requirements for the development of China's advanced productive forces, the direction of progress of China's advanced culture, and the fundamental interests of the broadest masses of the Chinese people in all periods of revolution, construction, and reform, and has realized the fundamental interests of the state and the people through formulating correct lines, principles, and policies.

Or. Summing up the historical lessons and lessons of our party over the past 70 years and more, we can draw an important conclusion, that is, the reason why our party has won the support of the people is that our party has always represented the requirements for the development of China's advanced productive forces, the direction of progress of China's advanced culture, and the fundamental interests of the broadest masses of the Chinese people in all periods of revolution, construction, and reform.

Reasons: First, the summary should have an object, which is generally to summarize what experience or lesson.

Second, in the case of talking about the result first, and then explaining the reason, it is generally the reason for what is the reason, and what is the reason for what sentence.

Third, the "pass" sentence is a means, and what is to be expressed is what goal is achieved.

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"Struggling" should be added at the end

The final "struggle" was changed to "struggle".

Answer. 1.Good investment environment, excellent service quality, and high quality of public servants are all important guarantees for the healthy development of the regional economy.

2.The candidates who are responsible for the Manchester City football team's defense of Manchester United's "terror left" are not good, Duncan is not good, Belmadi is not good, Wright Phillips is not good, only Sun Jihai is good.

3.He is conscientious and sincere, and in his life and work, he has indeed used his actions to shape the cohesive personality strength, moving and guiding the people around him.

4.In 2003, the U.S. adjusted its visa policy to require that student visa applications be made within 3 months to 2 weeks before the start of the school of application.

5."2006 China Shenyang World Horticultural Exposition" is the largest area of the previous World Horticultural Exposition, the most abundant activities, the most wonderful performing arts.

1. The quality of the environment, the quality of service, and the quality of public servants are all important guarantees for the healthy development of the regional economy.

2 Manchester City football team has to defend against Manchester United's "terror left", Duncan can't, Belmady can't, Wright Phillips can't, only Sun Ji can't.

3.He is conscientious and sincere, and in his life and work, his actions have shaped a huge character strength, touching and guiding the people around him.

4.In 2003, the U.S. adjusted its visa policy to require students to apply for a student visa within 3 months to 2 weeks before the start of the school they are applying for.

52006 China Shenyang World Horticultural Exposition "China Horticultural Exposition covers the largest area, the most abundant activities, the most wonderful performing arts of the event.

1. It should be a good investment environment, excellent service quality, and high-quality public servants are important guarantees for the healthy development of the economy, so the last sentence of this sentence can be changed to: are important factors affecting the healthy development of the regional economy.

2. It should be changed to: Manchester City's football team has to defend against Manchester United's "terror left" ,......3. It should be changed to: It is true that he has embodied the great strength of personality with his own actions,......4. If the correspondence is incorrect, the word "proceed" should be removed and replaced with:

The application time for a student visa is 3 months to 2 weeks before the start of the school application.

5. It should be changed to:"2006 China Shenyang World Horticultural Exposition" is the largest area, the most abundant activities, the most wonderful performance in the previous World Horticultural Expositions.

1. Improper subject-verb collocation:

For example, his revolutionary spirit always comes to mind. （"Spirit"with"Emerge"It cannot form a subject-verb relationship, but can be used"Spirit"Instead"image"）

2. Improper collocation of moving guests:

Example: Commemorating the arrival of the Three Leading Days. （"Memorial"It can only be"Thirty-eight verses"and cannot be"Coming"）

3. Improper collocation of modifiers and central words:

For example, we carefully studied the suggestions of the employees and humbly solicited the opinions of the experts. （"Serious"It cannot be retouched"Research", which can be changed to"Seriously"、"Be cautious"etc.).

4. Improper matching of the host and guest:

For example, we firmly believe that one day, China's agriculture and agriculture will become a developed country. (It should be.)"countries"Instead"behavior).

5. Improper collocation of related words:

Example: Since you're here, it's time for me to go. （"Since"with"Also"It cannot be used together, it should be"Also"Instead"Just"）

1) Improper word order.

Common situations of improper word order are:

1. The position of the definite and the central language is reversed

For example, China's cotton production has been unable to be self-sufficient for a long time. （"Production of cotton"It should be"production of cotton"）

2. Put the real language in the position of the adverbial:

For example, the vast number of young people have shown great enthusiasm for reform. (Will.)"Incomparable"to"Passionate"ex).

3. Put the adverbial in the position of the definite:

For example, the full role of the vast number of young people should be brought into play. (Will.)"Adequately"Tune to"Play"and delete one"of"）。

4. Improper word order of multi-layer definite sentences:

Example: Exhibits artifacts that were excavated thousands of years ago. (It should be.)"Thousands of years ago"Tune to"Cultural relics"Before and after"of"）

5. Improper word order of multi-layer adverbials.

For example, we are no longer a country that is arbitrarily bullied by foreign powers. (It should be.)"Optional"Tune to"Hazing"before).

6. Improper placement of related words:

For example, if he can't be realistic, his career will suffer. （"him"should be moved to"If"behind).

