Modify the sick sentence to help the little brother 5

Suddenly, a heavy rain shot down like an arrow from the string It's a sick sentence.

Remove it the same, and say it's the same.

It is the sick sentence "Two old and new societies, what a stark contrast!" Aren't the "two old and new societies" becoming four societies? The word order should be adjusted and changed to: The old and new societies are really a stark contrast!

1) Suddenly, a heavy rain shoots down like an arrow from the string It's a sick sentence. The metaphor is incorrect. It should be changed to: Suddenly, the raindrops fell like arrows off the string.

2) The old and new societies are really a stark contrast

It's not a sick sentence.

1) It's a sick sentence. It should be said that "the raindrops fell like arrows off the string".

2) It is a sick sentence. It should be changed to "the old and new societies are really contrasting." ”

1) It is a sick sentence, obviously, "an arrow off the string" is usually one, and to describe the straight and fast "heavy rain" is to refer to the whole. Changed to: Suddenly, a heavy rain fell from the sky.

2) It is not a sick sentence.

1) is a sick sentence, changed to: Suddenly, a downpour fell from the sky.

2) It is a sick sentence, and it is changed to: There is really a sharp contrast between the old and new societies.

Suddenly, a heavy rain shot straight down

The old and new societies are really a stark contrast

Modify the sentence: 1Xiaohong was honorably awarded the title of "Outstanding Young Pioneer". The three words "title" at the back are gone.

Changed to the word "be": she uses such a moving tone to depict the world she "sees" in her heart.

The world she "sees" in her heart is depicted by her in such a moving tone.

Changed to the word "put": she uses such a moving tone to depict the world she "sees" in her heart.

She depicts the world she "sees" in her heart in such a moving tone.

1 This painful experience finally made him realize that he had changed his past wrongs2 The dandelion fluttered in the wind, and I saw that it was decorating the world with a unique beauty.3 After three years of hard study, he was full of confidence in being admitted to the ideal high school.4 These activities, which are deeply loved by students, have enhanced and cultivated students' sense of ownership.5 We must take improving people's livelihood, ensuring people's livelihood, and paying attention to people's livelihood as the purpose and starting point of all work.6 Suzhou garden pruning and planting forests are also focused on painting.

7. All primary and secondary schools should improve and establish a campus safety prevention work mechanism.

1. Remove the pain and change the past.

2. Remove the word "dang".

3. Remove "can".

4. Changed to "cultivate and enhance".

5 "Origin and Purpose".

6 "Plant and prune".

7 ""Establish and improve.

2 When the dandelion flutters in the wind, I see that it is decorating the world with a unique beauty.3 After three years of hard study, he is full of confidence that he will be admitted to the ideal high school.4 These activities, which are deeply loved by students, have enhanced and cultivated students' sense of ownership.5 We should pay attention to people's livelihood, improve people's livelihood, and protect people's livelihood as the purpose and starting point of all work.7 Primary and secondary schools in all regions should establish and improve the campus safety prevention work mechanism.1 and 6 Not very good.

1.It finally dawned on him.

2.Delete the word "when" or "order".

3.Delete "no".

4.Improper word order. It should be cultivated first and then enhanced.

5.Pay attention to people's livelihood first, then protect people's livelihood, and finally improve people's livelihood.

6.for "planting and pruning".

7.Replace with "build and improve".

1: This painful experience made him realize that he had changed his ways.

(1) Through unremitting efforts, China's scientific and technological personnel have realized key genome sequencing and assembly analysis by using powerful super servers, and have taken the lead in completing the rice genome database and "working framework diagram" in the world.

2) "Human security" is a new concept for the APEC meeting, involving counter-terrorism, natural disasters, disease, energy security and other fields, and participants will actively communicate and discuss it as the most important topic.

3) According to the possibility of increasing poultry consumption during the Spring Festival and frequent long-distance transportation, the relevant departments hope to gradually promote centralized slaughtering and the listing of white-striped chickens to reduce the chance of infection of live poultry to humans.

(1) Delete the word "has" in the words "realized" and "completed".

2) Replace "to" with "for" or "yes for APEC meetings" with "yes for APEC meetings".

3) Add "policy" after "white chicken listing".

1 Realized and first completed missing object.

2 True ** is a completely new concept False.

3. The object of centralized promotion is incorrect.

2."The most important" and "one" conflict, choose one or the other