Modify the following paragraphs 1 punctuation, 1 typo, 3 sentences .

1.Punctuation: Speaking loudly, (not juxtaposed words, but phrases, so commas should be used) to do things boldly.

2.Typo: "Muddy Days" should be mixed days.

3.(1) Because he was born in Yixing, Jiangsu, Qian Weiping is burly, bold and straightforward, and his voice is big and the related word is wrong, it should be "although ......But ......"Because it is shown below that southerners should not be like the northerners, burly and so on.

2) The people around him said that he was under the hands of Lao Qian" The people around him said that he was under ......(Because the pronoun refers to the previously mentioned, and the original text has not mentioned it earlier, it is appropriate to reverse the order).

3) Because he likes to find faults, the people around Lao Qian say that he can't work under him.

Qian Weiping was born in Yixing, Jiangsu, with a burly figure, a bold and straightforward personality, a loud voice, and a bold personality. People who saw him for the first time thought he was a northern man. People around him say that working under Lao Qian can't make a bad life, because he likes to keep improving.

Qian Weiping, who was born in Yixing, Jiangsu, because of his burly figure, bold personality, straightforwardness, loud voice and bold work, people who saw him for the first time thought he was a northern man. People close to him said that he couldn't make a living working under Lao Qian's hands, because he liked to find faults.

This sentence is a good sentence, so you should take it out and read it often

On Children's Day, my parents took me to Taihu Lake. Colorful flowers are blooming along the lake, but unfortunately some tourists are throwing confetti around the scenic area. Seeing this, I thought, "If everyone is hygienic and doesn't litter, our city will become more and more beautiful." ”

2 Wrong, there is less behind the book, it can be to handle the book borrowing.

4 Wrong, **, prose is a literary work.

"Many, prose and literary works" is repeated and replaced by "**, prose and other literary works".

In our newly built spacious and bright library, students lined up to get their books. The librarian said: "Please don't be in a hurry, don't be crowded, In addition to the original books, our school has recently purchased a lot of **, prose and literary works, which can meet the reading needs of students."

1. Students lined up in a long line to apply for library cards.

2,, In addition to the original books, our school has recently purchased many **, essays and other literary works to meet the reading needs of students. ”

2. Students lined up in a long line to go through the book borrowing procedures;

4. In addition to the original books in the school.

2 Waiting is changed to waiting for a library card.

Literary works include the preceding ones.