7. The subject and the object are reversed:

For example, Ostrovsky's "How Steel is Made" is no stranger to Chinese youth. (It should be changed to: Chinese youth to Ostrovsky.) ）

8. Improper placement of clauses:

For example, they are exploring, they are judging, they are seeking, they are thinking. (It should be changed to: They are thinking, they are judging, they are exploring, they are searching.) ）

Our school has carried out the activity of "learning from Lei Feng and striving to be a good teenager".

The burden on his shoulders was heavy.

I am interested in English.

As long as we work hard, we will be able to win.

We must inherit the revolutionary cause of the older generation.

I carefully corrected the incorrect typos in my essay. Instead, I carefully corrected the incorrect words in the composition.

Colorful red balloons floated in the sky, changed to red balloons floating in the sky.

Pull Tu KTV, I asked, the old K head gathers the specifics, refuses Kenlan85, masturbation, ah, masturbation.

Xiao Ming seemed to have broken the glass.

There are several ways to modify the sentence:

1. Improper use of words.

2. Defective ingredients.

3. Improper collocation of words.

4. The order is reversed.

5. Inconsistencies.

6. Repetitive verbosity.

7. Illogical.

8. Related words.

Indiscriminate. 9. Unclear concept. Wait a minute.

1 The deaths of these archaeologists are reminiscent of the curses of the mysterious pharaohs, but scientists do not believe in any curses.

2 At that time, Xu Feng was hospitalized, and when he heard that there was danger, he ignored the doctor's obstruction, walked out of the hospital with his illness and devoted himself to flood relief work.

3 The development of the space shuttle took six years.

4. If you go to the supermarket to shop, and the consumption amount exceeds 50 yuan per person, there will be gifts.

First sentence: Scientists don't believe it has anything to do with the curse.

The second sentence: I heard that the flood control work was pleased. Putting it into the workThe third sentence: It takes up to six years.

Sentence 4: Those who spend more than 50 yuan each time.

Five. Modify the sick sentence.

1.Answer It took me three full days to get the model airplane ready.

It took me about three days to get the model airplane ready.

2.Answer: The exam is over and I feel much more relaxed.

The exam is over and I feel much more relaxed.

3.Answer: The author of this fairy tale is Hans Christian Andersen.

This fairy tale was written by Hans Christian Andersen.

1. It took me three full days to make the model of the airplane and remove the left and right.

2. Replace lightness with ease.

3. It's Hans Christian Andersen, remove the "written" or remove the "author".

Left and right and whole contradiction, delete one of them.

Light use to describe luggage, not to describe the mood, changed to relaxed.

1.I remove the left and right.

2.I make it lightweight.

3.Remove what is written.

The first one is removed left and right.

The second one changes lightness to lightness.

The third one was removed from what was written.

1.It took me three full days to get the model airplane ready.

2.The exam is over and I feel much more relaxed.

3.The author of this fairy tale is Hans Christian Andersen.

Causes of error: 1. Improper use of words (improper collocation of words).

2. The word order is reversed (the word association is wrong).

1. Dealing with people is a new reconstruction of civic morality, and every citizen should serve the people in different ways.

Reform: Serving the people is the focus of civic moral construction, and every citizen should serve the people through different ways.

2 Mr. Li Songshou, who was still a student at the time, occasionally played an erhu song composed by Ah Ping, which led to an eternal story about Ah Ping and "Erquan Reflecting the Moon".

Change: Mr. Li Songshou was still a student at the time, because he played the erhu song "Erquan Reflecting the Moon" composed by Ah Bing, which (so) triggered an eternal story about Ah Bing and "Erquan Reflecting the Moon".

1 Changed to: Serving the people is the focus of civic moral construction.2 "Occasionally" is changed to "accidental".

Trigger" is changed to "elicit out".

Mr. Li Songshou, who was still a student at the time, accidentally played an erhu song composed by Ah Bing, which led to an eternal story about Ah Bing and "Erquan Reflecting the Moon". ——The original article is from "A Bing in 1950".

PS: Please refer to the 8th grade Chinese textbook.

1 Dealing with others is the reconstruction of civic morality, and every citizen should serve the people in different ways.

2 When Mr. Lai Song Shou was a student at the time, he occasionally played an erhu piece composed by Ah Ping, which led to an eternal tale about Ah Ping and "The Moon in the Two Springs".

1.There is no object after the different forms. (Re-should be the center of gravity, right?) I hope there are no typos in this kind of question, ha) 2Do you think it's right to put it there occasionally?

This kind of question will be clear to the students, so why bother to know it? It's so sad.

Sick sentence 1 The word is inappropriate, and it should be changed to admiration and form to method.

Sick sentence 2 Improper use of related words, occasionally adding the word cause before the word to make the whole sentence have a causal relationship.

In the first question, "re-centered" should be "center of gravity".

The second question should be changed to occasional to accidental, and the trigger should be changed to "edification".

First, change the phrase "behave in the world" to "be a good person and do good deeds".

Second, replace the word "thus" with the word "thus".

1. The construction of people and things is the focus of the construction of civic morality.

2. Occasionally change to accidental, trigger, change to achievement.