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Annotations] 1Title: "Ice Cream Assassin" is a hint at the Ice Cream Assassin in the hot summer, but also has a hint of revealing the truth. This word cleverly creates suspense and makes the reader curious and impulsive to read.

2.Beginning: The author introduces a real incident to describe the happiness and pain that ice cream brings to people in summer, which paves the way for the "Ice Cream Assassin" in the following article.

3.The second paragraph: begins to explain the meaning of Ice Cream Assassin, and further deepens the impression of Ice Cream Assassin in the reader's mind by portraying its mysterious, cunning, and harmful image.

4.The third paragraph: Exposing the bitterness behind the Ice Cream Assassin allows readers to have a deeper understanding of this phenomenon and begin to reflect on their own consumption concepts. At the same time, it also paves the way for the "sweet burden" below.

5.Conclusion: Summarize the full text and once again emphasize the bitterness behind the Ice Cream Assassin. At the same time, it also expresses the author's views and suggestions on this phenomenon, leaving a deep impression on readers.

Reviews] 1Theme: The theme of this article is the problem of consumption concept and food health, and through the phenomenon of ice cream assassin, readers are guided to think deeply about their own consumption concept and food health issues.

3.Content: The article is informative and provides an in-depth analysis of Ice Cream Assassin from multiple perspectives.

It not only introduces the meaning and harm of Ice Cream Assassin, but also analyzes the business environment and consumption concept behind it. At the same time, suggestions and solutions are also put forward, which have a positive enlightenment effect on improving consumption concepts and promoting food health.

4.Structure: The article is well-structured and hierarchical. From introduction to analysis to summary, readers are guided step by step to understand the phenomenon of Ice Cream Assassin. At the same time, targeted annotations and comments are made in each paragraph, making the article easier to understand and remember.

5.Value: This paper has high social value and educational significance.

Through the phenomenon of Ice Cream Assassin, readers are made aware of the importance of consumption concepts and food health. At the same time, it also reminds people to consume rationally and not to be confused by the marketing methods of merchants. It has a certain enlightening effect on improving the concept of modern consumption and promoting the healthy development of society.

Overall, the article "Yilin" is a good social news article, which is not only interesting, but also in-depth and thought-provoking. Through the phenomenon of ice cream assassins, readers are guided to think deeply about their own consumption concepts and food health issues. At the same time, it also reminds people to consume rationally and not be confused by the marketing methods of merchants.

1 Perhaps the mature sunflower seeds are too heavy, and their flower plates, that is, their brains, are filled with too many things, and they do not want to follow them blindly? But they seem to be still young, and the fresh and lively petals are vibrating one by one, and they are looking forward to it easily, so thriving and happy. When they turn their backs to the sun, they still hold their heads up proudly, without the slightest flattering humility.

Zhang Kangkang's "Sunflowers in the Tianshan Mountains".

Appreciation: Using anthropomorphic rhetorical techniques, depicting the maverick form of sunflowers, endowing sunflowers with human character and spirit, and showing their attitude of daring to insist on themselves very vividly.

Love hidden in the pace.

At a very young age, Ruhl noticed that his father walked differently, always one foot high and one foot low, and his legs did not seem to be the same length. But his father remained a source of pride and role model for Ruhl. He was a technician with a lot of scientific and technological inventions.

When Ruhr was in secondary school, physical education was taught at the school. There are a lot of projects that the Ruhr can't do well. Once, when walking on the balance beam, the other students walked over easily, but Ruhr never did, falling off the balance beam several times in a row.

Ruhl was devastated. When his father found out, he said to him: "I'm sorry, it's all Dad's fault, it's family inheritance, and your grandfather and dad are born with defects in balance." ”

Familial inheritance? Ruhl looked at his father in amazement. "Yes, I don't believe you. With that, the father moved a bench to Ruhl, and then stood on it and began to walk, only to fall down after taking two steps.

That's a lot wider than the balance beam in our school! Ruhl felt that he was better than his father. "Yes, you have improved a lot compared to Grandpa and Dad. I'll go to school tomorrow and explain to the PE teacher. ”

The next day, as Ruhr passed by the playground, he overheard the PE teacher talking to another teacher: "Ruhl was a child with cerebral palsy when he was a child. "Don't be foolish, people with cerebral palsy are synonymous with mental retardation. "It was his father who told me ...... himself”

Children with cerebral palsy? Mental retardation? Ruhl couldn't believe it, and he frantically ran home to ask his father for confirmation.

Dad wanted to hide all this, but now it seems that there is no need. The father said calmly, "Yes, you did have cerebral palsy when you were a child, but it was only mild, much better than when you were a child." ”

Is it hereditary again? Don't try to lie to me anymore. Ruhl yelled loudly.

It's true, haven't you noticed that Dad always walks with one foot high and one foot low? This is a typical sequelae of severe cerebral palsy that has been with me for so many years. ”

It was only at this point that the doubts that had been building up in Ruhl's mind for years were answered.

But son, you have to remember that the sequelae of this disease are not terrible. You see, Dad, is never worse than anyone else at work and in life. ”

After that, Ruhl no longer felt inferior to himself because he was a child with cerebral palsy, and he was convinced that he would become a very good person, just like his father. With this belief in his mind, Ruhl went to university with honors and found a very good job after graduation.

When Ruhl was 32 years old, his father died suddenly of a cerebral hemorrhage. According to the custom of his hometown, before the cremation, Ruhl, as a son, had to help his father change his clothes and shoes one last time. When Ruhl took off his father's leather shoes, which he had worn for almost half of his life, he was surprised to find:

The inner sole of the two shoes is not the same height, and the tall shoe has a layer of inner height made of thick insole.

Ruhl's tears welled up, and he couldn't believe that his father had been walking high and low for him for more than 20 years. Father's love is hidden in his high and low steps. Beg.

The bamboo basket may not be empty.

The teacher took the students on a spring outing to the river. They were divided into four groups and asked to use bamboo baskets to fetch water from the river to a bucket ten meters from the shore in ten minutes.

Ten minutes later, the competition ended, and the teachers came to the conclusion that the students in the first group worked hard to scoop water, so the baskets were washed exceptionally clean, and they won the purification award! Just like reading a book, although there are some things that you don't understand at first, it seems to be in vain, but in fact, if you read too much, people's minds and hearts will be purified unconsciously!

The second group of students ran very fast, and every time they carefully shook the water dripping on the basket as much as possible like a bucket, and the water accumulated three centimeters, and won the diligence award! Just like struggle, although it may seem hopeless at times, as long as you work hard, there will always be gains.

The students in the third group caught a drink bottle and some floating objects while fetching water, and won the environmental protection award! Just like giving, even though you get nothing, it may be a great help to others!

The students in the fourth group actually caught small fish and shrimp and won the accident award! Just like life, although it is difficult to fail, as long as you persevere, you may have unexpected gains.

This simple game makes us understand that in fact, there is no fixed pattern of success or failure, and there are different benefits from different perspectives: the bamboo basket may not be empty!