How many kinds of questions are there about sick sentences? How to judge? How to modify?

Seven common types of sentences: improper word use, improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete components, repetitive and wordy, unclear meaning, and illogical.

1. Improper use of words.

For example: "He donated the money he had saved to the disaster area. "Thrifty" is an adjective, and it should not be changed to the verb "to save" instead of the verb "to save".

2. Improper word order.

3. Improper matching.

For example, Wang Xiaohu made up his mind that he must cultivate a good habit of being serious and careful. The words "cultivate" and "good habits" in the sentence are not properly matched and should be replaced with "cultivate." ”

Four: the ingredient is incomplete.

For example, I studied hard in class and finally got good grades. This sentence is missing a subject. For example, you can add a "he".

5. Repetition of verbosity.

For example, he raised his right hand, took the hat off his head with his hand, took it in his hand, and blew the dust on it. Among them, "with hands from the head" and "with hands" there is no need to explain at all.

Sixth, the meaning is unclear.

For example, it was his father who performed the surgery. The meaning of the word "open" here is unclear. Was his father a doctor who operated on the surgery, or a patient who was operated on? Can't be sure.

7. Illogical (self-contradictory).

For example, I conclude that he will probably go to university. "Assert" and "probably" create a logical conflict here. There is a sense of paradox.

Tips for modifying the five words of the sick sentence:

Enhancement (incomplete composition).

Delete (redundant).

Change (inappropriate wording).

Simplified (the modification should be brief).

Tone (not matched, not coordinated).

Revision is not reconstruction, and it is important not to change the original meaning of the sentence. In particular, it should be noted that if the word order can be adjusted, it will not be added or deleted, and if it can be solved in one place, it should never be changed in two places, and the sentence should be concise and efficient.

Improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete ingredients, unclear meaning, chaotic structure, and discordant logic.

Original sentence: Little by little, the east calls Li Er's white sky, dyed with a slight red halo, floating with red, purple, red and purple clouds.

Abbreviation: The sky is dyed red, and colorful clouds are floating.

The abbreviated sentence is to shorten the long sentence of "thick branches and leaves" to a short sentence that only leaves the "trunk" and the elder brother, and the main meaning of the original sentence cannot be changed, that is, to remove the branches and reduce the leaves.

There are three steps to modify a sentence:

The first step is to read the sentence and figure out what it is trying to mean.

Only by reading the meaning of the sentence can we find its faults and correct it according to the meaning of the original sentence. Many sick sentences can be modified as long as they understand what they are trying to convey.

For example: "At the meeting, they expressed their opinions. After reading the sentence, think about it:

Who spoke at the conference? There is no subject in the sentence "Dust Stove", the subject "classmates" or "everyone" should be added, so that the meaning of the sentence is clearly expressed and the sentence is correct.

The second step is to find out what the meaning of the sentence is to express, and then go back to the original sentence to find out what is wrong with the meaning of the sentence.

For example: "Xiao Ming has improved the shortcomings of loving to do small actions in class." What this sentence wants to say is, "Xiao Ming corrected the shortcomings of loving to do small actions in class."

The word "improvement" and "shortcoming" in the original sentence cannot be matched, and "shortcoming" can only be said to be "corrected", and the meaning of this sentence is clear if "improvement" is replaced by "correction".

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